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Maren The Chronicler


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Hello Everyone!


 


This is your Turaga, and I have appointed our new


Chronicler! His name is maren, and a De-Matoran!


 


Here is his story!


 


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*sigh* The archives, so quiet, so peaceful. The noise here is minimal,


 


well, except the rahi section, NEVER go into that place.


 


Way too noisy.


 


Let's just hope the Chute Lurker doesn't escape again like last week.


 


But the Fe-Matoran have kept it quite nice and peaceful in the rest of the archives.


 


I would stay in Ko-Metru, but the wind makes a lot of noise. so I stay here. Learning, and sitting, and walking... (Is it really that boring here? Huh.)


 


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Hi everyone, how are you?


 


I'm letting the cat out of the bag that was in a box shipped to Florida for a vacation.


 


I'm not ready for Waiting For Hope. So, I decided, Why not do a community driven comic?


 


So, for the first time, I ask you.


 


What Happens next?


 


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The universe is my parallel universe, after all of the 'Soul Stealers' were defeated.


 


Mata Nui is dead, but we still all live on Metru Nui. The common elementals don't live here, though, they all live on


 


Mata nui's face. I am the Turaga here. I own you. Now play nice.


 


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Rules:


 


Please don't try to PM a request, just putting it in the comments will be fine.


 


This is plot based, but also for the community, so don't be shy to shake things up a bit.


 


Put in something like... I dunno, a vahki with a special mission or something, easy enough.


 


Just kinda keep it plausible.


 


 


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Credit to Chimoru 6 shade, Chimoru R, and their contributors.


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Huh, I've never thought about it, but this place is boring.


How intriguing.



Maybe there is a story back in Ko-Metru, or in Ta-Metru... Hmmm...



Hey, wait, what's that noise?



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Ahh! A vahki!


Wait... Duh, these things are just robots, nothing scary about them!


heh.



"how may I help you?"



"Maren, The Master, Turaga Loga, Wishes your company for a special mission. Do you wish to accept?"



Hmmm... Sound's dannngggeeerrrooouuuuusssss......



What do you guys think? Should I go?


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You decide there is no harm in doing so. So you accept.



"Yeah, sure thing. Will it be noisy?"



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"go to the coliseum, he is there."



Well, gee, that's informative.



You Take a chute to the coliseum, you realize it's game night, because a lot of disk fans are headed there, too.



You arrive and get in an elevator to the top of the tower, where Turaga Loga is.



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What does that kooky Turaga want? And on such short notice?



Then you hear them, screaming fans. Lots and lots of noise.



This was a terrible idea.



"Matoran! I have great news! We have a special guest today!"



Oh, no.



Not me, please not me.



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"Come here, my boy! Quickly!"



You run outward to the smiling turaga.



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"Here, we have our honored guest!"



The matoran seem to all scratch there heads and squint to see the strange 'guest'



Just another matoran? What's so special about him?



"Friends! Here, we have a special matoran. Strong, cunning! Perfect to be our new chronicler!"



gasps fill the air.



"wait, me?!"



"Yes, yes, you! The Toa will be finished soon, and he will record their great deeds!"



"wha...?"



Why me? I'm a matoran of sonics! I hate adventures!



And toa, too! They are too noisy!



This is a terrible decision!



"Have any words for us, great chronicler?"



What would you do?


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Comment: Improvise a good speech.


 


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The Turaga shoves you to the edge of the platform.


 


Looking off the edge you realize you'd rather jump than say anything.


 


Buuuuut...... you say something anyway.


 


"I-I will.... Ummm... Record everything?"


 


The crowd cheers. Ooohhh, they like that.


 


"No story will be missed! I will write down everything! E-Even that cloud!"


 


You point at the cloud, and the matoran roar with applauding and wooping!


(which you wince at the loud noise)


 


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The Turaga walks up, and places his hand on your shoulder.


 


which feels very cold and uncomfortable...


 


"Yes! Enthusiasm! That is what I like to hear from a hired man!"


 


He chuckled, and continued.


 


"For New-Metru! For the Toa! For the Virtues!"


 


The matoran chanted the three known words.


 


"Let the games... BEGIN!"


 


Chairs rose from the ground.


 


We sat down, and the disk games began.


 


What would you do?


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Maren: get really stressed throughout the game.

Maren feels very stressed.

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The Turaga takes notice.

"I see you are uncomfortable. It is the volume, yes?"

"Y-yes. Very noisy. Can we leave? We need to talk."

Turaga Loga thinks for a moment.

"Why not? Let's go somewhere quiet to discuss your new profession. "

"Thank you Turaga."

He rises and walks to the podium, and gestures for the game to stop.

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"I am leaving to discuss matters with our new chronicler, in my absence, FrybotV2 will take charge."

Various 'Aww's and groans fill the stadium.

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Frybot walks up, and starts talking.

"Reset to third quarter, begin game"

The game begins and we leave.

"Let's go to the Toa chambers, shall we Maren?"

You nod, let's get down to business.

You're apparently going to the toa chambers, where brand new toa are grown for the metru's protection, so what'll happen when you get there?

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Gosh. Wow. So much bad writing.


 


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HELLLOOOOO


 


This comic is ridiculous.


 


The story is absolutely terrible, and has so many plot holes it could be Swiss cheese.


 


AT LEAST I'M NOT THE MAIN CHARACTER THIS TIME.


 


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I mean, why do I gotta be the center of attention.


 


Why? Why is there so much self insertion in this crud!


 


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Yeah, that's right, I'm talkin' about this guy.


 


All he's even doin' is trolling Maren the ENTIRE TIME!


 


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Bad. Bad Turaga Loga.


 


You know. He was even going to pass away soon, after PUTTING HIS MEMORY IN A TOA!


 


And not just any toa... HIMSELF! HE CLONED HIMSELF!


 


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I mean, who the crud thinks of this stuff!?


 


Oh yeah, I do...


 


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*sob sob*


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