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#11401 Offline Shard the Gemknight Toa

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Posted May 31 2015 - 12:30 AM

 

Upon Dane's request without a reason, I bring back Alpha for approval. Most of this is copy paste.

 

Name: Alpha

Variation: Magnetism

Level: 2

Gender: Female

Gear:

  • A halberd.
  • Inside her Kraata case, she has a picture of the batch they were in before she was taken.  And a picture of what he would look like if he was still alive. There's also a crude, yet cute, drawing she made while in solitude of the two of them together.
  • She also has a tomahawk and a knife mounted on her thighs.
  • Omega's axe, Forge-Biter, a weapon made for Matoran and can heat up. Granted by Fang.

Skills:

  • Polearm Fighting: She knows how to use her halberd. And use it well along with any other stick or spear-based weapon.
  • Throwing Darts, Knifes, and Tomahawks: She learned about how to throw and create darts when she was in solitary by forming the metal shell, peeling it off, and then rolling, pressuring, and sharpening the trace metals into plates to make a makeshift dart. She managed to throw her darts accurately 3 out of 5 times. She can also throw her knife and tomahawk, but prefers not to.
  • Knowledge of weak spots/pressure points in most Rahkshi suits: In her training she frequently sparred against other Rahkshi. She immediately went on to learning how to wreak havoc on the suit itself to make it easier to attack the Rahkshi.

Appearance: The same as Omega. Except the purple stripe on his head makes an A, and she doesn't have his bulky look. Instead she's more slender and agile.

Personality: She's different from Omega who, instead of charging straight on, she thinks and plans ahead. She has a grudge against the killer of her brother, who she doesn't know yet, and plots to avenge Omega one day. But she doesn't want to make the same mistake as her brother. Now that Exxan is dead though, she's feeling lost since avenging Omega was the only reason she originally came.

Bio:

Unbeknownst to Omega, he had a twin sister. Alpha was promptly taken away as she was chosen to be part of Chirox's study at a young age before Omega would ever know he had one in spite of those saying that they should stay and learn together. She was put to a specialized training regime before taking her to the academy in order to test the limits of the new one since Tridax wouldn't give his rivals the data on the Rahkshi at the academy. Around the end of her training she learned that her brother died in the academy. Horrified by the news of her brother's death, she wanted to the Makuta to send her to Corpus Rahkshi to avenge her brother. She was sent to Corpus Rahkshi as soon as she was done.

Immediately after meeting Fang and co. she realized that she didn't really want to kill Omega's killer, minus the fact that he didn't believe that Omega had a twin sister. This was also enforced by Fang, who told her not to do so. And now that Exxan is dead, Alpha is relieved that her brother can be at peace...but what about her?

 

 

 

Name: Toxin
Variation: Poison
Level: 2
Gender: Male
Gear : He has a bag that can carry a max of 10 Kunai and 10 Shurikens. He has two Kusarigama.

Skills: Acrobatics, Karate
Extra Gear

  • 10 tiny pouches filled with his slime Lost
  • Grapple Gun Lost
  • Heavy Metal Guitar stolen from Discord Nailed onto Discord's pedestal
  • 20 other replacement kunai stashed in a box
  • A Skinmail headband (decorative)

Appearance: Body Armor is similar to a samurai's. He's also green. He has only two spines and a tail with no uses. He wears a Skinmail headband to remember his brother.
Personality/Battle Style: Somewhat anti-social but is kind to friendly people. He likes to eats and only reads and learns if it can help him with his battling and Rahkshi skills. He has an appreciation for music. His specialty in using his poison in several methods requires the use of more weapons, which he doesn't have access to at this time. He can be suspicious of others easily and he wants to search for the truth. He is the second youngest of the three brothers, but is considerably the most mature of them, so he often has to make sure that both of his siblings are okay and not being arrogant/overconfident. He is very spontaneous in battle and has a freestyle battling form involving ninja moves, acrobatics, and stuff which makes him very unpredictable when fighting him. He is also brutal when finishing his opponents. He tends to flip and somersault and dodge a lot, but as he is no Dodge Rahkshi, he can still be hit.

