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#1 Offline VakamaMetruNui

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Posted Oct 24 2011 - 05:01 PM

Well, after nearly six months, I am back. I will re post the previous chapter and then continue from there. A Toy’s Life Characters(Put in spoilers for space.)
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Chapter 1-New Toy

(Nuhrii opened his eyes. It was dark. He could tell he was in pieces because he could not poke his toe. Suddenly, the bottom of his prison opened and light flooded in, as his pieces flooded out. Nuhrii looked and saw a giant assembling him. He was thankful that the giant was doing this, but he was also scared of him. After Nuhrii was complete, and the giant showed him around to other giants, it ran off.) Nuhrii: Phew. (Nuhrii felt like he was being watched and turned around. There was a crowd of Bionicle sets looking at him.) Takua: New toy! (The crowd begins to rush over and Nuhrii runs away.) Nuhrii: Ahhhh!! (Nuhrii hits a wall.) Nuhrii: Ow. (Nuhrii sits up and Takanuva kneels down next to him.) Takanuva: It’s alright, we’re not gonna hurt you. We want to accept you to the group. Nuhrii: Really? Avak: No! Nuhrii: Posted Image Takanuva: Posted Image (Hydraxon beats up Avak.) Takanuva: Come on; let’s go to the base. (In the bedroom.) Nuhrii: Wow, there are a lot of you. (Takua walks up.) Takua: You better believe it. Nuhrii: Don’t worry, I do. Takua: Good, I would hate for you to get beaten up already. Nuhrii: So uh… where did I come from? Takanuva: Well, a UPS guy delivered you, but our owner got you off of eBay. Nuhrii: Cool. Takanuva: So anyways there are five council members that lead the sets, I am one of them. Nuhrii: Am I one of them? Takanuva: No. Nuhrii: Posted Image Takanuva: Here are the others: (Takanuva points to each in turn.) Takanuva: Axonn, Brutaka, Hydraxon and Tuma. Nuhrii: So, what do you do for fun? Hydraxon: A Glatorian match is about to begin, how about you sit in on that? Takua: I shall find Hafu and some others to make the popcorn. Hydraxon: You do that. (In the kitchen, Takua, Nuhrii, Orkahm, Balta, Guurahk and Lerahk walked along and came to the revolving cabinet. High above, Hafu moved around looking for a pot.) Takua: The popcorn is in that revolving cabinet; we need to get it open. (Guurahk and Lerahk charged the door and hit it with all their might. The door spun around rapidly, the two Rahkshi going with it. The container of popcorn cornels and vegetable oil flew out perfectly just before the door stopped spinning and shut, the two Rahkshi trapped inside.) Rahkshi: Skreeee!!! Takua: Oh boy. Nuhrii: Should we help them? Balta: Son, it’s points like these where you have to decide between two things. Either saving two fellow sets, or get the popcorn out there so you can eat along with your non-trapped friends. Orkahm: Let’s choose the latter. Takua: Agreed. (Hafu has the stovetop heated up along with a pot set up. The Matoran climb up with the cornels and oil.) Hafu: What took you guys so long? And where did Guurahk and Lerahk go? Takua: No comment. (The group begins to make the popcorn. Balta then accidentally falls on the stovetop.) Balta: AHHHH!!! Posted Image (Balta falls off the stove and hits the ground hard. The impact causes his foot to snap off and fly under the refrigerator.) Balta: AHHHH!!! Posted Image (As Balta crawls towards the great unknown, Hafu open the lid of the pot only to be hit by several popped cornels. He then shuts the lid.) Hafu: It’s looking good. (They begin to dump it out into a bowl.) Orkahm: Uh guys? Takua: Yeah? Orkahm: We forgot the butter! Everyone: AHHHH!!! Posted Image (In the living room, the sets are pushing books and other such objects in a square, to make the walls of the Glatorian arena. Metus climbed up on the entertainment center.) Metus: Welcome ladies and gentlemen, to another glorious arena match. Today we will be pitting Ackar against Strakk; it’s guaranteed to be an awesome match. Hewkii: Woot! Guarantees! Metus: Right, whatever. Posted Image Anyways folks, remember to place your bets! (A ton of Bionicle sets along with some Lego mini figures rushed up to Metus.) Metus: Alright, two AA batteries, one Lego brick, twenty Monopoly money…Good, good. (Takua, Nuhrii, Hafu and Orkahm come in with the popcorn and dragging Balta.) Hafu: Come get your popcorn! Only one Lego brick! Balta: Ow… Takua: Well, I guess that foot is as good as gone. Orkahm: Don’t worry Balta; I’m sure we have some extra in stock. Balta: I hope so… (Ackar and Strakk step onto the field.) Metus: Folks, put your hands together for Ackar and Strakk! Hewkii: Hey, is this a match or a magic act?! Metus: It’s both moron! Posted Image Ackar: Your move. Strakk: Yargh!!! (Strakk charges Ackar swinging wildly at him. Ackar simply steps to the side and hits Strakk with his sword. However, since it’s a rubbery plastic, it doesn’t do anything.) Ackar: *sigh* Happens every time. (Ackar squeezes his Thornax launcher and it hits Strakk. He then throws his weapons away and rips off Strakk’s axe arm off.) Strakk: You, you ripped my arm off. Posted Image Ackar: You got that right. (Ackar then proceeds to beat Strakk mercilessly with his own arm. Strakk flies into a wall. Ackar walks up to him.) Ackar: Do you yield? Strakk: I suppose. (Hydraxon walks up to Ackar and hold his arm up.) Hydraxon: And the winner is Ackar! Give this man a round of applause. (The audience goes wild, which unfortunately leads to the deaths of several mini figures.) Takua: You enjoy yourself? Nuhrii: Yeah, this place is pretty cool. (More matches continued on as Nuhrii thought about how good a life he was going to have.) The End VMN

