Ragnar Lothbrok Posted October 26, 2014 Share Posted October 26, 2014 (edited) Here is where you can review my epic - 'The Resistance' C&C are appreciated and encouraged. Thanks Edited October 26, 2014 by Gathered Friends Quote Twitter: @enkindle_this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onaku Posted October 27, 2014 Share Posted October 27, 2014 What you've got so far is very interesting. I'd be lying if I said I wasn't looking forward to the next entry. Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted October 28, 2014 Share Posted October 28, 2014 Ooh, really like that Toa team. But the mention of Bomonga confused me; is he just a Matoran in this universe? Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragnar Lothbrok Posted October 29, 2014 Author Share Posted October 29, 2014 Ooh, really like that Toa team. But the mention of Bomonga confused me; is he just a Matoran in this universe? Yup. The turning point is during the Barraki's reign, so I considered that there would be a couple of existing Toa that might still be Matoran. Quote Twitter: @enkindle_this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gifthammer Posted November 13, 2014 Share Posted November 13, 2014 Chapter 4 brings some really interesting developments. I really love the depth of character you've put into Ahkmou here, making him conflicted about his emotions vs. wanting to do what's right. Quote Every hero is born from his enemy; every leader, his followers; and every father, his children. Metru Nui: the Fall My 3D printing designs on Thingiverse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kanohi of jello Posted January 26, 2015 Share Posted January 26, 2015 holy Mata NUI COW! that was good! Honestly I often find myself despising the fictional stories made on here, but this one is GOOD. although cliche at times, I think the whole 'alternate universe' thing works really well for this story. The only thing I could suggest is maybe a little more background about the world and what things are like (voya+mata nui s, what happened to icarax and teridax,etc), but you're probably gonna get to that stuff anyway.Keep up the good work! Excitedly waiting for more! Quote move along. nothing to see here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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