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OUR FINAL JUDEMENT - review topic


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#1 Offline Sil

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Posted Aug 03 2014 - 01:49 PM

OUR FINAL JUDGEMENT is my first BIONICLE fan fic so constructive criticism is welcome  :)


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#2 Online Akavakaku

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Posted Aug 10 2014 - 04:14 AM

Wow, excellent use of tone! My fanfic is also about Marendar, but in a different way, so I loved reading your interpretation. Maybe the great thing about Marendar is how everyone can imagine it differently.
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#3 Offline Sil

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Posted Aug 11 2014 - 01:33 PM

Thanks, will check your fanfic out  :D


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