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Posted Oct 24 2011 - 08:39 PM

Fun. Lots of hurting! :lol:
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Posted Oct 24 2011 - 09:39 PM

this looks like one of y freinds comedy it was cool the first few chapters he made freinds with his bionicles then they went on adventures.
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Posted Oct 25 2011 - 07:40 AM

Chapter 2-Into the Unknown

(In the bedroom, Nuhrii walks up to Takua and Balta, who has still not gotten a replacement foot. Avak is nearby looking for a replacement.)Nuhrii: Hi guys, how’s it going?Balta: Oh, hey Nuhrii.Nuhrii: Hey, what happened to your foot?Balta: What happened, what happened to my foot?! Are you serious?! It flew under the refrigerator you moron!!Nuhrii: Yeah, I know that, but what happened to your new foot?Balta: I haven’t gotten one yet you moron!Nuhrii: But that was like, three days ago.Balta: Shut up and leave me alone.(Balta curls up. Avak then approaches the group.)Avak: Well, I have good news and bad news.Takua: What’s the bad news?Avak: The bad news is that we don’t have a replacement foot.Balta: AHHHHH! !!!! Posted Image(Balta faints.)Nuhrii: What’s the good news?Avak: Oh the same thing, but it’s good for me because I like to see you guys suffer. Posted Image(Axonn walks over.)Axonn: What’s going on guys?Avak: Oh, Balta lost his foot and we won’t have a replacement for another month. Isn’t it grand? Posted ImageAxonn: I…guess…? Well, you guys know there is only one thing to do then, right?Takua: Right.Nuhrii: We have to go and get it don’t we?Takua: Yup.(Avak starts rolling on the floor laughing.)Avak: Posted Image Ha ha ha! Rofl! You guys are gonna die!Axonn: And you and the other Piraka will join them.(Avak stops laughing.)Avak: What?Vezok: How’d we get dragged into this?Reidak: Yeah.(In the kitchen, Takua, Nuhrii, Balta and the Piraka are standing in front of the refrigerator. Balta sits down.)Balta: Good luck guys.(Pounding and screaming is heard from the revolving cabinet.)Takua: Oh yeah, the Rahkshi are still trapped inside that death trap.Nuhrii: But that was like, three days ago.(There is a crack heard from the cabinet, followed by the two Rahkshi’s screams, which slowly get fainter.)Takua: That’s not good.(Nuhrii gets down and looks under the fridge.)Nuhrii: How are we gonna get under there? There’s only like, a two inch gap.Zaktan: Like this.(Zaktan then kicks Nuhrii under the refrigerator.)Balta: Woah, that was not cool.Takua: You moron!(Takua then kicks Zaktan under it.)Zaktan: Why?!Takua: Come on guys, let’s go.(Takua and the other Piraka jump under the fridge.)Balta: I hope I get my foot back, even if they die in the process.(Takua gets up. He looks around at the stairs that are somehow under the refrigerator. He then sees his friends getting off the floor.)Nuhrii: Why am I in pain?Zaktan: Because I pushed you down a flight of stairs.Nuhrii: Oh…Takua: Let’s start looking.(The group starts walking down the tunnel.)Thok: I wonder if there are ghosts down here.Nuhrii: Stop it your scaring me!Vezok: Yeah, me too.Everyone else: Posted ImageVezok: What?(There is a noise behind the group and they all turn around quickly.)