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Name: Bullseye
Variation: Accuracy
Level: 2
Gender: Male
Gear: Boomerang and Bow w/ Scope

Skills: Parkour, Minor Blacksmithing, Minor Arrow Crafting, Minor Technology Engineering
Extra Gear

  • A quiver that can carry a max of 10 arrows of Bullseye's choice
  • 5 regular arrows (Or 10 if he cleans his poisoned arrows)
  • 5 barbed arrows
  • 5 arrows that has Toxin's poison (Lv.2)
  • Grapple Gun
  • A crude knife (Given to him by Deadeye)
  • A pack of playing cards. (Face cards: King - Teridax; Queen - Roodaka; Jack - Sidorak; Ten - The Shadowed One; Nine - Karzahni; Eight - Voporak; Seven - Zaktan; Six - Pridak; Five - Irnakk; Four - Nocturn; Three - Nidhiki; Two - Krekka; Ace - Tuyet; Joker - Vezon)
  • A Skinmail Glove (Decorative)

Appearance: Has a cowboy hat that never leaves his head. Looks somewhat like a Rahkshi-ed Toa, but stands upright as his spine thing is shorter having two spikes. Has a pair of reading glasses to read, but doesn't use them in battle. He has blue body and purple limbs like a normal variant of Accuracy Rahkshi. He wears a Skinmail glove to remember his brother.
Personality/Battle Style: Friendly to everyone, and encourages Toxin to do the same. He wants to seek the truth and will even do good things to find it. He is a somewhat cultured person and so he is a pianist with a taste for the classical, which doesn't really count as evil music. (Which was why he was originally banned to do it before coming to Corpus Rahkshi.) He is a survivalist, and unlike most Rahkshi, he's enjoys hunting in the forests on Nynrah. Because of his hunting expeditions, he often reads books about Rahi and survival. He has some culinary skills, if being able to make jerky out of any Rahi a culinary skill. And lately he has gained a taste for technology and is practicing the construction of gizmos. He just wants to find he truth and has a conspiracy about what could be the true nature of the school. He also has photographic memory and that means that if you make him mad, he will remember you. His mood and demeanor changes randomly. In battle, he'll often track his opponents carefully. Unlike Toxin, he is more calculating and plans out his moves before action. He can sometimes be competitive, and thus after a victory he attains an ego that makes his observational skills improve, but often gives the wrong impression of egotistic and arrogant. That ego can only be suppressed by his brother, Toxin. He runs a lot and is an expert in parkour, but doesn't dodge well. He stay behind others while he fires his bow.
He's been depressed for a while and contemplated why he exists since his skills are subpar. But he's over that now.


Here's a drawing.

Combined Bio (Both have a similar story):
Both were born from the same Makuta, so you can say they're brothers. Bullseye is the older brother. They're very new to the school, so they doesn't know anyone...or where to go.

They originated from the Tren Krom Peninsula, and was allowed to stay for a week to bond with Stronghold, who was born and given a suit a day after. They had lots of fun exploring and fighting. They even made friends with some of the De-Matoran (Just as long as they were quiet.) Eventually they had to leave and it took months to get to Nynrah.

Before they went to the school they went to have weapons created for them. Unable to pay a certain Ghost in Phantom-on-the-Water, they were about to leave, until a horde of Brakas came in and took the Ghost's tools. The Ghost gave them two spears and decided that if they killed the Brakas and took back his tools, he would craft whatever they wanted. He must've been desperate or had no way to access no supplies as he accepted a list for all the weapons they want.

