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#161 Offline Rahkshi Guurahk

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 01:22 AM

I want to see both die then. :P


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:00 AM

Pretty sure that now :m::a::k::u::t::a: :l::u::r::m_o::k::a: is going to be the last traitor to be lynched before Sumiki.


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#163 Offline Voltex

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 09:01 AM

Ah, yes... I find it interesting, iBrow, that Xaeraz is the deceitful master liar, and you are the good-motived hero.
Not saying Xae is normally a hero, but you are normally quite the... well, you know.

Great story so far.

You obviously missed the part where Voltex admitted that he helped to design this death trap. That scene was from his POV, remember - at this point in time, he does believe he's all sunshine and daisies. 

 

But of course, we all know better. ;)

 

I think by the end you'll be surprised.

 

 

I wanted an .45 caliber handgun!

Then again, the shotgun could shoot .45 caliber bullets.

Fired a .45 once, had a really strong kick. Also I don't think shotguns shoot .45, but don't quote me. I'm probably wrong about seeing as I've fired is a 12 gauge.

Anyway, that bit with meeting Pupwa was just... weird and maybe surreal. Had to read it over a few times to comprehend what I had just read. Glad to know I'm still relevant, granted it could be Xaeraz running around pretending to be me.

Also I need to do this:

BANG. BANG.

You shot me down.

BANG.BANG.

I hit the ground

BANG.

...

BANG

That awful sound.

Sorry just saw that and couldn't resist. One nitpicky thing: the first five bangs are italicized and in all caps while the sixth is only in all caps. I think you need to make the sixth italicized to remain consistent.

 

I'll go back and fix that; thanks for catching it.

I had to make Pupwa surreal, I just couldn't resist

 

If Zakaro dies, Pupwa has become all-powerful in Pupwa'ness

 

If Pupwa dies, I think his body will explode in a cloud of confetti

I don't think anyone would explode in confetti

After all, we must keep things slightly realistic.


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 09:03 AM

iBrow is talking about keeping BIONICLE realistic...


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#165 Offline Voltex

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 09:05 AM

iBrow is talking about keeping BIONICLE realistic...

Even in Bionicle people don't explode into confetti when they die, sooooo


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 09:08 AM

 

iBrow is talking about keeping BIONICLE realistic...

Even in Bionicle people don't explode into confetti when they die, sooooo

 

983,911 lb 4'7" people would cause structural damage by standing, and would be very much unaffected by modern firearms, but I'm willing to suspend disbelief for sake of the plot.


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 09:33 AM

I was not expecting me or Vox to survive... and of course, Pupwa is speaking Pupwese as always. Tahukan will be avenged... someday... and of course, I'm probably not helping my 'not a traitor' case by threatening to strangle Sumiki in front of the others. Vox at least will get to live. 

 

Things are getting really interesting! Prediction for the future chapters: Almost Everybody Dies.


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#168 Offline Voltex

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 09:35 AM

 

 

iBrow is talking about keeping BIONICLE realistic...

Even in Bionicle people don't explode into confetti when they die, sooooo

 

983,911 lb 4'7" people would cause structural damage by standing, and would be very much unaffected by modern firearms, but I'm willing to suspend disbelief for sake of the plot.

 

Except you weigh as much as the average Matoran here

Sorry to burst your bubble

y'know

realism

 

I was not expecting me or Vox to survive... and of course, Pupwa is speaking Pupwese as always. Tahukan will be avenged... someday... and of course, I'm probably not helping my 'not a traitor' case by threatening to strangle Sumiki in front of the others. Vox at least will get to live. 

 

Things are getting really interesting! Prediction for the future chapters: Almost Everybody Dies.

oh my god how did you know???


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 03:11 PM

Hmm. Have you read James Dashner's Maze Runner, by any chance, iBrow?
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#170 Offline Voltex

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 03:22 PM

Hmm. Have you read James Dashner's Maze Runner, by any chance, iBrow?

Indeed I have


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 05:17 PM

quick

jim

make giant fleshy blob monsters with pokey things kill people then


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#172 Offline Regicidal Kaiser Manducus

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 07:44 PM

No.

 

NO.

 

NOOOOOO!!!

 

 

Someone, avenge me.


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#173 Offline Ehksidian

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 07:51 PM

No.

 

NO.

 

NOOOOOO!!!

 

 

Someone, avenge me.

no.

no one will avenge you.


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#174 Offline Regicidal Kaiser Manducus

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 07:54 PM

I was wrongly accused!

 

And I had a good run too.


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#175 Offline Voltex

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:07 PM

No.

 

NO.

 

NOOOOOO!!!

 

 

Someone, avenge me.

ok

I will avenge you


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:09 PM

So Unit's gonna die next?


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#177 Offline Voltex

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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:11 PM

So Unit's gonna die next?

Why on earth would Unit die next

I mean, it's certainly possible

But then

It's possible that anyone could be next, except for Sumiki, who would currently survive any attempts made upon his life


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:12 PM

Yes.

Sumiki cannot die until every other mafian d-

...

welp i just thought of how bad it's going to be for sumiki then.


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:13 PM

Missing </sarc> tag there, Jim.


