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A review for Stellar Quest: The Black Gate Opens, by Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith, please. :) Thank you in advance.

Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith :smilemirunu:

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Unless my kindergarten level math skills are failing me, I believe that's five requests.-Teezy

Yep; I was just busy yesterday so I didn't assign critics yet.

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Moment of Fragile Courage - by Grant Sud - Assigned to Velox

Just Another Path - by Lord Darkon - Assigned to Tyler DurdenHigh-Fly Matoran - by Taipu1 - Assigned to Yukiko

Stellar Quest: The Black Gate Opens - by Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith - Assigned to Jedi Master J.

Perfectionist - by Aderia: Toa of Ducklings - Assigned to Tolkien

Reviews are due by Thursday, March 1st. newso1.png

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Abyss by MatoroIgnika, whenever a spot opens up. :3Thanks ahead of time.EDIT: Sorry if this request is invalid or what have you, I didn't even think when I posted this. I've had too long of a day. :/

Yeah, unfortunately you'll have to re-request your story for review the next time we are allowing requests (should be around Thursday or Friday of next week).newso1.png Edited by Velox

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And I have reviewed Moment of Fragile Courage, by Grant Sud.I know we're still waiting on one review, but I will now accept more review requests. Five more until we close the gates again.newso1.png

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http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=3806Target: The War-Monger - By TahooReview please? Thank you.(sorry for defying post format, I couldn't get the link thing to work...)

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My PBZP: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4267

I hadn't even known it was posted until much later... Oops.

 

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What I always do is add my story title to the end of the URL with a space between the two when I'm adding the link, then I just backspace out the URL and leave the link.But eh, to each his own.Anyway, that's five.-Teezy

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The Outlaws and the Dream by Cederak -- Assigned to VeloxThe Wraith by Kal Grochi -- Assigned to Velox Yukiko

Abyss by ~MatoroIgnika~ -- Assigned to Tyler Durden

The Royal We by Tyler Durden -- Assigned to Velox ZaraynaTarget: The War-Monger By Tahoo -- Assigned to Zarayna

Once again, if anyone wants to take any of the extra ones I've assigned to myself, just let me know before you do. And reviews are due by Friday, March 16th. Also, an easy way to create a URL: Simply copy the URL, type what you want the link to say (i.e. "Target: The War-Monger"), highlight what you typed, then click the link button, paste the URL into the box that comes up, click "ok" and it should be good. If that doesn't make sense I can explain it better.newso1.png

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^Velox, since couldn't manage that review last week I'll gladly take on some of yours. I have spring break now. So everything's good. :)

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And some aren't even on your side.

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I'll take the Wraith then. :)

There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials

[BZPRPG Profiles]

Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - FerellisMorie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir

And some aren't even on your side.

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Glatorian Chronicles #11: Obsidian Among the Frost by TNTOSWould appreciate a review.-TNTOS-

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I should have my review up by sometime tomorrow morning, Velox: Internet problems are preventing me from doing a lot of good with a proper review. Sorry for the inconvenience.-Teezy

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And I have reviewed The Outlaws and the Dream. Also @ TNTOS and PooZy, while we weren't technically accepting requests when you posted, we are accepting requests now, and since it's only been a few hours, you don't have to re-request your stories.So! Three more stories until we stop accepting requests again.@ Zarayna and Yukiko ~ you won't be striked right now since you both took on more than one review, but please complete them ASAP. And, Tyler, that's fine. Thanks for letting me know.newso1.png

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Reviewed Abyss. Highly recommended debut Short Story from a great writer. Look forward to reading more from him.Thanks to Velox for the twelve-hour reprieve, and I look forward to my next review.-Teezy

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Glatorian Chronicles #11: Obsidian Among the Frost by TNTOS -- Assigned to Jedi Master J.Oasis by PooZy -- Assigned to VeloxCorrupt Destiny: Vakama by Toa Vahi: toa of time -- Assigned to TolkienThe Land of Forgetfulness by Zarayna: The Quiet Light -- Assigned to CederakWar for BZPower by Jinklemeister -- Assigned to Zarayna

And there we go. With that I'd also like to announce the latest critic: Cederak. ECC Curator and a great critic, he's definitely very welcome here.newso1.png

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