As they went to find the Brakas, they found an abandoned farmhouse, where Toxin decided to take two sickles. The Brakas were easy to find with Bullseye's tracking skills, but killing them was hard. However, using the slime from Toxin's slime trail, they managed to nauseate them long enough to kill them. The Nynrah Ghost was particularly happy and built all their weapons for them. He also improved those farmhand sickles to be like this. They often return to the Ghost, now with lots of money gained from other pest control missions, to purchase ammo and upgrades.

One day, both Rahkshi were met with the idea (thanks to Wraith) that the Makuta were, in fact, tyrants, and they thought. If it was true, then what other lies had been fed to them. They decided on searching for the truth in most, if not all, things. However, some things about that conflicted with the ideals of the Makuta, but they thought, "if the search for truth involves justice, then so be it." After Toxin discovers a book called the Book of History that confirms their qualms. They form a small group called the Dimir, later called the Trinity to include their brother. They later become part of the Abyss. Bullseye recently went to the Ghosts to get kusarigamas, shuriken, and a boomerang.

 

With the disappearance of the founding members of the Abyss and the leaving of Stronghold and Punch, the Trinity has no reason to exist. Recently Bullseye and Toxin got themselves into lots of trouble, mostly Toxin who notably isn't wearing a suit. With no reason to do much, and with every reason to be safe, they decided to mainly hang out in Toxin's dorm until Tridax procure Toxin a new suit. Then who knows?

The Trinity (Brothers united!)
Toxin
Bullseye
Stronghold

Edited profiles to be more relevant.

 

 

 

Anyone else want to join the band?


Also, Arctic, how did the door fix itself?

The school is made of a sentient rock that self repairs.


Edited by ArcticFreeze17, May 31 2015 - 12:31 AM.

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#11402 Offline Nato The Traveler

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Posted May 31 2015 - 01:28 AM

The rock will also eat you if you're mean to it. :D


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#11403 Offline In Between the Shadows

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Posted May 31 2015 - 04:03 AM

For example: Kat when she punched threw the door. It tried to eat her arm.


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#11404 Offline Nato The Traveler

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Posted May 31 2015 - 04:11 AM

Kat has a bad history with things trying to eat her arm....


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#11405 Offline Rahkshi Lalonde

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Posted May 31 2015 - 04:19 AM

(i think i'll try to join this here, it looks fun. i believe this is the place to put rahkshi profiles to be approved, yes?)

 

Name: Snap
Variation: Teleport
Level: 2
Gender: Female-identifying (She/Her)
Gear: two curved blades that can be put together into a simple shield, a (seemingly) endless supply of roses.
Appearance: thin shoulders (for a rahkshi) and hooked spines down her back. despite looking fairly rahkshi-standard, her face has been described as "incredibly punchable".
Personality: dramatic, loud, and sometimes quite sarcastic. She likes to defy rules, and has jumped out at least three distinct windows in the past. she believes herself the best at making an entrance/exit, and takes pride in her combination compliments/insults.
Bio: For as long as she's been in Corpus Rahkshi, Snap has been scheming to get out of Corpus Rahkshi, with plans far too complex to digest in one sitting, or too expensive to pull off with a rahk's time or budget, She can usually be found in or around the Library, waiting to reveal "the plan" of the day to any rahk within hearing range.

 

(tried to keep her interesting w/out going overboard or anything, hope it worked. :0)


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#11406 Offline Wyrd Bid Ful Araed

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Posted May 31 2015 - 05:11 AM

Roses? She just keeping a huge stash of them on her person somewhere?


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#11407 Offline Nato The Traveler

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Posted May 31 2015 - 05:12 AM

Well, to be fair, there are other characters who have seemingly endless supplies of certain objects.

 

No one ever seems to run out of arrows, for example. 


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#11408 Offline Rahkshi Lalonde

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Posted May 31 2015 - 05:14 AM

i used the "(seemingly)" to imply a sense of restocking somewhere, but yes, there is a notable number on her person at all times, in various states of wilting or otherwise crumpling.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 05:26 AM

A'ight, Snap is approved then


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Posted May 31 2015 - 08:38 AM

This guy died at the hands of Shark.