???: Skreeee!!!Everyone: AHHHH!!!(The Rahkshi then step out of the shadows.)Zaktan: Oh good, it’s just you two.(Lerahk punches Takua.)Takua: Ow! It wasn’t my choice to leave you behind; it was Balta’s idea!Hakann: Nice way to pass the buck.Takua: Thanks.???: Takua, is that you?(The group whips around to see-)Takua: Johnny Thunder?! Where have you been?! You’ve been missing for a long time!Johnny: Hello mates, yes I have been missing, went on an exploration of the refrigerator, ended up here.Nuhrii: How long ago was that?Johnny: Oh, about a year or two.Nuhrii: What have you been eating?Johnny: Nothing after my supply ran out, which was two minutes after I ended up here. What are you mates doing here?Takua: We’re looking for Balta’s foot.(Johnny gets up.)Johnny: Well then, let’s go.(The group continues walking and finds Balta’s foot on a pedestal thing.)Nuhrii: How’d it get there? Posted ImageHakann: Let’s call it magic.Nuhrii: Ok!(Takua begins to walk towards it.)Takua: Well let’s grab it and get the karz out of here.(Johnny stops him.)Johnny: Hold on mate. Haven’t you ever seen the first Indy?Takua: Yeah…Wait, you’re saying that this is like a movie?Johnny: Yup, I’m sure of it.Zaktan: Oh, this just gets better and better. Posted ImageNuhrii: Don’t worry guys; I got it.Everyone Else: No!(Nuhrii grabs the foot from the pedestal thing. Nothing happens.)Johnny: Guess I was wrong.(Suddenly, a garter snake slithers up behind them.)Reidak: Uh guys.Takua: Yeah?Reidak: Look behind you.(The group turns around to see the snake hissing at them. It then roars.)Takua: Run for your life! Posted Image(The group begins to run down the tunnel as fast as they can, with the snake right behind them.)Takua: Keep running, go, go!Zaktan: Snake! Snake! I hate snakes!Johnny: Me too!(The snake then grabs Lerahk in it’s mouth and tries to pull it back down the tunnel.)Lerahk: Skreee!!!(Guurahk stops and runs back down the tunnel, followed by Nuhrii. Guurahk steps on the creature’s neck and roars at it. The snake let’s go of Lerahk and Nuhrii is able to drag him out. The three of them run back to the group, the snake closely behind.)Takua: Why does it want us?!Thok: Maybe it doesn’t like you!Takua: Shut up!(The snake then grabs Johnny in his mouth.)Johnny: Oh, bugger mate.(The snake then slams Johnny into the wall, his torso somewhat disconnected from his legs.)Zaktan: Ok guys, now!(The Piraka all fire their one Zamor spheres at the snake, which promptly hit it in the face. The snake then retreats down the tunnel. Takua runs over to Johnny.)Takua: I’m getting you out of here.Johnny: No, no you’re not. Send me out, with a bang.Vezok: *gasp* This is just like Halo 3; you have to let him die.Takua: No, I’m not gonna do that, that’s stupid. What’s wrong with you?Vezok: Posted Image I don’t know, just thought it would be cool.(Takua picks up Johnny and Nuhrii grabs the foot. They then come out from under the fridge.)Balta: Welcome back.Nuhrii: Here you go!(Balta puts his foot on and stands up.)Balta: Oh man, it feels so good to walk again.(Lerahk and Guurahk beat up Balta.)Balta: Ow! What did I do?!Hakann: Takua ratted you out.Balta: What?! I’m gonna kill you Takua!Takua: Posted Image Whatever, let’s get out of here.The EndVMN

