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In the End: Review Topic

Dawn Duology The Shikaverse Shika Trilogy Dimension Hoppers Finale

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#1 Offline TNTOS

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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 08:59 AM

Welcome, all, to the review topic of my most recent (and last) epic, In the End. Read the epic itself here.
 
This epic will serve not only as the finale to the Dawn Duology (consisting of this epic and the last, Dawn of the New Century), but will also serve as the finale to my Bionicle fanfic universe (aka the Shikaverse) in general. It's been a fun ride, but I feel the Shikaverse's time has come.
 
The entire epic will be 20 chapters long when posted entirely (not counting the prologue). The schedule will be once chapter a week every Monday, so remember to check back every Monday for a new chapter! (Unless there is a problem that prevents me from posting a chapter, in which case I will make note of it in this review topic or in my blog.)
 
There's not much to say here, except that I suggest reading Dawn of the New Century first, if you haven't already. Some familiarity with the Shikaverse in general would help, but it's really only Dawn that you need to read first, which can be found here.

Comments, criticism, reviews, etc. are all welcome :) .

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Edited by TNTOS, Apr 07 2014 - 08:59 AM.

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#2 Offline Akavakaku

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Posted Jun 11 2014 - 06:33 PM

I'm excited to see how the end of this turns out! But so far the Kra-Matoran just seem like they're in the background.
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#3 Offline TNTOS

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Posted Jun 11 2014 - 07:03 PM

I'm excited to see how the end of this turns out! But so far the Kra-Matoran just seem like they're in the background.


Yeah, the Kra-Matoran aren't super important in this fic. I just couldn't figure out a way to make them more prominent without making the story way too long *shrug*.

But I'm happy to see you're excited for it anyway.

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Posted Jun 16 2014 - 10:26 PM

The appearance of the Wanderer was a little unpredictable (did she appear in an earlier series?) but well handled. It's a little close to a deus ex machina but avoids it by having her have no obvious benefit. And her Solek-like attitude is enjoyable.


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#5 Offline TNTOS

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Posted Jun 17 2014 - 08:42 AM

The appearance of the Wanderer was a little unpredictable (did she appear in an earlier series?) but well handled. It's a little close to a deus ex machina but avoids it by having her have no obvious benefit. And her Solek-like attitude is enjoyable.


Yes, Wanderer first appeared in Tapestry of Evil, the second book in the Shika Trilogy (she basically sums up her role in that epic when she tells Ruby and Cina about her past experiences in Wyoko). Glad you like her. I always enjoyed writing her myself.

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Posted Jul 16 2014 - 12:56 PM

Haha, I loved the interaction between Masquoth and Night.
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Posted Jul 22 2014 - 02:57 AM

Living sand? Did it escape from Artidax?
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Posted Jul 22 2014 - 11:38 AM

Living sand? Did it escape from Artidax?


Maybe. I'm not sure. I didn't give that part very much thought.

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