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:14 PM

Missing </sarc> tag there, Jim.

oi i'm the one who calls him jim

don't copy me >:(


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:43 PM

Then I will call him Bob.
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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 08:45 PM

And I will call him Jimbo.


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Posted Mar 27 2014 - 10:50 PM

I may call him miJ then. :P


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Posted Apr 01 2014 - 08:13 PM

I'd call him by his actual name, but I don't know if he's appreciate that. So I stick with calling him iBrow.

 

 

Hmm. Have you read James Dashner's Maze Runner, by any chance, iBrow?

Indeed I have

 

Alright. I think I know what you mean about Voltex's role, then.

 

 

quick

jim

make giant fleshy blob monsters with pokey things kill people then

Did you hear they're making a movie?
The trailer looks interesting, though I'm not exactly happy with the choice of actor for Thomas.


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Posted Apr 01 2014 - 08:14 PM

I'd call him by his actual name, but I don't know if he's appreciate that. So I stick with calling him iBrow.

 

 

Hmm. Have you read James Dashner's Maze Runner, by any chance, iBrow?

Indeed I have

 

Alright. I think I know what you mean about Voltex's role, then.

 

 

quick

jim

make giant fleshy blob monsters with pokey things kill people then

Did you hear they're making a movie?
The trailer looks interesting, though I'm not exactly happy with the choice of actor for Thomas.

Get on skype and we'll see if you're correct. :P


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Posted Apr 04 2014 - 06:28 PM

About that chapter....?

:P


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Posted Apr 04 2014 - 06:43 PM

About that chapter....?

:P

rg hush and be patient.


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Posted Apr 04 2014 - 06:47 PM

 

About that chapter....?

:P

rg hush and be patient.

Words to live by

 

 

Also, considering Voltex's rename, I'm expecting the same from the rest of you Bravely Default folks


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Posted Apr 04 2014 - 06:49 PM

 

 

About that chapter....?

:P

rg hush and be patient.

Words to live by

 

 

Also, considering Voltex's rename, I'm expecting the same from the rest of you Bravely Default folks

 

you're crazy


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Posted Apr 04 2014 - 06:56 PM

Or you could just fuse with each other

 

And be Voltehks JiBlade

 

But that'd be crazy too

 

(And it's also entirely irrelevant, not sure why I'm mentioning it)


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Posted Apr 04 2014 - 10:43 PM

Or you could just fuse with each other

 

And be Voltehks JiBlade

 

But that'd be crazy too

 

(And it's also entirely irrelevant, not sure why I'm mentioning it)

I want to see the "Voltehks JiBlade" :P


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Posted Apr 04 2014 - 10:52 PM

 

Or you could just fuse with each other

 

And be Voltehks JiBlade

 

But that'd be crazy too

 

(And it's also entirely irrelevant, not sure why I'm mentioning it)

I want to see the "Voltehks JiBlade" :P

 

It's only the most highly sophisticated weapon ever. 

 

Anyway, to get back on topic, I'm not sure how Voltex is going to resolve this in a chapter. Like the general confusion, and that the deaths are treated with appropriate amount of gravitas. It seems like everyone is trying to kill Voltex at this point, so either he's going to emerge very victorious in a possibly bloody victory (he might, that retired Bionifighter) or die. 

 

I'll try to find some time to post a full nitpicky review when the final chapter is posted. 


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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 06:09 PM

Chapter 7 - With five more dead, Voltex prepares to hunt down the final traitor.

 

Sorry about the wait, everyone!


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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 06:21 PM

Reluctantly, Voltex raised his arm, pointing his palm at the Onu-Matoran, but stoppind as Zakaro held a hand up in the air.

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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 06:35 PM

I am dead... Took longer than expected, but RNG seems to like me. =P

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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 06:39 PM

Another fantastic chapter, as usual, iBrow. 

Well, I guess I wasn't the Armed Matoran, after all. Oh well, Traitor isn't half-bad. :P

Not to mention that I was the only one who said no. Considering I said it...

 


“As for the explanation... I was the only one to refuse, Voltex.”

 

“Refuse what?”

 

“My place in the traitors,” Zakaro snapped. “I was the only one. Do you understand, Tex?”

 

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“Voltex, I need to know that you understand,” the Onu-Matoran said. “You need to understand that I am the only one that said no.

 

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“Before you shoot, I do need to tell you two things,” the Onu-Matoran said. “The first is a repeat: no matter what happens, Tex, remember that I was the only one who said no.”

..At least that many times, I'm assuming that's important.  :P Juuust maybe.

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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 07:21 PM

...I'm assuming that's important.  :P Juuust maybe.

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Though I can't quite put my finger on why.


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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 08:41 PM

I KNEW IT.

I WAS THE LE MATORAN AT THE PRELUDE.

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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 08:43 PM

I KNEW IT.

I WAS THE LE MATORAN AT THE PRELUDE.

Yes. Yes you were.

And we're in the final stretch...who will live, who will die? Who will try to stay alive?

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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 09:10 PM

Aww.. Well apparently I had a good run. Being the spy ain't bad at all and something I could see myself as. While I wish there was perhaps a bit more of an epic death besides 'Shotgun to the chest' but eh apparently he had a good run.


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