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Posted Oct 25 2011 - 04:03 PM

Chapter 3-New Sport

(Nuparu Inika walks up to Tuma.)Nuparu Inika: Tuma, sir?Tuma: Yes, what is it?Nuparu Inika: Uh, how are you today?Tuma: What are you getting at?Nuparu Inika: What is I could tell you, a great new sport I have in mind?Tuma: Well that depends, can you?Nuparu Inika: No, but he can.(Nuparu Inika steps aside to reveal McToran Nuparu.)McToran Nuparu: You know how we accidentally got a huge shipment of Boxors instead of a huge shipment of Skrall?Tuma: Yes. *sniff* I remember. Posted ImageMcToran Nuparu: Well, what if we use them to make a new sport?Tuma: Yes, and what would it be called?McToran Nuparu: Boxing!Tuma: Oh, wow, how original. Posted ImageNuparu Inika: So can we do it?Tuma: I have one question before I say yes.McToran Nuparu: Is it safe?Nuparu Inika: Is it legal?Tuma: No, will it bring in tons of money?McToran Nuparu: Of course.Tuma: Then yes, by all means, do it.(In the living room.)Metus: Welcome folks, today we have our first Boxing match here in the house. However, Iím sure you folks all came to see me.Minifig: No!(Stronius then grabs the minifig and beats him up with his club.)Metus: Posted Image Anyways, remember to bet, and we will have none of that new counting method that Photok came up with for the vehicle races.Photok: Posted ImageMetus: The match will begin soon, so get ready.Nuhrii: I wonder if this is safe.Takua: I wonder if itís legal.(Ringside, the two Nuparus are coaching the Matoran driving their Boxor.)McToran Nuparu: Donít worry Ralph, youíre gonna do great!Ralph: Really?McToran Nuparu: I have no idea! What do I look like, a blastiní fortuneteller?!Ralph: Posted Image(On the other side of the ring, the Piraka are coaching their Matoran, Joe.)Zaktan: Ok Joe, if you donít win, weíre gonna beat you up.Joe: Posted ImageVezok: Yeah, and we wonít be going easy on you.(The two Boxors go out on the ring. Tanma, the referee, steps into the middle.)Tanma: Posted Image Just begin.(Tanma steps back and the two Boxors move in closer.)Ralph: Iím gonna get you.Joe: Posted ImageZaktan: Stop being scared you wimp! Posted ImageJoe: Yaaah!!!(Joe then uses the Boxorís arm to swing at Ralph. The punch crushes Ralphís head. Everyone stand up in shock.)Takua and Nuhrii: Woah! Posted ImageMetus: Uh, no cause for alarm folks.(The two Nuaparus run out to Ralph.)Takua: This isnít good.Nuhrii: Fowl, fowl! Blame it on the ref!(Tanma stares at him.)Nuhrii: Sorry.(Tuma walks up to Metus.)Tuma: We have to wrap this up quick. The blasted press minifigs will be all over this.Metus: Alright, Iíll wrap this up. (To crowd): Ok folks, show over, and no you donít get your money back!Crowd: Aww!(Nuhrii and Takua walk back towards the bedroom.)Nuhrii: Hey Takua?Takua: Yeah?Nuhrii: What do you think went wrong tonight?Takua: Well Nuhrii, I think there are just some things that should never see the light of day.Nuhrii: Like taxes.Takua: Yeah Nuhrii, like that. Luckily, us toys donít have to deal with that.(The two disappear into the imaginary sunset.)The End VMN

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Posted Oct 25 2011 - 07:50 PM

