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Never the End: Review

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Here's the review topic for Never the End.  If you have any comments or criticisms, I'd love to hear them so I can grow and get better.  If you are confused or have any questions, I'll gladly take them.

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Wow! The tone is perfect so far, and I was shocked in a good way by Tumadax's outrageously gory methods of killing. Just one little thing, describing Tuma's posture as "inhuman" seemed a little out-of-setting.


( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of Time

What if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins

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