 

Name: Fader

Variation: Chameleon

Level: 2

Gender: Male


Gear: He carries a modified Kanoka launcher that has a magazine consisting of five level four teleportation disks. His goggles allow telescopic vision when used.

Appearance: The rahkshi is painted navy blue and black instead of red and gold in order to be hidden in dark areas or at night. His feet are padded in order to make less noise when moving and his frame is skinnier, smaller and lighter than a normal Rahkshi shell. The rahkshi's head is modified to have Akaku scopes that can be deployed when necessary. When in use, they look like night vision goggles. He lacks a spine, a trait shared only by Tangirahk for different reasons.

Personality: Fader appears to be shy and quiet to most people, but he is simply remaining quiet because he believes unnecessary sound gives him away. He believes information is power and eavesdrops whenever he can in order to gain valuable information. The only time he speaks is when he addresses his father or wants to gain more information and must speak to whoever he needs to question.

Bio: A Makuta known as the "Ghostly Killer", believed there were many people who were out to get him, especially Makuta Tridax. He created the chameleon Rahkshi and sent him to various locations in order to get valuable intel on his potential enemies. After proving to be extremely effective, as Fader warned the Ghostly Killer of a group of toa recruited by the dark hunters to eliminate him. The Ghostly Killer sent his offspring to Corpus Rahkshi after Fader kept requesting he be allowed to visit the school. 
On 7/5/2015, he was killed by Shark after being thrown into the sea.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 10:18 AM

Hey Wielder, I'm still waiting on a Response to my last Nightmare Post.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 10:21 AM

Well, to be fair, there are other characters who have seemingly endless supplies of certain objects.
 
No one ever seems to run out of arrows, for example.


My first battle for instance...all dat kunai.

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Posted May 31 2015 - 10:46 AM

Sorry about that! Will respond after this. Anyways....

Name: Malattia

Variation: Gravity

Gender: Neutral, but will generally go by as female.

Level: 2

Gear: two short blades(the blades are shaped like a halo energy sword, and retract into the gauntlets she wears), gauntlets where her blades retract into, bag for medication(see below), a trumpet, a case of pills that are synthetic adrenaline(see below)

Appearance: a slightly shorter than average Rahk, colored white and purple. Her spines are fairly long and thin.

Personality: Malattia is sarcastic and quick-witted, but is also very sensitive towards violence. They would rather be working inside reading or working on a cure for some sort of disease, practicing on their trumpet, or just reading. That said, Malattia is surprisingly strong and fast for her size- at first. However, the more she fights or runs or uses their strength to push, pull, or pick up something, the faster they are weakened by a type of venom in their blood stream, both kraata and Rahkshi suit. This venom could cause them to die if they work too hard.

Bio: Chirox had an idea one day: what if he could make a Rahkshi stronger by a sort of serum? Well, he developed one, and injected into a Rahkshi and a kraata, which he did not know was sentient. Needless to say, he was surprised when the Rahkshi asked what he had injected into them. Still, the results proved promising at first- the Rahkshi was stronger and faster than any of her comrades, save those that could increase their speed or strength. However, as the testing went on, Malattia becam weaker and weaker, near the point of death. Chirox quickly injected adrenaline into the blood stream of the Rahkshi, which would travel to the kraata, and that seemed to make it as if she had just taken that serum. She was sent to Corpus with a bag and a pill case, partly because it was a rule you had to send all sentient Rahks to the school, partly because Chirox did not want to deal with a sick Rahkshi all the time.

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#11414 Offline Timageness

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Posted May 31 2015 - 01:32 PM

Well, to be fair, there are other characters who have seemingly endless supplies of certain objects.

 

No one ever seems to run out of arrows, for example. 

