King of Dust

[CeeCee]

King of Dust

 

It was when an orange sky turned to grey

And the Sun died out in the winter fray       

The angel with no wings cried out for her kingdom

As the fires rose high over her legion

And mortal men were cast aside

For this was the time for the Demons to ride

And the King sat and smiled n his throne

As he looked at his brother made of bone

And a single tear shed down his cheek

But the Demon of Death did not speak

Though he looked for the sun but the sky was bleak

And as the King settled down his gaze

And wiped his eyes from with dusty haze

He saw what sort of a man he’d become

And that all of his regret had not gone

And all that he saw was a kingdom of dust

Where old ships were left to rust

But as he looked up with awe

Oh the demon king he saw

The sun shone through the murky clouds

He let a sobbing screech aloud

And as his teary eyes shut tight

He knew that even dust could turn to gold in sunlightIt was when an orange sky turned to grey

And the Sun died out in the winter fray       

The angel with no wings cried out for her kingdom

As the fires rose high over her legion

And mortal men were cast aside

For this was the time for the Demons to ride

And the King sat and smiled n his throne

As he looked at his brother made of bone

And a single tear shed down his cheek

But the Demon of Death did not speak

Though he looked for the sun but the sky was bleak

And as the King settled down his gaze

And wiped his eyes from with dusty haze

He saw what sort of a man he’d become

And that all of his regret had not gone

And all that he saw was a kingdom of dust

Where old ships were left to rust

But as he looked up with awe

Oh the demon king he saw

The sun shone through the murky clouds

He let a sobbing screech aloud

And as his teary eyes shut tight

He knew that even dust could turn to gold in sunlight

 

 

 

 

 

Comments and criticism appreciated. Its just a poem about a book I eventually plan to write. Dont know if I ever will though. Put this together in about 10 mins and you can probably tell. Just wanted to share anyway.

 

Thanks.

Edited October 26, 2014 by King of Dust

[UngluedBike]

*write

 

 

 

 

Edit: It's recommended to leave more detailed feedback. For next time, though!

-Wind-

Edited October 27, 2014 by -Windrider-

[CeeCee]

*write

Hey well spotted.

 

No offence though, I would actually like feed back on the poem and not my after-post