Portalfig Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 (edited) Here is a place where one could theoretically tell me how I am doing with Operation Rainfall. This is a canon side-story of Voltex's Mafia Uprising universe. I don't have fancy multiple narrators or anything, though. This is just through Portal's eyes. =P So enjoy this little prequel romp through the world before Scenario Alpha takes place. Comment, rate, subscribe, follow, favorite and share or I'll nom you. Edited December 9, 2014 by Ifgtalrop 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 (edited) That was a lovely first chapterPlease excuse me while I go and actually read it E: Ah yes, the setup chapter! I'm pretty sure the only chapters I read previously were this one and Chapter 1 so I'll keep quiet for now Edited December 9, 2014 by CHRIS PRATT 4 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Wonderful start. Nice prequel to Voltex's Mafia series. Keep it up. 2 Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Portalfig Posted December 16, 2014 Author Share Posted December 16, 2014 Thanks for the kind words, everyone! Feels good to finally start getting this thing out in the open. As well, Chapter One is up! In this chapter, Portal begins his search for answers, and we see many familiar faces. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted December 16, 2014 Share Posted December 16, 2014 Didn't get around to posting sooner, but now I am here, and this is definitely intriguing! I really like your writing style, and the descriptions of the characters' (facial) expressions and stuff; they all appear quite relatable so far. 1 Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Portalfig Posted December 22, 2014 Author Share Posted December 22, 2014 Thanks, Taka! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Here we go, Chapter Two has been released! The next chapter will probably miss a week, but I'm not sure yet. So there may or may not be another chapter next week. I'm not sure which. =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 23, 2014 Share Posted December 23, 2014 Ah yes, we have reached the point where I have not read the chapters! That is making it far more exciting for me. Portalfig's first venture into the Pit was very interesting, although I must point out that MT is a silver-armored Av-Matoran. =P Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Portalfig Posted December 23, 2014 Author Share Posted December 23, 2014 gosh darn it I coulda sworn i checked that first. Fix'd now, I think. Now I gotta recheck the future chapters. *shakes fist* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Portalfig Posted January 20, 2015 Author Share Posted January 20, 2015 We've got a new chapter up finally! In this one, we see a little more naive side of Portal(and myself haha) and I continue to fight the formatting tooth and nail. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted January 25, 2015 Share Posted January 25, 2015 Finally managed to catch up with everything, and it was totally worth it! My favourite part so far was definitely the 'Protalgif'-scene. And the creation of the alter-ego, although I do wonder whether Tavahka suddenly turns out to be a better fighter. We'll see. 1 Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted January 26, 2015 Share Posted January 26, 2015 I caught up...and I can't stop trying to imagine him in the chute. 2 Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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