*Whistles innocently as two of my Rahkshi load their respective weaponry.*


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Posted May 31 2015 - 02:00 PM

Kay, I'm back.
Quick recap of the things that have gone down with my chars & what has been happening in Corpus would be nice.
Also don't speak of Grokk here - we don't need him hopping RPG's like Beetlejuice.

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Posted May 31 2015 - 02:13 PM

Doubt has been selected to be interrogated first. Unfortunately for Grim, there's nothing in Doubt to get out of him, considering he's not a traitor.


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#11417 Offline Kovika: Visorak Lord

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Posted May 31 2015 - 02:24 PM

Doubt is going to be interrogated, and he is a loyalist. Haken is probably going to be brought to interrogation, and he is a loyalist.
I'm just laughing at the conversation that is going to happen.

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Posted May 31 2015 - 02:48 PM

Mar'jik's not a traitor either.
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Posted May 31 2015 - 03:07 PM

True, but they did help out a rebel, which unfortunately in the eyes of Tridax means they are traitors. Sidonas, on the other hand, knows full well of Kat and Fang and their disguises. He is also a full blown rebel too.
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#11420 Offline Ghidora131

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Posted May 31 2015 - 03:15 PM

Doubt prevented Grim, Draco and Subject from killing someone without Tridax's consent.

 

It appears they listened to his advice, though.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 03:20 PM

Someone who openly declared his rebellion. And they were going to bring him to Tridax anyways, due to the fact that he declared himself as a traitor.
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#11422 Offline Ghidora131

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Posted May 31 2015 - 03:40 PM

From the scene, it appeared Grim wouldn't stop until he was mincemeat.

 

And MCGPY, it's not nice to autohit. Please edit.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 03:45 PM

I.C. Taltrun
Taltrun made it to the medical office, and broke in. He cleaned his wounds and took some pain killers. As he walked out, he saw Cordak. He charged at him, and tackled him. Taltrun pinned him to the ground.
 
"Heya punk.  Remember me.  I'm all better now."
 
Taltrun drew his sword and held it to Cordak's neck.

 
Yeah, MCGPY, you're going to have to edit this. You've posted that your attack was successful without giving the other player a chance to respond. That's called an autohit, and it's frowned upon as cheating. Here's what a fixed post might look like:
 

I.C. Taltrun
Taltrun made it to the medical office, and broke in. He cleaned his wounds and took some pain killers. As he walked out, he saw Cordak. He charged at him, attempting to tackle him and pin him to the ground.
 
"Heya punk.  Remember me.  I'm all better now.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 03:45 PM

True, but a traitor in the eyes of Grim is someone who should be executed publicly to show message.

Also, MCGPY, Palma is the one who heals you, not painkillers. That part you may want to edit as well.

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Posted May 31 2015 - 04:04 PM

And Palma wouldn't like someone breaking into her infirmary and stealing things...
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#11426 Offline Wyrd Bid Ful Araed

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Posted May 31 2015 - 04:16 PM

Name: Fader

 

Variation: Chameleon

 

Level: 2

Gender: Male

 

Gear: He carries a modified Kanoka launcher that has a magazine consisting of five level four teleportation disks. However, Fader has a limited supply of disks and must escape from school frequently to restock as there is little space to store extra kanoka in his room. His goggles allow telescopic vision when used. 

 

Appearance: The rahkshi is painted navy blue and black instead of red and gold in order to be hidden in dark areas or at night. His feet are padded in order to make less noise when moving and his frame is skinnier, smaller and lighter than a normal Rahkshi shell. The rahkshi's head is modified to have Akaku scopes that can be deployed when necessary. When in use, they look like night vision goggles. He lacks a spine, a trait shared only by Tangirahk for different reasons. 

 

Personality: Fader appears to be shy and quiet to most people, but he is simply remaining quiet because he believes unnecessary sound gives him away. He believes information is power and eavesdrops whenever he can in order to gain valuable information. The only time he speaks is when he addresses his father or wants to gain more information and must speak to whoever he needs to question.

