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#41 Offline Katoris

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Posted Mar 03 2014 - 05:16 AM

I'm sure everyone has been waiting for this.

 

Takori Meets Mr. Freeloader

 

~Katoris


Edited by Katoris, Mar 03 2014 - 05:18 AM.

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#42 Offline BlueFire

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Posted Mar 03 2014 - 09:59 AM

So how does he feel bout Halloween? Great job with it all although I think Katoris should be a bit more kind to the random people that come into his house ;) keep it up!

Edited by Tahukan The TaVo-Matoran, Mar 03 2014 - 09:59 AM.

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Posted Mar 04 2014 - 12:04 AM

Oh boi. Better find a way out of this before Katoris comes in and throws steaming hot tea at you. :P


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#44 Offline Katoris

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Posted Mar 04 2014 - 07:29 AM

To tell the truth, what annoys me are anime cosplayers and some certain videogame cosplayers.

 

Oh boi. Better find a way out of this before Katoris comes in and throws steaming hot tea at you. :P

 That'd be a waste of tea! 

 

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#45 Offline Katoris

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Posted Mar 06 2014 - 05:08 AM

New Comic!

 

First Mistake, Freeloader

 

I have my next comic planned out, and half-done.

 

~Katoris


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Posted Mar 06 2014 - 11:18 AM

Yes tiss i the brave and kind defender of the strange and insane
Tahukan. Great job on that you got me down to an A Good deed to you 

Gentleman!


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#47 Offline Katoris

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Posted Mar 19 2014 - 02:23 AM

New Comic! Finally.

 

Boredom

 

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Posted Mar 19 2014 - 10:27 AM

I'm not sure why, but I'm starting to get this gut feeling that somehow I'm gonna get stabbed with a katana at some point.

 

That was simply awesome, keep it up! =D


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Posted Mar 20 2014 - 07:12 AM

*hurk* WHYYY???

that was too funny! :P


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#50 Offline Katoris

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Posted Mar 20 2014 - 10:31 AM

I'm not sure why, but I'm starting to get this gut feeling that somehow I'm gonna get stabbed with a katana at some point.

 

Most likely.


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#51 Offline Damaracx Caratas Xarian

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Posted Mar 22 2014 - 04:45 PM

Holy Karz!  I've been waiting to see these up for a while!  I hadn't even noticed that they'd been up for...well, the amount of time they've been up for.

 

Was it worth the wait?

 

Oh-ho Karz yeah; it was!  You put a rather expansive amount of thought into these comics; I can tell.  You're no noob.  I hadn't even acknowledge my own crediting until just recently.  Thanks, Katoris and keep up the good work.  I'll await anxiously for your skill to proliferate even more.


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#52 Offline Katoris

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Posted Mar 22 2014 - 07:17 PM

Holy Karz!  I've been waiting to see these up for a while!  I hadn't even noticed that they'd been up for...well, the amount of time they've been up for.

 

Was it worth the wait?

 

Oh-ho Karz yeah; it was!  You put a rather expansive amount of thought into these comics; I can tell.  You're no noob.  I hadn't even acknowledge my own crediting until just recently.  Thanks, Katoris and keep up the good work.  I'll await anxiously for your skill to proliferate even more.

 

Thanks, Damaracx! And nice to see you again!


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#53 Offline Katoris

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Posted Apr 01 2014 - 05:17 AM

New Comic!

 

April Fools' Day!

 

~Katoris


Edited by Katoris, Apr 01 2014 - 02:21 PM.

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Posted Apr 01 2014 - 08:01 AM

Wow you captured me perfectly in that comic caus i would have done exzactly that


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Posted Apr 01 2014 - 04:29 PM

Well, I'm going to start reveiwing these comics individually.

@Comic 1: Wow, nice backgrounds. I see you're working GIMP quite well. I like how you've been carrying that cup around every where. You like tea too! I didn't think I'd find another tea-lover. XD

Great start. These comic started out way better than mine.

Keep up the good work!


Edited by Damaracx Ultimate, Apr 02 2014 - 01:28 AM.

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#56 Offline Katoris

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Posted Apr 01 2014 - 09:40 PM

Well, I'm going to start reveiwing these comics individually.

@Comic 1: Wow, nice backgrounds. I see you're working GIMP quite well. I like how you've been carrying that cup around every where. You like tea too! I didn't think I'd find another tea-lover. XD

Great start. These comic started out way better than mine.

Keep up the good!

 

Thanks! I have been making lots of plans for this series, to hopefully start an interesting arc. I just need to find names for a female and a male!


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Posted Apr 02 2014 - 01:23 AM

@Comic 2:  Takori-  The center and epitome of cast abuse.  XD

 

Like I said on the first comic basically-everything looks good.  I see you use the 'smudge' effect for blurs.  There's also a few others in the 'Filter' section such as the motion blur try to see if you can that or some of the others included within the blur section or stick with smudge.  It all simply comes down to personal preferences, but remember to experiment with GIMP's effects when you get the chance.  You might be able to discover something cool!

 

Keep up the good work, Katoris!


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#58 Offline Katoris

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Posted Apr 12 2014 - 09:48 PM

I'm going to try and make a comic soon this week, so stay tuned.

 

Also, I won first in Tahukan's Comic Contest and I get to co-author 3 comics, so look out for those.  ;)


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Posted Apr 13 2014 - 10:14 AM

@Comic 3: You've also got PGS abuse? I freaking love this comic series!
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Posted May 13 2014 - 08:08 PM

@Comic 3: You've also got PGS abuse? I freaking love this comic series!


Yes and I'm his favorite target! Which makes me.. I'm at a loss for words. Punching bag?

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#61 Offline Katoris

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Posted May 15 2014 - 09:57 AM

Training "dummy".  :D  I'm going to see if I can whip something up this weekend. No promises.

