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#1 Offline KittehWubbins

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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 06:10 PM

My brother let be borrow his phone so I took some pics of a MOC of mine.

 

This is more of a *ifailedatmyfirstideasoigaveupandwhippedpeicestogethertomakethis* sort of MOC.

 

Ugh, pictures never work for me, so I'll just leave a link. http://imgur.com/nau...Kv6Ople,tV0onXv

There are 6 pictures, just click the numbers on top to look at the others.

 

Yes, The Rahkshi head is damaged. Got it in a lot and I suspect a dog chewed on it. Besides, it gives it a more worn and "battle damaged" look.

 

I know it is not the greatest, and I am likely going to take it apart and retry. Leave any comments or suggestions, it means alot.

 

Thanks

 

-KittehWubbins


Edited by KittehWubbins, Apr 07 2014 - 06:12 PM.

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I am building Alphonse Elric from FMA!! Please PM me some tips, I really want to make it good.


#2 Offline LordofBionicles

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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 08:53 PM

Looks cool to me!

 

 

 

 

Edit: Please leave some more constructive feedback next time!

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Edited by -Windrider-, Apr 10 2014 - 06:58 PM.

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#3 Online ghidora131

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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 08:56 PM

For a MOC that you stuck together, it is pretty cool.

 

I would suggest rebuilding it, making the torso more humanlike, but still keeping it as a scorpion.

The tail looks a little short and flimsy, so that could require an update.

Overall, pretty good job!

 

Keep up the good work!


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Makuta of Japanese monsters that

 

destroy everything

 

 

Oversized, ain't it?

 

 


#4 Offline Pomegranate

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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 10:49 PM

It reminds me of some of the entries in the official Dark Hunters guidebook, I like it :) It looks really cool both standing up and on all 6 blades/limbs. Kinda reminds me of a scorpion. I feel like the chest is a bit exposed and has some gaps, there's lot's of room to tack on some armor or something to round it out and make it look  a little more menacing and wholesome when it's standing on its legs ^^


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#5 Offline KittehWubbins

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Posted Apr 07 2014 - 11:28 PM

Thanks so much for all the feedback! I actually plan on making his back more armored, and his belly more exposed, because you know, every big bad tough boss needs a weak spot. I may take some better pictures with a more subtle background when the real deal is finished. Thanks again everyone


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#6 Offline Phovos

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Posted Apr 08 2014 - 07:29 AM

He's nice, the limbs and head really make him. I'd recommend making the body more like a sausage rather than a flat shape, it'd really bulk him up when he;s not being a scorpion. Personally I think the tail is okay, but the hand piece thing that holds it on, if that was rotated 90 degrees, or if you added a few more black arms, it'd fit better.


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