Chapter 4-Creeps From the Closet

(In the bedroom.)Nuhrii: Hi Kongu.Kongu Inika: Shut up, Iím not gonna talk to you.Nuhrii: Ok.(Just then, the closet door opens a crack. Nothing else happens; everyone just stares.)???: Ahem.(The door then shuts, and then opens again a crack. Everyone still stares.)???: Ahem.Nuhrii: Oh right, thatís my cue!(Nuhrii runs to the computer and pulls up ďCreeping in my SoulĒ and turns the volume to its max, which blasts him off the desk. As the song plays, the Barraki come out of the closet and start beating up random sets. Nuhrii runs back to the bedroom.)Takua: What did you do?!Nuhrii: I got five Monopoly dollars. Posted ImageTakua: Posted Image You moron, do you know who they are?!Nuhrii: Rich executives?Takua: Posted Image No, theyíre the Barraki. They want to destroy our way of life!Nuhrii: Really?Takua: Well, that might be a bit extreme, but they still are no good.(Reidak looks over the edge of the bunk bed.)Reidak: Hey fish faces! This is our turf! Get out of here!(Mantax and Carapar throw Pridak up on top of the bunk bed.)Pridak: You care to make that threat now?Reidak: Well, I donít know, we might of got off on the wrong foot before-(Pridak pushes Reidak of the bed. Reidak grabs on with his right arm and would have been able to save himself if his left arm was long enough.)Reidak: @&$#!(Reidak hits the ground.)Reidak: Iím ok.Zaktan: Hey, only I can do that to my men!(The Piraka start to fight the Barraki. Carapar throws Avak into a lamp, knocking it off the dresser.)Minifig: Go, move!(Several mini figures begin to run as the lamp comes crashing down. Some escaped while others were not so lucky.)Takanuva: This is bad; these guys are going to tear this room apart.(Vezok punctuates Takanuvaís statement by landing behind him. Up top, the remaining Piraka face off against the Barraki.)Zaktan: This is not good. Retreat!(Zaktan jumps off the bed into a pile of blankets, unharmed.)Zaktan: Come on, this way!(Hakann jumps off, and grabs onto some blankets hanging over the edge. He then swings into a wall and falls to the ground, several pieces shattering.)Hakann: Ow.(Thok jumps on to the adjacent shelf and starts running along it as the Barraki throw various object at him. They all miss except for one, which hits his foot, causing him to fall off. He then crashes on the ground with a heavy thud.)Thok: Who am I?(Carapar looks over the edge to see Zaktan trying to sneak away.)Carapar: Whereís he going?(Carapar and Mantax push a pillow of the bed. Zaktan looks up.)Zaktan: NOOO!!!! Posted Image(The pillow then crushes him. The other sets look around at the defeated Piraka. The Barraki then jump down in front of Takua and Nuhrii.)Pridak: Youíre next.(The Barraki pull back on the tails of their squid, the squid ready to beat up on some sets. The two Matoran close their eyes. The Barraki fire, and the squid fly about half an inch.)Kalmah: What the &*$^*?!Pridak: Alright forget the squid; just use your fists!(The Barraki move into punch them when Axonn, Brutaka and Hydraxon step in the way.)Axonn: Picking on the Matoran, was a bad move. Guys, letís get them.(The three Titan sets start fighting the Barraki, with the Barraki winning. The Barraki are then able to force the Titans to their knees.)Axonn: Impossible.(Axonn throws a punch at Pridak, which he easily side steps.)Pridak: Come on Axonn; throw another one.Axonn: Ok.(Axonn does, and just before his fist reaches Pridak, the song stops, and Pridak gets decked. Pridak goes flying into a wall.)Kalmah: What was that?!Takadox: Youíre saying we need that song to fight? Are you kidding me?(The Titans stand up.)Brutaka: Payback time.Kalmah: Mother. Posted Image(Takua and Nuhrii watch the pounding that Barraki receive from the three Titan sets.)Takua: So Nuhrii, what did you learn today?Nuhrii: To ask for more money next time.Takua: Posted ImageThe End VMN

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Posted Oct 25 2011 - 08:46 PM

I read a few chapters earlier; I still need to read Chapter 4, but the others were just as good as before. Looking forward to the new chapters. :) -ibrow
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CHAPTER 8

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Posted Oct 26 2011 - 08:55 AM

Alright, first new chapter, here we go.

