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#201 Offline The Pulsating of the Heart

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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 09:38 PM

Very surprised to see Vox die... but I was right about him being the spy! 

 

Dead People: 

Shadowhawk

Flaredrick

Scanty

Norik - TRAITOR

Chro

Manducus

Tahukan - INVENTOR

Pupwa - ARMED MATORAN

Zakaro - TRAITOR

Voxumo - SPY

JiMing - INVENTOR

Kayn - GHOST

 

Known Roles:

Voltex - DETECTIVE

Ehks - MEDIC

Sumiki - LEADER

Everyone but Final Traitor - MATORAN

FInal Traitor - TRAITOR

 

12 people dead or so far, I probably missed a few. Lots of death in this recent chapter. I can only assume the rate of deaths will keep accelerating, Because when there's one unknown traitor left, it will take a while. 


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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 09:40 PM

Very surprised to see Vox die... but I was right about him being the spy! 

 

Dead People: 

Shadowhawk

Flaredrick

Scanty

Norik - TRAITOR

Chro

Manducus

Tahukan - INVENTOR

Pupwa - ARMED MATORAN

Zakaro - TRAITOR

Voxumo - SPY

JiMing - INVENTOR

Kayn - GHOST

 

Known Roles:

Voltex - DETECTIVE

Ehks - MEDIC

Sumiki - LEADER

Everyone but Final Traitor - MATORAN

FInal Traitor - TRAITOR

 

12 people dead or so far, I probably missed a few. Lots of death in this recent chapter. I can only assume the rate of deaths will keep accelerating, Because when there's one unknown traitor left, it will take a while. 

Doesn't Sumiki count as the final traitor?


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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 09:58 PM

He's their leader, so I was considering the Final Traitor as the last traitor that isn't Sumiki. 

 

I can imagine in-universe Sumiki is very displeased by these recent developments that only two traitors total are left.


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Posted Apr 06 2014 - 11:35 PM

Oh man this is good. This is so good. I haven't had the time to devote to reading this because I knew that once I started I couldn't possibly stop and I was right.
 
And I'm not saying that from the perspective of seeing myself in such an awesome, manipulative role, it's a legit, compelling story all the way around. I especially love the little touches - hats and farm animals go a long way.
 
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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 03:06 AM

'Tis worth the wait... SO MUCH BLOOD -- er, I mean -- this is my favorite chapter so far! Honestly, this is getting even better and better. And better.

 

And I said a line! Yay!


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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 06:59 AM

If and when Voltex kills Sumiki (or vice versa) he's going to ask "How often do you dream about farm animals?", right?


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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 09:47 AM

I can't believe that the guess I made that Kayn was the one who shot Ehks was correct! Analysis at it's finest mwahaha!

 

I'm glad I was taken out by the hands of Voltex, I'd hate for Kayn to be killed through fear or distrust by lynching. His last words have to be true.

 


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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 09:53 AM

you know for some odd reason i want to say either shadowhawk or chro is the last traitor


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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 10:31 AM

Wait, I thought I was dead

 

And Shadowhawk is definitely dead


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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 10:37 AM

Wait, I thought I was dead

 

And Shadowhawk is definitely dead

Oh.. I was reading the list wrong above.. my bad


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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 12:09 PM

 

Wait, I thought I was dead

 

And Shadowhawk is definitely dead

Oh.. I was reading the list wrong above.. my bad

 

That is why it is going to be so hard to find them.

 

They're already dead.

 

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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 02:33 PM

I've been following this since it started but haven't said anything until now -- I gotta say, this is really intense. Especially with the Final Traitor being unknown. I have a theory on who it is, but I'm keeping mum about it for now. ;) But yes, Sumiki is an excellent villain so far.


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Posted Apr 08 2014 - 07:57 AM

I like that I have to try to figure out how to read the chapter tommorow with my schedule this week. :P

Well hope it's as good as the rest. Actually better. :P


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Posted Apr 08 2014 - 09:52 AM

Seriously, the Ghost could be already dead... that'd make more sense, in all honesty.

 

It would be nice if I was the Ghost. However, Sumiki having crossed off my name basically proves that I was not.


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Posted Apr 08 2014 - 11:51 AM

Seriously, the Ghost could be already dead... that'd make more sense, in all honesty.

 

It would be nice if I was the Ghost. However, Sumiki having crossed off my name basically proves that I was not.

The Ghost of this universe does not function like the role that existed in Darkest Dawn, although it was influenced by it. What sets this Ghost apart is that they have technology allowing them to survive their own demise, but otherwise they are clearly labelled as a villain.


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 04:42 PM

First one to read chapter 8.

I think.

So it was Lurka who was responsible for keeping every one inside, right?

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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 04:51 PM

First one to read chapter 8.

I think.

