Lemony Lepid Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 (edited) Hello Everyone! This is your Turaga, and I have appointed our new Chronicler! His name is maren, and a De-Matoran! Here is his story! *sigh* The archives, so quiet, so peaceful. The noise here is minimal, well, except the rahi section, NEVER go into that place. Way too noisy. Let's just hope the Chute Lurker doesn't escape again like last week. But the Fe-Matoran have kept it quite nice and peaceful in the rest of the archives. I would stay in Ko-Metru, but the wind makes a lot of noise. so I stay here. Learning, and sitting, and walking... (Is it really that boring here? Huh.) --------------------------------------------------- Hi everyone, how are you? I'm letting the cat out of the bag that was in a box shipped to Florida for a vacation. I'm not ready for Waiting For Hope. So, I decided, Why not do a community driven comic? So, for the first time, I ask you. What Happens next? --------------------------------------------------- The universe is my parallel universe, after all of the 'Soul Stealers' were defeated. Mata Nui is dead, but we still all live on Metru Nui. The common elementals don't live here, though, they all live on Mata nui's face. I am the Turaga here. I own you. Now play nice. ------------------------------------------------------ Rules: Please don't try to PM a request, just putting it in the comments will be fine. This is plot based, but also for the community, so don't be shy to shake things up a bit. Put in something like... I dunno, a vahki with a special mission or something, easy enough. Just kinda keep it plausible. ------------------------------------------------------ Credit to Chimoru 6 shade, Chimoru R, and their contributors. Edited September 4, 2014 by Loganto The Bo-Matoran 1 ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted June 8, 2014 Author Share Posted June 8, 2014 (edited) Huh, I've never thought about it, but this place is boring. How intriguing. Maybe there is a story back in Ko-Metru, or in Ta-Metru... Hmmm... Hey, wait, what's that noise? Ahh! A vahki! Wait... Duh, these things are just robots, nothing scary about them! heh. "how may I help you?" "Maren, The Master, Turaga Loga, Wishes your company for a special mission. Do you wish to accept?" Hmmm... Sound's dannngggeeerrrooouuuuusssss...... What do you guys think? Should I go? Edited June 10, 2014 by Turaga Loga ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Legendary TNT Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 Yes, go. Don't stay in a boring place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 Go you shall, mysterious is the force young Maren Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 (edited) "Just to annoy him. Naturally." XD That was hilarious. I'm gonna keep a close eye on this. Edited June 9, 2014 by Damaracx The Mad Scientist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted June 9, 2014 Author Share Posted June 9, 2014 (edited) You decide there is no harm in doing so. So you accept. "Yeah, sure thing. Will it be noisy?" "go to the coliseum, he is there." Well, gee, that's informative. You Take a chute to the coliseum, you realize it's game night, because a lot of disk fans are headed there, too. You arrive and get in an elevator to the top of the tower, where Turaga Loga is. What does that kooky Turaga want? And on such short notice? Then you hear them, screaming fans. Lots and lots of noise. This was a terrible idea. "Matoran! I have great news! We have a special guest today!" Oh, no. Not me, please not me. "Come here, my boy! Quickly!" You run outward to the smiling turaga. "Here, we have our honored guest!" The matoran seem to all scratch there heads and squint to see the strange 'guest' Just another matoran? What's so special about him? "Friends! Here, we have a special matoran. Strong, cunning! Perfect to be our new chronicler!" gasps fill the air. "wait, me?!" "Yes, yes, you! The Toa will be finished soon, and he will record their great deeds!" "wha...?" Why me? I'm a matoran of sonics! I hate adventures! And toa, too! They are too noisy! This is a terrible decision! "Have any words for us, great chronicler?" What would you do? Edited June 10, 2014 by Turaga Loga ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Legendary TNT Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 Say "uhhhhhm why?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReadBooks Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 Dont do drugs, stay in school, and always eat your veggies. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khromatose Posted June 13, 2014 Share Posted June 13, 2014 (edited) Improvise a good speech. And then pepper the Turaga with your anger. Edited July 19, 2014 by ArcticFreeze17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 18, 2014 Author Share Posted July 18, 2014 Okay guys, once summer is over, I promise to return to this. But Utah has been a blast so far, and I haven't forgotten you, so don't worry. I'll be back. I'll keep y'all posted. Peace. