Mampt Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 Here's the review topic for Never the End. If you have any comments or criticisms, I'd love to hear them so I can grow and get better. If you are confused or have any questions, I'll gladly take them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted August 10, 2014 Share Posted August 10, 2014 Wow! The tone is perfect so far, and I was shocked in a good way by Tumadax's outrageously gory methods of killing. Just one little thing, describing Tuma's posture as "inhuman" seemed a little out-of-setting. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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