ElevenGuy Posted April 25, 2014 Share Posted April 25, 2014 My brother, who is much younger than I, asked me to post his story after watching The Legend Reborn for the first time. I hope this is allowed xDHe drew all the pictures himself. Presenting, The Story of Mata Nui! One day, Mata Nui was walking and a Skrall came up to him. The skrall said,"Hey how are you doing? I'm gonna smack you in the face!" So Mata Nui jumped up and attacked the Skrall."Ow," said the Skrall. Mata nui hit the Skrall so hard that it crashed into a wall and died. Then more Skralls came and said,"We're gonna smack you in the face!" But then Mata Nui said,"No! I'm gonna smack YOU in YOUR face because you're the baddest!" After he smacked them in the face, Mata Nui picked up one of the Skrall and turned him into Metus. "Mata Nui, my old enemy!" Exclaimed Metus. Metus slithered into the field and found his parents. Metus' parents had been turned into Skralls by a big robot. Then Mata Nui came up to Metus and squished him with all his might. Metus was squished so hard that his mask came off. Mata Nui said,"I'm making you into a good guy right now, Metus! Metus turned into a good guy and Mata Nui gave him a fire sword. Mata Nui renamed him Ehluman. Mata Nui left to make some new friends."You should enter the Glatorian tournament!" said Mata Nui's new friends. "Ok," said Mata Nui. Mata Nui entered the tournament and won! He won both the gold metal and the second place trophy! The End. Illustrations:-Mata Nui (left) fighting an elite Skrall (right)-Metus (in snake form) 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pohatu: Uniter of Stone Posted April 25, 2014 Share Posted April 25, 2014 I like this- it brings back memories! 2 Quote I HATE SCORPIOS ~Pohatu Master of Stone, 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phovos Posted April 25, 2014 Share Posted April 25, 2014 D'aw, that's sweet. How old is your little brother? 2 Quote Click here to read The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings! Yes, I know there were 7 months between the last two episodes but oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElevenGuy Posted April 25, 2014 Author Share Posted April 25, 2014 He's 5. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted April 26, 2014 Share Posted April 26, 2014 I DON'T LIKE IT BECAUSE IT CONTRADICTS BIONICLE CANON just kiddingconsidering his age I'd say he did a wonderful job 2 Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wazdakka Posted May 10, 2014 Share Posted May 10, 2014 Cute. 2 Quote Steam Name: Toa Hahli Mahri. Xbox Live Gamertag: Makuta. Minecraft Username: ThePoohster.Wants: 2003 Jaller (from Jaller and Gukko), Exo-Toa, Turaga Nuju, Turaga Vakama, Shadow Kraata, Axonn, Brutaka, Vezon & Fenrakk, Nocturn, ORANGE FIKOU.I got rid of my picture, are you happy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeeCee Posted May 11, 2014 Share Posted May 11, 2014 (edited) Guys ... It's not cute. I think the story as many deeper meaning so please don't go calling it cute when it's a complex piece of literature. Thank you. Seriously though.What I do think is lovely though is you've shown him the film and he's loved it so much to write a story, just like we all did when we were younger. Keeping Bionicle alive. Edited May 11, 2014 by CeeCee 3 Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 250 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Doctor U Posted May 11, 2014 Share Posted May 11, 2014 This is far better than anything Greg F has written. Your brother is genious. 1 Quote Brace yourselves, Klaanon is coming... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted May 17, 2014 Share Posted May 17, 2014 Man, it reminds me of the stories I wrote back when I was a kid. It's nice to see children get into writing so early, especially for BIONICLE. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pohatu: Uniter of Stone Posted May 19, 2014 Share Posted May 19, 2014 I need to make a moc named Ehluman. With a fire sword, of course. 1 Quote I HATE SCORPIOS ~Pohatu Master of Stone, 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oroki Posted June 7, 2014 Share Posted June 7, 2014 This fanfic is gonna be huge with the fanbase. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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