Pahrak Model ZX Posted July 21, 2014 Share Posted July 21, 2014 Topic for reviewing A Mind in Darkness. Quote My Library Right of Law (Epics) KARDAS DRAGON appears! (G&T) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted July 23, 2014 Share Posted July 23, 2014 Whoa, really amazing so far! The character interactions are great, and so is the plot. I'm a little curious why you spelled Macku and Hewkii with the Naming Day changes, though. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pahrak Model ZX Posted July 23, 2014 Author Share Posted July 23, 2014 Thank you! I know the official explanation for the changes was Naming Day, but they were still seen in the Metru-Nui arc, showing that the names had been completely retconned. I figured I would just go with that. Quote My Library Right of Law (Epics) KARDAS DRAGON appears! (G&T) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted July 26, 2014 Share Posted July 26, 2014 Great story! Excellent handling of the plot and characters, I really enjoyed it. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gifthammer Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 Wow that practically felt like a canon story. Although, did the matoran already know the names of the Toa Mata? Quote Every hero is born from his enemy; every leader, his followers; and every father, his children. Metru Nui: the Fall My 3D printing designs on Thingiverse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pahrak Model ZX Posted July 28, 2014 Author Share Posted July 28, 2014 I seem to recall they did, but I don't remember any sources off the top of my head. Also, this story was drawing a little more from an outdated lore guide that said the Matoran knew their names, so I just sort of went with that. Quote My Library Right of Law (Epics) KARDAS DRAGON appears! (G&T) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 (edited) Edit: removed accidental post. Feel free to delete it if you're a mod. Edited July 29, 2014 by Akavakaku Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gifthammer Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 (edited) Ok, I had to catch up on the early years so I was just wondering. I can see an argument for either choice anyway. Edited July 30, 2014 by LanceMuch7 Quote Every hero is born from his enemy; every leader, his followers; and every father, his children. Metru Nui: the Fall My 3D printing designs on Thingiverse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 Yes. It's fixed now. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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