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OUR FINAL JUDEMENT - review topic


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#1 Offline The Silent King

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Posted Aug 03 2014 - 01:49 PM

OUR FINAL JUDGEMENT is my first BIONICLE fan fic so constructive criticism is welcome  :)


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#2 Offline Akavakaku

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Posted Aug 10 2014 - 04:14 AM

Wow, excellent use of tone! My fanfic is also about Marendar, but in a different way, so I loved reading your interpretation. Maybe the great thing about Marendar is how everyone can imagine it differently.
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#3 Offline The Silent King

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Posted Aug 11 2014 - 01:33 PM

Thanks, will check your fanfic out  :D


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| The Jatikko Reference Post    The Taajar clan of Okrihnok    The Outsiders Organisation |

 

BZPRPG Profiles    Silo     Rekhyt     Mortem     Mura     Karaihe     Venemi     Naihi     Maripi     Snake     Raith     Torch     Torpaq |

 

Eztanda and Day     Olis and Purple     Zeleran and The Jatikko     Dienyddiwr/Dinistrydd and Rivet |

 

RPGs played:

City in the Dark, Ultimate City of Ultimate Destiny, A Journey of Sand, Stars and Spirit, BZPRPG, Corpus Rahkshi, Matoran Und Panzer, Bionifight Infinite, Asylum, Year 60 000, Wasteland, HF RPG 2.0 (sort of), HF RPG 2.5





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