So it was Lurka who was responsible for keeping every one inside, right?

 

Yes, Luroka was the party responsible for the shadow walls.


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 05:54 PM

CALLED IT!


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 06:16 PM

Wow. Kayn never lied when he said "You're all in over your heads."

 

Sumiki and Luroka are some sneaky little matoran. 

 

Talking about Matoran, what generation are they supposed to be? I always imagine them being '01 Matoran but when it gets to the action/violent parts it makes me laugh a bit at the thought of the little guys shooting holes in each other. So yeah, '01, '03, or '05?


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 06:24 PM

I suppose they'd probably be '04 generation, but I picture them as being similar in structure to this guy.


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 06:39 PM

Luroka looks like this:Fg0teTE.png


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 07:10 PM

So there were actually more traitors than there were supposed to be?

I'm not sure what to think about this turn of events but w/e


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 07:23 PM

So there were actually more traitors than there were supposed to be?

I'm not sure what to think about this turn of events but w/e

 

No, Luroka never had a "role" in the game; he just helped to make sure that the game would indeed occur. 


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 07:29 PM

The last scene kinda made me think of the RTAA "The Podcast King", where Gus battles the Fulcrum.

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Posted Apr 22 2014 - 08:33 PM

Epilogue - One in hiding; One going mad; One giving in; and One with dark secrets.

 

And that's it for Book 1!

 

I would pay attention to some of the stuff in italics during the first sequence; some of it will play an important part later on. ;)

Some buildup in here for Book 2, of course - as to when Book 2 will launch... well, I have no idea. I intend to spend more time perfecting Book 2 than I did with Book 1, so we'll see!

 

Until then, I suggest you all keep your eyes peeled; there's some other stuff on the way while you wait for Book 2. ;)


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Posted Apr 22 2014 - 08:39 PM

I just have one thing to say:

Pliers are the best medical tool ever.


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Posted Apr 23 2014 - 07:05 AM

I just have one thing to say:

Pliers are the best medical tool ever.

I agree, Ehks is now The Doctor, with pliers rather than a sonic screwdriver. :P


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Posted Apr 23 2014 - 07:37 AM

Disregard sonic screwdrivers, acquire pliers.


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Posted Apr 24 2014 - 07:08 AM

I guess Ehks is a Makuta or something then?

 

At least us Matoran had nothing too bad happen to us.

 

SURVIVORS:

 

Voltex

Ehks

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Luroka

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Pulse

Portalgif

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Everyone outside of all this (such as Rahkshi Guurahk and Burnmad)

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Posted Apr 24 2014 - 07:50 AM

I think Ehks is supposed to be an av-matoran or something.


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Posted Apr 24 2014 - 10:08 AM

That's not really something to hide though, is it?

 

It's probably something darker. Much darker.


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Posted Apr 24 2014 - 10:50 AM

I guess Ehks is a Makuta or something then?

 

At least us Matoran had nothing too bad happen to us.

 

SURVIVORS:

 

Voltex

Ehks

Sumiki

Luroka

Locke

Pulse

Portalgif

TBK

Lhikevikk

Xaeraz

Everyone outside of all this (such as Rahkshi Guurahk and Burnmad)

The Next Epic's Matoran

 

Did I miss anyone? 

 

You're missing Kayn.

 

You'll find out all of the secrets Ehks holds in Book 2. ;)


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Posted Apr 24 2014 - 12:07 PM

That's not really something to hide though, is it?

There is a makuta. It is undoubtedly something to hide.


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Posted Apr 25 2014 - 05:08 AM

I finally got around catching up with everything, and wow, it was really worth the read! All the things hinted to in the epilogue make for a promising start for book 2, imo. :3


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Posted Jun 14 2014 - 12:23 PM

In the INTERLUDE, a heist goes exactly as planned! Who could this mystery Matoran be?


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Posted Jun 14 2014 - 03:09 PM

It's probably [REDACTED]

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Posted Jun 14 2014 - 03:24 PM

It's probably [REDACTED]

:P

 

I really wish I knew which name you had edited out.


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Posted Jun 24 2014 - 07:52 PM

 

It's probably [REDACTED]

:P

 

I really wish I knew which name you had edited out.

 

I'll PM you, as I thought that it may actually be right. =P


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Posted Jun 25 2014 - 11:17 AM

Just started reading this, and I'm loving it so far. Very well written, and I'm always tempted to keep reading even when I know I shouldn't. :b


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Posted Jun 25 2014 - 11:45 AM

Just started reading this, and I'm loving it so far. Very well written, and I'm always tempted to keep reading even when I know I shouldn't. :b


Glad you're enjoying it so far! I'm currently hard at work on the sequel (or as hard as I can be while without access to my computer), so hopefully you won't have to wait too long for more.

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