Omega Pridak Ω (BFTGM)

[Boidoh]

My first ever titan MOC.

 

Name: Omega Pridak Ω

Origins: Aqua Magna, at the Battle in the Skakdi Fortress. Created by the Skakdi Fusion, by granting dreams of the maddened Skakdi.

Current Location: 45 kio off the shores of Aqua Magna; near a dense jungle

Status: Alive; searching for Pridak

Goals: Locate his doppelganger and obliterate him, rescue Lehvak-Kal from orbit, gain control of the Rahi and organic creatures of Spherus Magna

Destiny: To merge with Pridak (unknown to Omega Pridak)

 

Omega Pridak was spawned during the Battle in the Skakdi Fortress, when the Skakdi were driven insane, and the Skakdi Fusion granted their dreams. Omega Pridak was created as the physical manifestation of perfection. His current motive is to obliterate Pridak, as he believes that there is only room for one 'Pridak' in the universe, and as he is the superior being, he should live, and Pridak should die. 

 

Omega Pridak has an arsenal of weaponry, along with three arms. On his upper-right arm, he wields a rhotuka launcher, which fires a rhotuka of disintegration. This rhotuka has so far been proven to obliterate protosteel walls that stretch up to 100 bio. Any mass that isn't disintegrated, is automatically warped to the City of Silver Alternate Universe, after that, the status is unknown. His rhotuka launcher also has targeting mechanisms, which can hit the tiniest and furthest targets perfectly. Below that arm he handles his Razor Shredders, in which he can use to deal a devastating blow. Just the sight of it causes inferior beings to rumble in fear. His right arm has his regular claw hands, which he uses for generic everyday activities, though he can channel his hypnosis power through it, which he uses to take control  over Rahi and the organic creatures of Spherus Magna; such as the Tortoise. His upper left arm contains a modified-squid launcher that works as well as dream-things. Wait, it is because it was made from a dream. This squid launcher works in land, sea and the void of space. This is one of a kind, and can automatically generate Sea Squids for ammo. With these modified ammo, any nutrients sucked are returned to Omega Pridak. Below that are is his Crystal Shield. This can block any projectiles or attack, and can also be used to summon Rahi. His final arm contains another of his neutral claw hands, which he uses to wield his, again, modified Midak Skyblaster, which fires destructive spheres of Energized Protodermis. So basically, when you face Omega Pridak, it is literally up to destiny whether you make it out alive.

 

Omega Pridak also has hypnosis and X-ray vision. His x-ray vision can pierce the atmosphere of Spherus Magna and can detect objects even in the void of space. Through his x-ray vision, he has discovered that a powerful entity known as 'Lehvak-Kal' is orbiting the planet, and he believes that if his power is shared through this being, it can track down and torture Pridak for eternity, until his omeganess is ready to have him finally die.

 

At one point, Omega Pridak attached a Energized Protodermis launching Midak Skyblaster to a Shore Turtle which follows him. He has also modified the organic Tortoise species on Spherus Magna to feature heat vision, ten-fold the power of a Shadow Kraata of Heat Vision in modified Rahkshi Armour.

 

Despite Omega Pridak's urge to defeat his counterpart, his destiny is quite the opposite. Destiny is a funny thing. Unknowing to him, his destiny is to merge with Pridak, where they will then locate Vezon and travel to the Okotoverse where the fused Pridak will don the golden skull spider mask, made from raw magic and solid gold, and rule the island of Okoto, where Gen 2 will finally be confirmed as a continuation!

 

 

Entry Picture: http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Boidoh/Omega-Pridak/dsc_3153.png

Gallery: http://www.majhost.c...ry.cgi?f=290038

Edited October 23, 2014 by Boidoh

[Axilus Prime]

That is the most convoluted bio I have ever read and I sincerely hope you did that purely for the sake of humor.

 

First off: That picture is huge. Maybe a few smaller versions would help? That took several minutes to load, and normally my connection loads pictures just fine.

 

Second: Uh...The design's even more convoluted. He looks like you tried to give him as many spikes, weapons, and random armor pieces as possible, and it basically makes him look like one big clutterfunk. He also doesn't have enough white on his body to go with his head. It looks kinda like someone stuffed a bunch of knives into a ball of biomass, decapitated Pridak, slapped his head on, then threw the whole thing into a pool of Energized Protodermis just to see what would happen.

