Posted Oct 25 2011 - 06:27 PM
Chapter 1 Darkness was all he fallowed. Under command of Teridax was his only world. With the being of shadows dead, he stood as one of the few remaining Makuta. His name, was Garncha(Garn-ka). He was fully black, wore the Mask of Shadows and had claws for hands and feet. Staring into the vast, regrown and remade Spherus Magna, he wondered, "Now where to?" His only friend was the moon and the suns. He realized that order must be restored, he must revive the Brotherhood. Meanwhile a red figure rushed from a swarm of Vorox and Zesk. He is Zac, Prodigy of Tahukama, Inventor, and Weaponry Expert. He wore a mask that looked like the Hau and the MAsk of Kindred combined, but it was the Mask of Shielding. It was red, and he wielded a weapon no being knew of, that he made. He shot out a fire ball at the ground to scare off the Vorox and Zesk. Sadly, with the Toa being around, these Vorox and Zesk were used to fire and jumped over it and begun chasing Zac again. Zac jumped up onto a tree branch and used his weapon. It shot out small shell capsuled zamor spheres at his foes which then they fled. His weapon was a custom made Zamor Launcher. It shoots shells that are charged with Protodermis and Zamor Power. Realizing that the natives had gotten used to the toa, he had to be more creative when trying to scare them off. Garncha walked towards the abandoned city of the Skrall. He figured that some Skrall could be remaining, and intended to find out. "Teridax shall be avenged," he thought,"The toa were not supposed to win. Teridax is more powerful than Mata Nui. The brotherhood shall live on!" His question, was answered. A Skrall pounced on Garncha and readied his sword to pierce the intruder's throat. Garncha was one step ahead. He created a blast of shadow that sent the Skrall flying. "Now be assured," Garncha said," I don't want you killed. Yet that is. Your name?" The Skrall gave a confused look at Garncha and said," I am but a lower ranked Skrall, only higher ranks may get names,". Garncha faced his palm at the nameless Skrall and shot a beam that turned the Warrior into a Makuta. "You now have a name," Garncha spoke,"Drazui," Zac kept walking until the suns were shining over head causing him to get tired and more tired every minute. Though he had the power of fire, he had been caught up in using his new weaponry, he had almost forgot how to use them and control the heat. Pretty soon, he was ready to fall and faint. But he had to keep moving until he reached the Mega Village. But sadly he fainted. Then two beings found him and took him to their home. Garncha and Drazui went outside to the ruined balcony. "What do you see?" Garncha asked. Drazui looked and saw a desert, a jungle, and an ocean world. "A peaceful planet?" he replied. Garncha punched him to the ground hich meant Drazui was wrong. "This world was ment for the makuta, not these pitifull excuses for biomechanical life" Garncha corrected. Zac woke up to find him in a room where there were sketches of toa, masks, elements and weapons. A being came in with a tray with meat from a rhahi and said, "Oh good your awake! My name is Misnya, toa of water and master of the Mata Elements" Zac got up and was puzzled. She, controlled the six elements that belonged to the Defenders of Mata Nui? "I'm Zac," he replied," Toa of Fire and also inventor. How come you are able to control the Mata Elements?", "Well," Misnya said calmly, she had done it thousands of times before, "Toa are able to posses this power, but only if they have gone through several trials to collect Toa Stones. Special Toa Stones that can give you more than one element,". Zac could barely use his power of fire now, how could he regain control of the flames and master five other elements?
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