Vezon shall Return Posted October 2, 2014 Share Posted October 2, 2014 Second Try... only with Matoro's Inika form. Again I was lazy when it comes to shading it.... but I did use poses from a pictures of Kirito GGO, so this one is much more dynamic looking than my first try. Criticism or compliments, feel free to be as brutally honest as you wish, because a shadow of truth never killed anyone... Quote "Don't! They will kill you like a small dog. Instead let your anger be as if it were a monkey on a treadmill; confused and tripping around." -Lelouch of Britania- (Here is my BZPRPG Profile, Diotrua.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted October 2, 2014 Share Posted October 2, 2014 Both your Matoro drawings look extremely feminine for some reason. I think their features are too smooth and curved. The faces are also very feminine. What's the green flame stuff on that side of his head? As for the sword, definitely seeing a Kirito influence there, lol. Looks like it's actually made of ice though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prehistoric_Echoes Posted October 2, 2014 Share Posted October 2, 2014 (edited) I like the style, but it could use a little work. The proportions are all strange, and he looks oddly feminine with smooth features and large chest. Also, it's weird how only one of his eyes is glowing. Everything's well thought out and designed though. I especially like how is energized ice sword is a laser buster sword. Might steal that in the future. Edited October 2, 2014 by Prehistoric_Echoes Quote Prehistoric_Echoes -[|]- DeviantArt: http://prehistoricechoes.deviantart.com/ Custom Bionicle Wiki: http://custombionicle.wikia.com/wiki/User:Echo_1 Young Writer's Society: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/profile/PrehistoricEchoes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vezon shall Return Posted October 3, 2014 Author Share Posted October 3, 2014 Both your Matoro drawings look extremely feminine for some reason. I think their features are too smooth and curved. The faces are also very feminine. What's the green flame stuff on that side of his head? As for the sword, definitely seeing a Kirito influence there, lol. Looks like it's actually made of ice though. I gave him more feminine features because Matoro reminds me of Zero from megaman zero, and he's pretty feminine looking, but most people still like him. The first drawing of him as Marhi had a similar design to Kirito's avatar in the second season. Finally someone who know's about SAO! lol Oh and I like making one of the eyes to glow overly dramatic, you know.... just for fun. I like the style, but it could use a little work. The proportions are all strange, and he looks oddly feminine with smooth features and large chest. Also, it's weird how only one of his eyes is glowing. Everything's well thought out and designed though. I especially like how is energized ice sword is a laser buster sword. Might steal that in the future. Technically his chest does kind of look like that.. just kidding... it's really his hips and legs that look feminine, uh because reasons I mentioned above and again the eye,,, for fun? And why go for regular sword if you can use ice powers to make a fantasy buster sword? Stealing ideas is what the internet it for, so go for it. Quote "Don't! They will kill you like a small dog. Instead let your anger be as if it were a monkey on a treadmill; confused and tripping around." -Lelouch of Britania- (Here is my BZPRPG Profile, Diotrua.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pohatu: Uniter of Stone Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 The weapons look a bit awkward for him to hold. For example, the sword's hilt is just a tiny skinny pole. Quote I HATE SCORPIOS ~Pohatu Master of Stone, 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vezon shall Return Posted October 3, 2014 Author Share Posted October 3, 2014 The weapons look a bit awkward for him to hold. For example, the sword's hilt is just a tiny skinny pole. Well, it has to match his small feminine hands... Hahaha... Yeah come to think of it, it does look on the small side. 1 Quote "Don't! They will kill you like a small dog. Instead let your anger be as if it were a monkey on a treadmill; confused and tripping around." -Lelouch of Britania- (Here is my BZPRPG Profile, Diotrua.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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