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted August 14, 2014 Author Share Posted August 14, 2014 Comment: Improvise a good speech. The Turaga shoves you to the edge of the platform. Looking off the edge you realize you'd rather jump than say anything. Buuuuut...... you say something anyway. "I-I will.... Ummm... Record everything?" The crowd cheers. Ooohhh, they like that. "No story will be missed! I will write down everything! E-Even that cloud!" You point at the cloud, and the matoran roar with applauding and wooping! (which you wince at the loud noise) The Turaga walks up, and places his hand on your shoulder. which feels very cold and uncomfortable... "Yes! Enthusiasm! That is what I like to hear from a hired man!" He chuckled, and continued. "For New-Metru! For the Toa! For the Virtues!" The matoran chanted the three known words. "Let the games... BEGIN!" Chairs rose from the ground. We sat down, and the disk games began. What would you do? ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted August 14, 2014 Share Posted August 14, 2014 Maren: get really stressed throughout the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Legendary TNT Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 Confront the Turaga and try to change this misfortune. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khromatose Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 Confront the Turaga and try to change this misfortune.I agree. Also ask for some earplugs for the next time you go out and make a speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted August 30, 2014 Author Share Posted August 30, 2014 (edited) Maren: get really stressed throughout the game.Maren feels very stressed.The Turaga takes notice."I see you are uncomfortable. It is the volume, yes?""Y-yes. Very noisy. Can we leave? We need to talk."Turaga Loga thinks for a moment."Why not? Let's go somewhere quiet to discuss your new profession. ""Thank you Turaga."He rises and walks to the podium, and gestures for the game to stop."I am leaving to discuss matters with our new chronicler, in my absence, FrybotV2 will take charge."Various 'Aww's and groans fill the stadium.Frybot walks up, and starts talking."Reset to third quarter, begin game"The game begins and we leave."Let's go to the Toa chambers, shall we Maren?"You nod, let's get down to business.You're apparently going to the toa chambers, where brand new toa are grown for the metru's protection, so what'll happen when you get there? Edited September 4, 2014 by Loganto The Bo-Matoran 1 ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted August 30, 2014 Share Posted August 30, 2014 Maren: Express doubt in your worth as chronicler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khromatose Posted August 30, 2014 Share Posted August 30, 2014 (edited) Maren becomes a Toa chronicler? (Of course I know Matoran can only be chroniclers.) Edited August 30, 2014 by ArcticFreeze17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Legendary TNT Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 Loga gives a long and boring exposition on the history of the relationship between Toa and Chroniclers and how they are so important to the Three Virtues and how Toa have bad memories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 1, 2014 Author Share Posted November 1, 2014 (edited) Gosh. Wow. So much bad writing. HELLLOOOOO This comic is ridiculous. The story is absolutely terrible, and has so many plot holes it could be Swiss cheese. AT LEAST I'M NOT THE MAIN CHARACTER THIS TIME. I mean, why do I gotta be the center of attention. Why? Why is there so much self insertion in this crud! Yeah, that's right, I'm talkin' about this guy. All he's even doin' is trolling Maren the ENTIRE TIME! Bad. Bad Turaga Loga. You know. He was even going to pass away soon, after PUTTING HIS MEMORY IN A TOA! And not just any toa... HIMSELF! HE CLONED HIMSELF! I mean, who the crud thinks of this stuff!? Oh yeah, I do... *sob sob* Edited November 1, 2014 by Loganto The Bo-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 17, 2014 Author Share Posted November 17, 2014 Loganto realizes that he has no life. He decides... Why not get one? He quickly scraps... No... I quickly scrap the idea. No need for that. My life here on Mata Nui is interesting enough. (request closure) Coming soon: The Real Life of Loganto ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Windrider- Posted November 17, 2014 Share Posted November 17, 2014 Closure requested; closure given. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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