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First things first, THIS IS NOT A CONTEST ENTRY! It was going to be, but I there is no chance that I would be able to get it to Brickfair, so I'm posting it any way. 
 
This is the Cordaerk-Nui, a type of mech used by the Brotherhood of Makuta, although very rarely. Cordaerk-Nui are created occasionally when a Stage 7, or Shadow Kraata comes into contact with Energized Protodermis. Like a normal Rahkshi, a Kraata is then put inside the armour to pilot it, although these mechs are so powerful that they are generally reserved for Shadow Kraata, or are controlled by a "Hive Mind" of Kraata, because their enormous destructive potential could cause a lot of damage if a single stage 1 Kraata was piloting it. Cordaerk-Nui can also carry empty Rahkshi on their back. The name is derived from Cordak, which means "Desolation" in the Matoran language, so Cordaerk-Nui translates as "Great Destroyer" or "Great Devastator".
 
The feet took me ages to build, so I've given a close-up of one.
 
Picturewise, I apologise for the low quality, but I don't have a camera, so I had to use my iPod touch's camera.

 

Front view

 

 

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Makuta-Miras/Nui-Cordaerk/front.jpg

 

 

Back view, with Rahkshi attached

 

 

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Makuta-Miras/Nui-Cordaerk/backwithrahkshi.jpg

 

 

Back view, without Rahkshi

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Makuta-Miras/Nui-Cordaerk/back.jpg

 

 

Open cockpit

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Makuta-Miras/Nui-Cordaerk/cockpit.jpg

 

 

Shoulder cannons raised

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Makuta-Miras/Nui-Cordaerk/weaponsup.jpg

 

 

Size comparison to a Rahkshi

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Makuta-Miras/Nui-Cordaerk/sizecomparison.jpg

 

 

Close-up of a foot

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Makuta-Miras/Nui-Cordaerk/foot.jpg

Please post feedback, and also bear in mind: This is my biggest MOC to date!  :D

 

 

 

 

Edit: Images linked; please keep images in BBC to 100 kB and 640x640 pixels.

-Wind-

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Even though this MOC would be considered quite simplistic in nature compared to the other mechs we've seen the past week, you did a great job with its design. Right off hand I love your use of BIONICLE terminology in the MOC's name. 

 

The legs-especially the feet, look very sturdy and seem to give great support to prevent the mech from toppling over from its own weight. Another great feature is the head, which I adore because of its movable lower jaw. But I feel the wings look ugly the way they are bulging out of the shoulders.

 

My thoughts are mixed on the mech's ability to transport Rahkshi on its back. I can't tell if it makes the MOC good, or if it makes it look bad by putting too much weight on its back.

 

Overall, this is a pretty good MOC. Shame it will be not be entered into the BBC contest. 

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Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind the next time I go way above canister-sized models!

 

Even though this MOC would be considered quite simplistic in nature compared to the other mechs we've seen the past week, you did a great job with its design. Right off hand I love your use of BIONICLE terminology in the MOC's name. 

 

I design models like how I play Chess. I have an idea of what I want to do, and then throw it away halfway through.  :D

 

 

The legs-especially the feet, look very sturdy and seem to give great support to prevent the mech from toppling over from its own weight. Another great feature is the head, which I adore because of its movable lower jaw. But I feel the wings look ugly the way they are bulging out of the shoulders.

 

By wings, do you mean the Antroz/Nektann blades on the back, or the Antroz wings which I used in the right-hand cannon?

 

Still, thanks again!

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Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind the next time I go way above canister-sized models!

 

Even though this MOC would be considered quite simplistic in nature compared to the other mechs we've seen the past week, you did a great job with its design. Right off hand I love your use of BIONICLE terminology in the MOC's name. 

 

I design models like how I play Chess. I have an idea of what I want to do, and then throw it away halfway through.  :D

 

 

The legs-especially the feet, look very sturdy and seem to give great support to prevent the mech from toppling over from its own weight. Another great feature is the head, which I adore because of its movable lower jaw. But I feel the wings look ugly the way they are bulging out of the shoulders.

 

By wings, do you mean the Antroz/Nektann blades on the back, or the Antroz wings which I used in the right-hand cannon?

 

Still, thanks again!

The Antorz wings. For some reason I thought there were wings attached to the shoulders. I hope I'm not being too critical. Am I?

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Nah, its fine. I need all of the constructive criticism I can get; I suffer from a curse of not being able to build models without an Inika torso unless I make a point of it! Also, even I'm not a big fan of the right hand cannon. It quite literally took me two seconds to put together.

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