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Bionioni: Review


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Do not enter the mansion, for that is where they wait...HereCASTLewa - Italy VenezianoOnua - GermanyKopaka - JapanMatau - PrussiaMUSICEpisode 1 - Caught in a Dream - All Insane KidsEpisode 2 - An Awful Lot of Running - Chameleon CircuitMiscellanousCreeping in my Soul - CryoshellBye Bye Babylon - CryoshellTrigger - CryoshellCloser to the Truth - CryoshellFalling - CryoshellThe Room - CryoshellCome to my Heaven - CryoshellMurky - CryoshellFace Me - CryoshellGravity Hurts - CryoshellSummertime - My Chemical RomanceS/C/A/R/E/C/R/O/W - My Chemical RomanceBulletproof Heart - My Chemical RomanceThe Only Hope For Me Is You - My Chemical RomanceThe Messenger - Linkin ParkIridescence - Linkin ParkThe Kill - 30 Seconds to MarsBoulevard of Broken Dreams - Green DayWake Me Up When September Ends - Green Day21 Guns - Green ayLast Night on Earth - Green DayWhat It Takes To Be A Hero - All Insane KidsMove Along - All American RejectsIt Ends Tonight - All American RejectsViva La Vida - ColdplayBad Apple - Hetaloid version, original by TouhouUninstall - Geekyfandubs version (IMO), riginally by Chiki Isakawa (s/p?)Ichiban no Takaramoni - KarutaAUTHOR NOTESThis will differ quite a bit from the original. For example, I may put in a little more of the original pairings, USUK, GerIta, and Spamano. Some characters may not make sense unless you know both Hetalia and Bionicle pretty well.So, do you like it? This review is under construction at the moment. I want to make it very pretty! :biggrin:...I sounded like such a girl. Or Feli. Or we could paint it wicked hipster pink!. Or white. Ah well!

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i wanna be the very best


like no one ever was


to catch them is my real test


to train them is my cause

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Although I have absolutely no clue what Hetalia is, I'm enjoying this so far. :P So far, I like it. Good descriptions, good details - the dialogue is entertaining, my favorite being: 'Is Onua afraid of ghosty-wosties?' 'Shaddup.' I had to laugh at that, because the response is quick and amusing. Might I add, also, is that the character's personalities are pretty much in the ballpark when it comes to the way they act, and especially their reactions. However, the one complaint I have is that Matau and Lewa's chutespeak/whateverspeak is kind of strangely worded. Also, another complaint, now that I mention it: It's a little rushed. Kopaka just suddenly changes - you've got to make it a shock, to kind of dramatize it a little more. I mean, it's not entirely neccessary, but it would probably be a little better that way. Either way, it was still an interesting turn of events. Still, this is pretty awesome so far. I can't wait for the next chapter, Neelh. KUTGW! ^_^ (By the way, any chance of Seven Legends being reposted? =] )

On the day the wall came down / They threw the locks onto the ground

And with glasses high / We raised a cry / For freedom had arrived

 

On the day the wall came down / The ship of fools had finally run aground

Promises lit up the night / Like paper doves in flight

 

I dreamed you had left my side / No warmth, not even pride remained

And even though you needed me / It was clear that I could not do a thing for you

 

Now life devalues day by day / As friends and neighbors turn away

And there's a change that even with regret / Cannot be undone

 

Now frontiers shift like desert sands / While nations wash their bloodied hands

Of loyalty, of history / In shades of grey

 

I woke to the sound of drums / The music played, the morning sun streamed in

I turned and I looked at you / And all but the bitter residues slipped away

 

slipped away...

 

 

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Although I have absolutely no clue what Hetalia is, I'm enjoying this so far. :PSo far, I like it. Good descriptions, good details - the dialogue is entertaining, my favorite being: 'Is Onua afraid of ghosty-wosties?' 'Shaddup.' I had to laugh at that, because the response is quick and amusing. Might I add, also, is that the character's personalities are pretty much in the ballpark when it comes to the way they act, and especially their reactions. However, the one complaint I have is that Matau and Lewa's chutespeak/whateverspeak is kind of strangely worded.Also, another complaint, now that I mention it: It's a little rushed. Kopaka just suddenly changes - you've got to make it a shock, to kind of dramatize it a little more. I mean, it's not entirely neccessary, but it would probably be a little better that way. Either way, it was still an interesting turn of events.Still, this is pretty awesome so far. I can't wait for the next chapter, Neelh. KUTGW! ^_^(By the way, any chance of Seven Legends being reposted? =] )

If you look at HetaOni, the characters are pretty different. I had a very short time to finish the entire episode, or else I would have never finished it. Also, he does change quite quckly. It's based on a videogame, and I actually quite liked the abruptness of it. It starts to flow better as the story goes on.

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i wanna be the very best


like no one ever was


to catch them is my real test


to train them is my cause

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