 

Bio: A Makuta known as the "Ghostly Killer", believed there were many people who were out to get him, especially Makuta Tridax. He created the chameleon Rahkshi and sent him to various locations in order to get valuable intel on his potential enemies. After proving to be extremely effective, as Fader warned the Ghostly Killer of a group of toa recruited by the dark hunters to eliminate him. Fader discovered Corpus Rahkshi after breaking into Tridax's lair to steal prototypes from him when he heard the Makuta mumbling something about a Rahkshi School. Interested in this revelation, he was sent to Corpus Rahkshi to scout the location and grab any intel he could. 

You know you can re-use Kanoka disks right? You'd just have to retrieve them from wherever you fired them

Also, he doesn't need espionage to find out about Corpus Rahkshi, its common knowledge amongst the Makuta. Tridax writes them reports and everything

 

Name: Malattia

Variation: Gravity

Gender: None

Level: 2

Gear: two short blades(the blades are shaped like a halo energy sword, and retract into the gauntlets she wears), gauntlets where her blades retract into, bag for medication(see below), a trumpet, several hypodermic needles with adrenaline(see below)

Appearance: a slightly shorter than average Rahk, colored white and purple. Her spines are fairly long and thin.

Personality: Malattia can be fairly grouchy and short tempered, but is also very sensitive towards violence. They would rather be working inside reading or working on a cure for some sort of disease, practicing on their trumpet, or just reading. That said, Malattia is surprisingly strong and fast for her size- at first. However, the more she fights or runs or uses their strength to push, pull, or pick up something, the faster they are weakened by a type of venom in their blood stream, both kraata and Rahkshi suit. This venom could cause them to die if they work too hard.

Bio: Chirox had an idea one day: what if he could make a Rahkshi stronger by a sort of serum? Well, he developed one, and injected into a Rahkshi and a kraata, which he did not know was sentient. Needless to say, he was surprised when the Rahkshi asked what he had injected into them. Still, the results proved promising at first- the Rahkshi was stronger and faster than any of her comrades, save those that could increase their speed or strength. However, as the testing went on, Malattia becam weaker and weaker, near the point of death. Chirox quickly injected adrenaline into the blood stream of the Rahkshi, which would travel to the kraata, and that seemed to make it as if she had just taken that serum. She was sent to Corpus with a bag of adrenaline-filled hypodermic needles, partly because it was a rule you had to send all sentient Rahks to the school, partly because Chirox did not want to deal with a sick Rahkshi all the time.

 

Could I get more information on what this serum does? How much faster and stronger than normal does it make Malattia? How quickly does it start to negatively impact them? How would they be getting more adrenaline to replace the syringes they use


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#11427 Offline Sassy Dalmation

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Posted May 31 2015 - 04:30 PM

The serum at full strength would only last two or three posts before Malattia becomes average speed and strength in a fight, and four or five before they are weaker than normal, but it would last longer if they were lounging around reading. As for how strong it would make them, they would be able to overpower your average Rahk with some difficulty, but not someone like Subject or Draco. As for speed, they would generally be faster than all Rahkshi, but one who was using their powers to speed themself up would beat Malattia with some difficulty when Malattia just took an adrenaline shot. As for where to get replacements, I would imagine Palma having the syringes somewhere in a medical cabinet of hers, although adrenaline would be a bit harder... There are pills that are basically synthetic adrenaline(epinephrine) that are simply over-the-counter. Would perhaps a sort of pill work better? And would Palma have these sort of things if a Rahkshi was sick?

Edited by Wielder-of-Shadow, May 31 2015 - 04:33 PM.

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#11428 Offline MCGPY

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Posted May 31 2015 - 04:35 PM

I.C. Taltrun
Taltrun made it to the medical office, and broke in. He cleaned his wounds and took some pain killers. As he walked out, he saw Cordak. He charged at him, and tackled him. Taltrun pinned him to the ground.
 
