Kanakalackin Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 Flickr MOCPages I love this torso. <3 Quote I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waaja Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 Like I said before for your other Toa MOC, the HF chest piece (the phantom 'h') seems kind of out of place, but I see you did it with an idea for uniformity between the toas, so that was nice... The feet are interesting, but seem kind of flat to me...This is especially so with the bulky armour on the legs, which are nice btw. Colour scheme-wise, I think there need to be more black in it. Comparing it to your other toa MOC, there is much less of the primary black colour as there is orange on the other MOC. Nice MOC, still. The torso and legs are very nice, design-wise. I like how the bohrok eye-piece pops up from under the thigh armour. Does this hinder the knee-bending, though? Quote Please do visit: My MOCs Blog: http://waajamocs.blogspot.sg/ My Writing Blog: http://waajawrites.blogspot.sg/ Font: Urban Decay by zofos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted May 14, 2014 Author Share Posted May 14, 2014 Like I said before for your other Toa MOC, the HF chest piece (the phantom 'h') seems kind of out of place, but I see you did it with an idea for uniformity between the toas, so that was nice... The feet are interesting, but seem kind of flat to me...This is especially so with the bulky armour on the legs, which are nice btw. Colour scheme-wise, I think there need to be more black in it. Comparing it to your other toa MOC, there is much less of the primary black colour as there is orange on the other MOC. Nice MOC, still. The torso and legs are very nice, design-wise. I like how the bohrok eye-piece pops up from under the thigh armour. Does this hinder the knee-bending, though? Yeah, I probably should've added more black to the legs, but it looked fine to me. The bohrok eye piece actually does not hunder the knee-bending! Quote I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waaja Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 Like I said before for your other Toa MOC, the HF chest piece (the phantom 'h') seems kind of out of place, but I see you did it with an idea for uniformity between the toas, so that was nice... The feet are interesting, but seem kind of flat to me...This is especially so with the bulky armour on the legs, which are nice btw. Colour scheme-wise, I think there need to be more black in it. Comparing it to your other toa MOC, there is much less of the primary black colour as there is orange on the other MOC. Nice MOC, still. The torso and legs are very nice, design-wise. I like how the bohrok eye-piece pops up from under the thigh armour. Does this hinder the knee-bending, though? Yeah, I probably should've added more black to the legs, but it looked fine to me. The bohrok eye piece actually does not hunder the knee-bending! That's good to hear Wait, what head are you using to hold the mask? Quote Please do visit: My MOCs Blog: http://waajamocs.blogspot.sg/ My Writing Blog: http://waajawrites.blogspot.sg/ Font: Urban Decay by zofos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted May 14, 2014 Author Share Posted May 14, 2014 Like I said before for your other Toa MOC, the HF chest piece (the phantom 'h') seems kind of out of place, but I see you did it with an idea for uniformity between the toas, so that was nice... The feet are interesting, but seem kind of flat to me...This is especially so with the bulky armour on the legs, which are nice btw. Colour scheme-wise, I think there need to be more black in it. Comparing it to your other toa MOC, there is much less of the primary black colour as there is orange on the other MOC. Nice MOC, still. The torso and legs are very nice, design-wise. I like how the bohrok eye-piece pops up from under the thigh armour. Does this hinder the knee-bending, though? Yeah, I probably should've added more black to the legs, but it looked fine to me. The bohrok eye piece actually does not hunder the knee-bending! That's good to hear Wait, what head are you using to hold the mask? I'm using a standard Metru head. Quote I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cambion Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 (edited) i see you've been paying close attention to Chro's MOCs... this is even better than the last Toamod you posted; the armor is more solid and flows better. there's a few blocky spots here and there, but nothing too bad. the back armor could really stand to be changed, though, in part due to the lack of flow and in part because it breaks the color layering. which brings me to my next point - you've got black on silver on black here, and it's not working. keeping the mask black is fine, but all-silver armor would work much better. but like i said, this is once again definitely a step up for you. good work. Edited May 14, 2014 by Arc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted May 15, 2014 Author Share Posted May 15, 2014 i see you've been paying close attention to Chro's MOCs... this is even better than the last Toamod you posted; the armor is more solid and flows better. there's a few blocky spots here and there, but nothing too bad. the back armor could really stand to be changed, though, in part due to the lack of flow and in part because it breaks the color layering. which brings me to my next point - you've got black on silver on black here, and it's not working. keeping the mask black is fine, but all-silver armor would work much better. but like i said, this is once again definitely a step up for you. good work.Yes, I have been paying attention to other MOCists and attempting to manipulate other techniques. I was skeptical about the back armoring too, and now I realize that I should've left it off. Quote I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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