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Pretty good and I really like that you had this kind of idea, I believe it's a great way to express one's love for Bionicle in a creative way, however I do thin it needs a little more Bionicle references just like in the paragraph that says: "Lava on the Mountain." Run, Toa, run!"
Just some adjustments here and there and I think it will be awesome!