-Radiance- Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 (edited) Hello, everyone. I'm back at comic making. Let's hope I do better this time around... Comic I - Boring intro is boring... And half sized!Filler I - Filler Make! PGSs [0/10]---------- I'd like C&C, because my comics usually suck, so I need feedback. Credit:RZ, Emkay, and a whole bunch of other people... -Radiance Edited November 1, 2011 by -Radiance- Quote Give me attention! Mwahaha. I'm back, and I've changed my attitude. I'm sure you all missed me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 Eh, not a bad start. Text is a leeetle hard to read, and the joke was lackluster. But that's how intro jokes go usually. I liked the field-nui part. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Radiance- Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 Thanks. I'll change the font. Quote Give me attention! Mwahaha. I'm back, and I've changed my attitude. I'm sure you all missed me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted November 2, 2011 Share Posted November 2, 2011 Well I think it is good for your first new comic. i like that you were able to write backwards. The only thing I found wrong was the same thing King Joe said and that i think maybe a short introduction or a character sheet should accompany the comic considering I've never read any of your previous comics so I don't know your characters. All in all this is a good start. Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Radiance- Posted November 2, 2011 Author Share Posted November 2, 2011 The only characters are those shown. What do you mean; you don't know my characters? Quote Give me attention! Mwahaha. I'm back, and I've changed my attitude. I'm sure you all missed me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 So if your head is on backwards, you talk backwards?That is awesome. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Radiance- Posted November 3, 2011 Author Share Posted November 3, 2011 Yep. I haven't been able to make new comics yet. Next one will be up maybe tomorrow. Quote Give me attention! Mwahaha. I'm back, and I've changed my attitude. I'm sure you all missed me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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