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A Mind in Darkness Review


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#1 Offline Virus #0579

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Posted Jul 21 2014 - 12:31 PM

Topic for reviewing A Mind in Darkness.


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Posted Jul 23 2014 - 01:20 AM

Whoa, really amazing so far! The character interactions are great, and so is the plot. I'm a little curious why you spelled Macku and Hewkii with the Naming Day changes, though.
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Posted Jul 23 2014 - 09:13 AM

Thank you!

 

I know the official explanation for the changes was Naming Day, but they were still seen in the Metru-Nui arc, showing that the names had been completely retconned.  I figured I would just go with that.


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Posted Jul 26 2014 - 04:04 PM

Great story! Excellent handling of the plot and characters, I really enjoyed it.
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Posted Jul 28 2014 - 07:08 AM

Wow that practically felt like a canon story. Although, did the matoran already know the names of the Toa Mata?
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Posted Jul 28 2014 - 10:40 AM

I seem to recall they did, but I don't remember any sources off the top of my head.  Also, this story was drawing a little more from an outdated lore guide that said the Matoran knew their names, so I just sort of went with that.


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Posted Jul 28 2014 - 11:12 PM

Edit: removed accidental post. Feel free to delete it if you're a mod.

Edited by Akavakaku, Jul 29 2014 - 04:58 PM.

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Posted Jul 29 2014 - 07:08 AM

Ok, I had to catch up on the early years so I was just wondering. I can see an argument for either choice anyway.


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Posted Jul 29 2014 - 04:57 PM

Yes. It's fixed now.
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