Eventually I'm going to bring my character's insanity to a different level.


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Posted May 18 2014 - 07:29 PM

@April Fools Day Comic: Reverse, Reverse Psychology? It feels like the end of Death Note...
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Posted May 19 2014 - 09:44 AM

@April Fools Day Comic: Reverse, Reverse Psychology? It feels like the end of Death Note...

 

Never seen it. Glad you enjoyed!


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Posted May 19 2014 - 10:10 AM

@Comic 4:  Funny thing considering I confused those two once...


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Posted Jun 05 2014 - 10:09 AM

Finally, a new comic! Been a while!

 

The Torture Room

 

~Katoris


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Posted Jun 05 2014 - 11:22 AM

Finally, a new comic! Been a while!

 

The Torture Room

 

~Katoris

 

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

the best part is that you can't see anything XD


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Posted Jun 06 2014 - 01:34 AM

Finally, a new comic! Been a while!

 

The Torture Room

 

~Katoris

 

I love how you used only dialogue to create this genius-ness.


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Posted Jun 06 2014 - 11:41 PM

Finally, a new comic! Been a while!
 
The Torture Room
 
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Was that... Me? In the closet?

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Posted Jun 07 2014 - 07:17 AM

 

Finally, a new comic! Been a while!
 
The Torture Room
 
~Katoris

Was that... Me? In the closet?

 

As you know I always refer to you as freeloader, so no.


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Posted Jun 15 2014 - 08:40 PM

Finally, a new comic! Been a while!

 

The Torture Room

 

~Katoris

 

Hi I'm new to these comics. 

 

And as feedback, I would've loved to have actually seen the characters go at it behind the door. Not be hidden behind it. :(

 

It would add more character and made it worth reading. Cause when they're behind the door, in this particular instance, it seems more like an excuse to be lazy. I'm not judging that you were, just suggesting. 


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#71 Offline Katoris

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Posted Jun 15 2014 - 10:20 PM

One day I'll probably reveal what's behind the door, when I can make the torture devices.

To tell the truth, it was pretty much laziness that it wasn't revealed, so I don't really mind what you say.


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Posted Jun 28 2014 - 10:23 PM

Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques.

 

Thanks.


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Posted Jun 29 2014 - 10:34 AM

Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques.

 

Thanks.

 

Well I'll be honest, I didn't read all your comics at first, but now I did. 

 

So withe visuals, I think you know what you're doing. You're really good with gimp or photoshop or whatever you use. So I don't think you need feedback on that. 

 

 

Story wise however I think needs work.

 

So to begin, if your series is being taken this seriously, you should definitely hold to your standard to make good fun story arcs. However, I'm not sure if the overall tone of your series so far is fun and exciting.

 

Kortis's (or you in this case) always seems like he's peeved with everybody. When it comes to comics and comedy, anything could be funny if done right. However, it feels that since you've surrounded the series around Kortis being peeved with everyone around him, it's more annoying and discouraging to me as the reader. So I think you need a happy character, or at least, you should bring another one that will change Kortis for the better. Cause the flow of the comics is that Kortis is bored, everyone annoys him, and he can never get to his tea that he's inexplicably attached to. 

 

Also as a side note that everyone can grow on I think.

When it comes to comics with the "PGSs vs the Author" genre, what the heck does that entail? Does this mean, the author produces comics elsewhere off screen but is never recorded and the PGSs are there to...be interviewed? Interviewed for what?

 

I don't think your comics are stupid. We're all comic makers, therefore we're all gonna take it seriously. And the comic section is to provide enjoyable strips to read on a daily/weekly bases. And I believe your comics have potential! But don't take all of what I've said as an excuse to not continue. My next implore for you is that you except what I've incited, take what you want, and then change what you think should change. I can't rewrite your comics for you, but I do believe it does need some more work in the story aspect. I won't go into the specific details, but I think I've already generalized in the above statements. 

 

How's that critique?


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Posted Jul 01 2014 - 10:50 PM

 

Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques.

 

Thanks.

 

Well I'll be honest, I didn't read all your comics at first, but now I did. 

 

So withe visuals, I think you know what you're doing. You're really good with gimp or photoshop or whatever you use. So I don't think you need feedback on that. 

 

 

Story wise however I think needs work.

 

So to begin, if your series is being taken this seriously, you should definitely hold to your standard to make good fun story arcs. However, I'm not sure if the overall tone of your series so far is fun and exciting.

 

Kortis's (or you in this case) always seems like he's peeved with everybody. When it comes to comics and comedy, anything could be funny if done right. However, it feels that since you've surrounded the series around Kortis being peeved with everyone around him, it's more annoying and discouraging to me as the reader. So I think you need a happy character, or at least, you should bring another one that will change Kortis for the better. Cause the flow of the comics is that Kortis is bored, everyone annoys him, and he can never get to his tea that he's inexplicably attached to. 

 

Also as a side note that everyone can grow on I think.

When it comes to comics with the "PGSs vs the Author" genre, what the heck does that entail? Does this mean, the author produces comics elsewhere off screen but is never recorded and the PGSs are there to...be interviewed? Interviewed for what?

 

I don't think your comics are stupid. We're all comic makers, therefore we're all gonna take it seriously. And the comic section is to provide enjoyable strips to read on a daily/weekly bases. And I believe your comics have potential! But don't take all of what I've said as an excuse to not continue. My next implore for you is that you except what I've incited, take what you want, and then change what you think should change. I can't rewrite your comics for you, but I do believe it does need some more work in the story aspect. I won't go into the specific details, but I think I've already generalized in the above statements. 

 

How's that critique?

 

 

This is very helpful to me. I really appreciate it. I'll review it thoroughly later, and work on it. 


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