silo Posted August 3, 2014 Share Posted August 3, 2014 OUR FINAL JUDGEMENT is my first BIONICLE fan fic so constructive criticism is welcome Quote . Kathok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted August 10, 2014 Share Posted August 10, 2014 Wow, excellent use of tone! My fanfic is also about Marendar, but in a different way, so I loved reading your interpretation. Maybe the great thing about Marendar is how everyone can imagine it differently. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo Posted August 11, 2014 Author Share Posted August 11, 2014 Thanks, will check your fanfic out Quote . Kathok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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