Chapter 5-The Apocalypse

(On the top bunk.) Nuhrii: Wow, I’ve never been up here before, this is really cool. (Kongu Inika pushes Nuhrii off the bed.) Nuhrii: Ahhh!!! (Nuhrii hits the ground and gets up ok.) Nuhrii: Wow, I thought my pieces would break from that height. (Nuhrii looks over to see the Piraka playing basketball with a Zamor sphere. They then head up to the top bunk.) Nuhrii: Uh oh, this is not good. (On the top bunk, the Piraka start pushing sets aside.) Hakann: Out of the way, this bed is ours. (Hakann then pushes Lesovikk off the bed.) Lesovikk: AHHHH!!! :OMG: (Lesovikk lands on the ground with a crunch. Everyone looks to see that all his lime green pieces are completely shattered.) Lesovikk: Ow. :sick: (Later, Balta and Velika are examining Lesovikk, with Takanuva, Takua and Nuhrii nearby. Balta then walks over.) Balta: So we have come to a conclusion. Takanuva: And that is? Balta: All his lime green pieces are broken. Takanuva: I knew that! How come?! Balta: Oh, because the pieces are severely fragile. If you just look at them funny they’ll break. Takanuva: Ok, we need to round up everyone with lime green pieces before it’s too late. (In the kitchen, Lewa Phantoka is standing on top of the refrigerator with Tanma in front of it, and Pohatu Phantoka and Photok watching from a safe distance.) Lewa: I’m telling you guys, I am gonna fly using my mask and jets. Photok: But we don’t have powers! Lewa: You don’t, but I do. Pohatu: Of course. :sarcastic: Lewa: And besides, Tanma is below to catch me. Tanma: You got that right boss! (Lewa jumps off, and immediately plummets to the ground.) Lewa: Catch me! Tanma: AHH!!! :fear: (Lewa lands on Tanma, lime green pieces shattering all over the place. One of the pieces flew off and hit Hahli Mahri in the face, who just randomly warped in. She fell over, shattering all her lime green parts too.) Pohatu: Oh boy, we better go get help. Photok: No here’s what we do: We go and try to reassemble them, if that doesn’t work; we walk away and act like we never saw them before. Pohatu: Ok. (Photok walks down and looks at the horror scene.) Photok: Ok, I can’t do this; let’s go with Plan B. (The sets promptly walk away. Later in the bedroom.) Takanuva: The only lime green set left is Mutran. Takua: Where is he? Takanuva: He is on the shelf; he isn’t that concerned for some reason. (On the shelf, Mutran is dancing around happily. The Barraki, minus Ehlek because of his lime green parts, are sneaking up behind him.) Pridak: Ok Ehlek, now! (Ehlek crawls over to the computer and plays “Creeping in My Soul”. The Barraki then attack Mutran.) Mutran: *Screams like a girl* :fear: (Elsewhere.) Takua: It’s despicable, it’s sick, there ought to be a law against it. Nuhrii: What? It’s just some lime green parts the Skrall are selling. Skrall 1: Can you hurry this up? We have other clients to get to. Takua: You mean they sell parts on the open market?! :burnmad: Skrall 2: Yes we do, and we have no shame in it. Nuhrii: Let’s head back Takua; maybe Balta figured something out. (Back on the shelf, Mutran is fighting for his life against the five Barraki.) Mutran: Please, have mercy! (Kalmah punches him in the shoulder, which breaks it, then Mantax dives towards Mutran.) Mutran: Oh no! (Mutran quickly assembles a paper airplane and jumps off the shelf, using it as a glider.) Mutran: Gangway! (Mutran lands and immediately runs. The Barraki jump down and give chase. Takanuva steps in the way, just as the song ends.) Pridak: Barraki, retreat! (The Barraki retreat as Balta walks up.) Takanuva: You have a solution? Balta: Yup, I found a way to artificially make more. Mutran: Are they just as fragile? Balta: Of course. Mutran: That’s dumb. :annoyed: Takanuva: Well, it’s a fix at least. Good job Balta. Mutran: Yeah, I guess good job. (In the shadows.) ???: Ha ha ha. Soon, I will take my revenge, and this time, no one will stop me. Ha ha ha! Ha ha ha! Ha ha, *cough* *cough* Eh, never mind. The End VMN

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Posted Oct 26 2011 - 10:07 AM

I loved the part with the paper airplane. :lol: Can't wait for the next one!
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