 

Sorry if that seems rude. But personally I don't like this thing much. There's always room for improvement though, and who knows, maybe people will like this and I'm just weird.

[Lime Paradox]

Glad to see more people acknowledging Pridak's codpiece in their MOCs, an essential element of Bionicle fanon as established by the classic art piece "pridaks family" by drago-flame

[Pohatu: Uniter of Stone]

Primal Groudon says +1 for not being Kyogre.

[Makuta Luroka]

 

I must thank you for breathing life into my creation, but it is an established fact that OMEGA PRIDAK = Pridak + Brutaka's Sword + Exo-Toa + elemental water.

[Boidoh]

That is the most convoluted bio I have ever read and I sincerely hope you did that purely for the sake of humor.

 

I did that out of boredom.

 

First off: That picture is huge. Maybe a few smaller versions would help? That took several minutes to load, and normally my connection loads pictures just fine.

 

Only the entry picture is huge. The others in the gallery are smaller. I blame the camera...

 

Second: Uh...The design's even more convoluted. He looks like you tried to give him as many spikes, weapons, and random armor pieces as possible, and it basically makes him look like one big clutterfunk. He also doesn't have enough white on his body to go with his head. It looks kinda like someone stuffed a bunch of knives into a ball of biomass, decapitated Pridak, slapped his head on, then threw the whole thing into a pool of Energized Protodermis just to see what would happen.

 

That was the original idea, to have him form from EP, after being made from the dreams of maddened Skakdi, but then decided he would be too OP.

 

Sorry if that seems rude. But personally I don't like this thing much. There's always room for improvement though, and who knows, maybe people will like this and I'm just weird.

 

No. Every opinion counts. This is literally the first big MOC I've ever made... Any tips for my next entry?

I should mention that I don't have a ton of sets, so I just worked with what I had. I ordered parts from BrickLink, and the first set will reach Mid-November, and sadly, the better batch in December...

I really wanted a glow in the dark one...

 

Comments in bold.

 

I must thank you for breathing life into my creation, but it is an established fact that OMEGA PRIDAK = Pridak + Brutaka's Sword + Exo-Toa + elemental water.

 

I only ever found out about Omega Pridak through the MakutaFest chat.

I just made the thing, then decided on a name after, and it sounded most epic.

This version of Omega Pridak was made by the dreams of maddened Skakdi, so maybe the dreamer didn't know.

[Makuta Luroka]

 

I must thank you for breathing life into my creation, but it is an established fact that OMEGA PRIDAK = Pridak + Brutaka's Sword + Exo-Toa + elemental water.

 

I only ever found out about Omega Pridak through the MakutaFest chat.

Yeah Omega Pridak was a reference to my wonderful Pridak in Technic Warzone, hence the weapons and power. He also possesses massive strength and agility.

[Nidhiki of the Shadows]

Um wow.

 

When I heard Omega Pridak I was assuming a CCBS Pridak build. I was not expecting this.

 

This is... crazy. I can't really tell what is going on haha. xD It is indeed a convoluted build, but I can see some areas of greatness like the interesting arm and leg design.

 

Regardless, I think it's a step in the right direction but some things are definitely holding it back. I guess in the end all I can say more of something isn't always better. Could use a little less armour.

 

-NotS

Edited October 23, 2014 by Nidhiki of the Shadows

[Boidoh]

I am disassembling his omeganess later today to work on my next entry. Would you mind telling me my pros and cons?

[Arzaki]

The turtle is the best part.

[Boidoh]

Is that good or bad?

[Mysterious Minifig]

When I look at it, all I see is a big mess of weapons and it is almost impossible for me to tell what is going on. I don't think that is what you are aiming for. It would probably have been better to just focus on a single weapon instead of three different weapons. The little Bionicle turtle in the corner is really cute though.

 

As an FYI, you really should change the main picture to something smaller, or resave the current one as a jpg. My computer said the current main picture is 119 MB and it took almost 4 minutes to load.

 

[Boidoh]

Thanks for the constructive critisism. I agree, looking back on this MOC, it does look like that. This was my first large scale MOC, and comments like these really make me improve in my future ones. And I will also take that into consideration, and add little rahi in the corner or something similar.

 

I won't bother changing this one, since it probably wont win anyways. The others are considerably smaller, since they were not accidentally taken in RAW format.