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#1 Offline ...The Chosen One...

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Posted Jul 02 2014 - 04:57 PM

Hello, guys!
I wanna share my latest creation, matoran Mavrah. Here is it:

 

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Hope you enjoy. :P

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#2 Offline ChroXumo

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Posted Jul 02 2014 - 08:56 PM

I like him. He's a little... portly, I think, but that gives him more character.
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Posted Jul 02 2014 - 10:55 PM

This... While mavrah himself is nothing extraordinary in the story, you have made him even greater. The design, while not really armored, still looks muscular.

 

Might I ask what prompted you to decide to build mavrah?


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Posted Jul 02 2014 - 11:50 PM

Looks really nice. Like Chro(kind of) said, he looks a bit "chunky", but I like the build.
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Posted Jul 03 2014 - 09:02 AM

Woah! He's a chubby one, isn't he? A more traditional Matoran build might look better.

For what it is, it looks great. Just make him look like he's done some push-ups lately.


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Posted Jul 03 2014 - 02:05 PM

I like this. The design is really good, and you somehow seem to have made his body actually look like the 04 Matoran build really well. He does look slightly, erm, *cough cough* chunky *cough cough*, but to be honest, I think that that's what you would expect from someone who is essentially a museum worker.

Colour-wise, the black all fits together nicely, but he does seem a little too black. I always imagined Mavrah as being slightly more purple, like Onepu. As for the mask choice, although I'm not an expert on the 04/05 story, the Pakari is a bit generic for Onu-Characters. I would suggest maybe a Kakama instead of the Pakari, or even better, a Noble Komau. Still, this Mavrah is slightly completely epic!


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Posted Jul 03 2014 - 06:26 PM

I like him. He's a little... portly, I think, but that gives him more character.

Hehe, thanks, man. ^__^

 

This... While mavrah himself is nothing extraordinary in the story, you have made him even greater. The design, while not really armored, still looks muscular.

 

Might I ask what prompted you to decide to build mavrah?

Of course you can. I had some long break and didn't build for some time, so one day I decided to built something small to see what I can still do. :D The result was totally black matoran, I didn't know, how to call him. Pakari suits him better then other Kanohi, so I put it on and decided to see, what mask Mavrah had. SURPISE! And I called him Mavrah, cuz I like this character (and even I was so lucky with Pakari... It's a sign ^__^).

Thank you for your comment.

 

Looks really nice. Like Chro(kind of) said, he looks a bit "chunky", but I like the build.

Thanks!)

 

Woah! He's a chubby one, isn't he? A more traditional Matoran build might look better.

For what it is, it looks great. Just make him look like he's done some push-ups lately.

Ye, he's a little bit heavy.) What is "traditional Matoran build"? Do you mean official Lego-sets?
Thanks)

 

I like this. The design is really good, and you somehow seem to have made his body actually look like the 04 Matoran build really well. He does look slightly, erm, *cough cough* chunky *cough cough*, but to be honest, I think that that's what you would expect from someone who is essentially a museum worker.

Colour-wise, the black all fits together nicely, but he does seem a little too black. I always imagined Mavrah as being slightly more purple, like Onepu. As for the mask choice, although I'm not an expert on the 04/05 story, the Pakari is a bit generic for Onu-Characters. I would suggest maybe a Kakama instead of the Pakari, or even better, a Noble Komau. Still, this Mavrah is slightly completely epic!

O, long post.)

By the way, I wanted to add some second colour, but decided to try it next time. If you like purple, I also have some models with purple and Pakari mask - https://flic.kr/p/e9iTKu.

I have black Kakama, but when I put it, I realized, that head became too small, I needed "massive" mask, so I chose Pakari.

Thank you for such big answer)


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Posted Jul 04 2014 - 09:41 PM

The heavyset look kind of works for this, in my opinion. Anyway, awesome Matoran. The torso design is excellent, as are the limbs. I do think he might look better with an accent color, but that's just a minor complaint. 


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Posted Jul 10 2014 - 10:44 PM

The heavyset look kind of works for this, in my opinion. Anyway, awesome Matoran. The torso design is excellent, as are the limbs. I do think he might look better with an accent color, but that's just a minor complaint.

Ye, I thought about adding some extra-colours, but decided to stay it black...
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Posted Jul 12 2014 - 01:16 PM

Very nicely detailed, and it's also nice that he's a little bit dumpy. Adds more character to him. I like that you filled in the gap between the 'toes' as well. The only things I think are a little off are the bands around the wrist, as they're smooth while the rest of him is blockish and full of hard edges, but it isn't a problem. Doesn't detract from the model itself. 


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Posted Jul 12 2014 - 01:25 PM

Your MOCs are always very complex but does not bother eye with excessive detail. Your designs are complete, I'd say. Yeah, complex and complete. And lovely. Good job! =)


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