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Maren The Chronicler

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#1 Offline Turaga Loga

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Posted Jun 08 2014 - 10:39 AM

 

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Hello Everyone!

 

This is your Turaga, and I have appointed our new

Chronicler! His name is maren, and a De-Matoran!

 

Here is his story!

 

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*sigh* The archives, so quiet, so peaceful. The noise here is minimal,

 

well, except the rahi section, NEVER go into that place.

 

Way too noisy.

 

Let's just hope the Chute Lurker doesn't escape again like last week.

 

But the Fe-Matoran have kept it quite nice and peaceful in the rest of the archives.

 

I would stay in Ko-Metru, but the wind makes a lot of noise. so I stay here. Learning, and sitting, and walking... (Is it really that boring here? Huh.)

 

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Hi everyone, how are you?

 

I'm letting the cat out of the bag that was in a box shipped to Florida for a vacation.

 

I'm not ready for Waiting For Hope. So, I decided, Why not do a community driven comic?

 

So, for the first time, I ask you.

 

What Happens next?

 

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The universe is my parallel universe, after all of the 'Soul Stealers' were defeated.

 

Mata Nui is dead, but we still all live on Metru Nui. The common elementals don't live here, though, they all live on

 

Mata nui's face. I am the Turaga here. I own you. Now play nice.

 

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Rules:

 

Please don't try to PM a request, just putting it in the comments will be fine.

 

This is plot based, but also for the community, so don't be shy to shake things up a bit.

 

Put in something like... I dunno, a vahki with a special mission or something, easy enough.

 

Just kinda keep it plausible.


Edited by Turaga Loga, Jun 10 2014 - 09:39 AM.

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#2 Offline Turaga Loga

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Posted Jun 08 2014 - 05:35 PM

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Huh, I've never thought about it, but this place is boring.

How intriguing.

 

Maybe there is a story back in Ko-Metru, or in Ta-Metru... Hmmm...

 

Hey, wait, what's that noise?

 

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Ahh! A vahki!

Wait... Duh, these things are just robots, nothing scary about them!

heh.

 

"how may I help you?"

 

"Maren, The Master, Turaga Loga, Wishes your company for a special mission. Do you wish to accept?"

 

Hmmm... Sound's dannngggeeerrrooouuuuusssss......

 

What do you guys think? Should I go?


Edited by Turaga Loga, Jun 10 2014 - 09:42 AM.

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#3 Offline The Legendary TNT

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Posted Jun 08 2014 - 08:10 PM

Yes, go. Don't stay in a boring place.
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#4 Offline BlueFire

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Posted Jun 09 2014 - 12:45 PM

Go you shall, mysterious is the force young Maren


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#5 Offline Damaracx Caratas Xarian

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Posted Jun 09 2014 - 01:15 PM

"Just to annoy him.  Naturally."  XD

 

That was hilarious.  I'm gonna keep a close eye on this.


Edited by Damaracx The Mad Scientist, Jun 09 2014 - 05:36 PM.

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#6 Offline Turaga Loga

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Posted Jun 09 2014 - 04:09 PM

You decide there is no harm in doing so. So you accept.

 

"Yeah, sure thing. Will it be noisy?"

 

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"go to the coliseum, he is there."

 

Well, gee, that's informative.

 

You Take a chute to the coliseum, you realize it's game night, because a lot of disk fans are headed there, too.

 

You arrive and get in an elevator to the top of the tower, where Turaga Loga is.

 

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What does that kooky Turaga want? And on such short notice?

 

Then you hear them, screaming fans. Lots and lots of noise.

 

This was a terrible idea.

 

"Matoran! I have great news! We have a special guest today!"

 

Oh, no.

 

Not me, please not me.

 

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"Come here, my boy! Quickly!"

 

You run outward to the smiling turaga.

 

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"Here, we have our honored guest!"

 

The matoran seem to all scratch there heads and squint to see the strange 'guest'

 

Just another matoran? What's so special about him?

 

"Friends! Here, we have a special matoran. Strong, cunning! Perfect to be our new chronicler!"

 

gasps fill the air.

 

"wait, me?!"

 

"Yes, yes, you! The Toa will be finished soon, and he will record their great deeds!"

 

"wha...?"

 

Why me? I'm a matoran of sonics! I hate adventures!

 

And toa, too! They are too noisy!

 

This is a terrible decision!

 

"Have any words for us, great chronicler?"

 

What would you do?


Edited by Turaga Loga, Jun 10 2014 - 09:41 AM.

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#7 Offline The Legendary TNT

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Posted Jun 09 2014 - 04:48 PM

Say "uhhhhhm why?"
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#8 Offline ReadBooks

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Posted Jun 09 2014 - 05:33 PM

Dont do drugs, stay in school, and always eat your veggies.  :D


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#9 Offline ArcticFreeze17

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Posted Jun 12 2014 - 11:25 PM

Improvise a good speech. And then pepper the Turaga with your anger.


Edited by ArcticFreeze17, Jul 19 2014 - 10:18 AM.

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#10 Offline Turaga Loga

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Posted Jul 18 2014 - 01:13 AM

Okay guys, once summer is over, I promise to return to this. But Utah has been a blast so far, and I haven't forgotten you, so don't worry. I'll be back.

I'll keep y'all posted. Peace.

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