Krayzikk Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 (edited) Hello, folks. As you probably guessed, this is the review topic for the FTL prequel story "Red Skies", Discussion of the story itself should be done here, rather than cluttering the game topic. As an author's note; As you've probably guessed if you're reading this, this story is the prequel to the RPG currently running. It details the story of the Invasion of Terra, as told largely from the viewpoint of then-Captain Daniels, along with cameo appearances of other characters from the RPG. All of the broad events and details in this story have been provided by the ever-patient Humva, and he has fact-checked anything I have come up with. There will likely be eight installments, each one at least as long as the first. Cameo appearances will start a little later, and if you want one for a character, let me know and I'll try to slip it in. Enjoy. Story Topic Edited June 1, 2014 by Simon the Digger Quote On this eve, the thirtieth anniversary of that first colony, many are left to wonder; is the world fast approaching a breaking point? Breaking Point: An OTC Mecha RPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avmatoran Posted June 2, 2014 Share Posted June 2, 2014 I like this story, I like it a lot. You portrayed the tension when the alarm went off and before the Mantis jumped in quite well. I'm eagerly awaiting the rest of the story. If you can slip a canto of Gaven in, I'd appreciate it. Quote Γαρ επιστιμη! Для науки! For science! (Literally, it means "For knowledge", but it can be taken as "For science") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krayzikk Posted July 13, 2014 Author Share Posted July 13, 2014 Sorry the wait has been so long, but life was a little hectic for a bit. If the end of this installment seems abrupt, there's a reason; it was intended to go on a little longer. That would have made it ridiculously long, however, so I've split it into two parts. But, without further rambling, here it is: The Second Day Quote On this eve, the thirtieth anniversary of that first colony, many are left to wonder; is the world fast approaching a breaking point? Breaking Point: An OTC Mecha RPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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