"Heya punk.  Remember me.  I'm all better now."
 
Taltrun drew his sword and held it to Cordak's neck.

 
Yeah, MCGPY, you're going to have to edit this. You've posted that your attack was successful without giving the other player a chance to respond. That's called an autohit, and it's frowned upon as cheating. Here's what a fixed post might look like:
 

I.C. Taltrun
Taltrun made it to the medical office, and broke in. He cleaned his wounds and took some pain killers. As he walked out, he saw Cordak. He charged at him, attempting to tackle him and pin him to the ground.
 
"Heya punk.  Remember me.  I'm all better now.


Ok

Also, MCGPY, Palma is the one who heals you, not painkillers. That part you may want to edit as well.


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#11429 Offline Sergei Rahkmaninoff

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Posted May 31 2015 - 04:55 PM

I.C. Taltrun
Taltrun made it to the medical office, and broke in. He cleaned his wounds and took some palma. As he walked out, he saw Cordak. He charged at him, and atempted tackled him. Taltrun pinned him to the ground.
 
"Heya punk.  Remember me.  I'm all better now."
 
Taltrun drew his sword and held it to Cordak's neck.

 

I don't think you understand... You can't say that your attack was successful like this, that's an autohit and it's cheating. You can say that you tried to attack someone, but not that the attack succeeded - the person being attacked needs to have the chance to decide that in their response.* You're going to need to edit that again, I'm afraid.

 

Also, Palma is a Rahkshi, not a medicine. :) You might want to look over the first post, where she and the rest of the school is described, again.

 

*Within reason, of course. It's equally frowned upon to dodge or otherwise unconditionally escape every attack thrown at you, and some attacks are more easily dodged than others.


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#11430 Offline Wyrd Bid Ful Araed

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Posted May 31 2015 - 05:00 PM

Yeah, I'm going to echo Rahkmaninoff, MCGPY. Kind of feels like you haven't read the first post as throughly as you could, since Palma is clearly listed as a character there

 

 

The serum at full strength would only last two or three posts before Malattia becomes average speed and strength in a fight, and four or five before they are weaker than normal, but it would last longer if they were lounging around reading. As for how strong it would make them, they would be able to overpower your average Rahk with some difficulty, but not someone like Subject or Draco. As for speed, they would generally be faster than all Rahkshi, but one who was using their powers to speed themself up would beat Malattia with some difficulty when Malattia just took an adrenaline shot. As for where to get replacements, I would imagine Palma having the syringes somewhere in a medical cabinet of hers, although adrenaline would be a bit harder... There are pills that are basically synthetic adrenaline(epinephrine) that are simply over-the-counter. Would perhaps a sort of pill work better? And would Palma have these sort of things if a Rahkshi was sick?

 

Pill might be better, if only because they're easier to store and take. I don't think Palma would have any to hand, but might start getting them if there was a greater need for them.

Is this serum always on? I assumed it was a thing that needed to be activated, but is it always boosting Malattia's stats? Do they need to be constantly doping themselves on adrenaline then, or does that only kick in if they start pushing themselves above and beyond their normal limits?


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Posted May 31 2015 - 05:13 PM

It is always on, but the serum drains them faster when they are in a fight or race. They avoid fights for this very reason. So yeah, they do need to dope a lot unfortunately, which is generally why Malattia always has a case of the pills on them. However, if they take a pill while they are at full strength, they could risk serious illness or death. So Malattia has to take one when they are weakened quite a bit.
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#11432 Offline Dallior

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Posted May 31 2015 - 06:53 PM

Also, MCGPY, Karzfire tried to get Taltrun to the healer's office. He was directly over him, about to help him up.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 06:58 PM

 

IC: Subject

Subject nodded, and obediently began his journey to the Couldron, where the Cyclone rahk had gone.

OOC: Open for interaction.

 

 

IC: Subject

Considerably loud footsteps could be heard outside the Cauldron, as Subject approached...

