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Never the End: Review


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#1 Offline Mampt

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Posted Jul 31 2014 - 10:22 PM

Here's the review topic for Never the End.  If you have any comments or criticisms, I'd love to hear them so I can grow and get better.  If you are confused or have any questions, I'll gladly take them.


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#2 Offline Akavakaku

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Posted Aug 10 2014 - 04:01 AM

Wow! The tone is perfect so far, and I was shocked in a good way by Tumadax's outrageously gory methods of killing. Just one little thing, describing Tuma's posture as "inhuman" seemed a little out-of-setting.
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