 

Hey Dane, I know Tridax sent Subject to go find Sliver, but how would he have immediately known she was in the Cauldron? No one saw her leave, so it seems kind of metagamey for him to instantly know exactly where she is. 


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Posted May 31 2015 - 07:07 PM

I would have assumed the Loyalists would have noticed her heading for the Cauldron, but I'll edit.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 07:14 PM

By the time she saw Sidonas and left, the other Loyalists were already busy attacking their own targets. 


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Posted May 31 2015 - 08:16 PM

I got a new character.Name: FaderVariation: ChameleonLevel: 2
Gender: Male
Gear: He carries a modified Kanoka launcher that has a magazine consisting of five level four teleportation disks. His goggles allow telescopic vision when used. Appearance: The rahkshi is painted navy blue and black instead of red and gold in order to be hidden in dark areas or at night. His feet are padded in order to make less noise when moving and his frame is skinnier, smaller and lighter than a normal Rahkshi shell. The rahkshi's head is modified to have Akaku scopes that can be deployed when necessary. When in use, they look like night vision goggles. He lacks a spine, a trait shared only by Tangirahk for different reasons. Personality: Fader appears to be shy and quiet to most people, but he is simply remaining quiet because he believes unnecessary sound gives him away. He believes information is power and eavesdrops whenever he can in order to gain valuable information. The only time he speaks is when he addresses his father or wants to gain more information and must speak to whoever he needs to question.Bio: A Makuta known as the "Ghostly Killer", believed there were many people who were out to get him, especially Makuta Tridax. He created the chameleon Rahkshi and sent him to various locations in order to get valuable intel on his potential enemies. After proving to be extremely effective, as Fader warned the Ghostly Killer of a group of toa recruited by the dark hunters to eliminate him. The Ghostly Killer sent his offspring to Corpus Rahkshi after Fader kept requesting he be allowed to visit the school.

Post has been edited. I originally said he had to restock on Kanoka since in the gen 1 story, kanoka lost their powers when used too often.

Edited by Liuth, May 31 2015 - 08:26 PM.

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Posted May 31 2015 - 08:20 PM

 

I.C. Taltrun
Taltrun made it to the medical office, and broke in. He cleaned his wounds and took some palma. As he walked out, he saw Cordak. He charged at him, and atempted tackled him. Taltrun pinned him to the ground.
 
"Heya punk.  Remember me.  I'm all better now."
 
Taltrun drew his sword and held it to Cordak's neck.

IC: Cordak snarled and shifted into a lava eel, turning up the heat.

 

 
I hate to bug you again, but this isn't exactly possible. I would encourage you, and all our other new players, to read the BS01 Kraata Variations page. It explains what you can and can't do at level two, where all new Rahkshi start. For shapeshifting, it says:
 

Can wriggle free of all but the strongest of grasps.

Has the ability to slither through the smallest passages.

 

...which is nowhere near the ability to perfectly replicate a Rahi, including its powers. Not even a Shadow Kraata can do that.


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Posted May 31 2015 - 08:25 PM

 

IC: Subject

I couldn't see the Rahkshi of Cyclones at the causeway. The only place beyond that was the village, and I doubted that Silver would have gone there to chase the foolish traitor. The only other place was the Cauldron. It was worth a look. Subject began to stomp his way towards the Cauldron..

 

Um.... I thought you said you were going to edit?

 

Sliver could be anywhere in the school, or down on the beach, or further out on the Causeway, or absolutely anywhere over on the mainland. Subject immediately deciding she must be in a cave ten minutes flight away makes no sense at all. 

 

And if Subject is newly arrived at the school, he shouldn't even know about the Cauldron. 


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Posted May 31 2015 - 08:30 PM

Click, you just linked to a Bionifight Infinite page. XD
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Posted May 31 2015 - 08:33 PM

Whoops, wrong address. Fixed.


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