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Not a bad sketch... up can it really be called a sketch? I mean this is a full drawing, not random lines that will become a coherent image with more work. Then what do I know...

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You know I always love to see femine-yet-armoured characters :D

Hands are really good and for reasons unknown to me at the moment, I like the legs a lot.

Perspective is very good (in particoular on the torso area, where the arms cross), as well as shading. And proportions seem just fine to me.
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Epic! Love the physique and detailed shading. My main criticisms are that the pose feels somewhat awkward (her lower body is very open while her upper body is very closed off), and the mask is very abstracted, so details like the "swim goggles" are very difficult to discern.

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Hoo hoo she so love-el-ly!

 

Always liked how you draw eyes, they suit her here. Good use of form when shaping up those CCBS bits to form more rounded armour. Pretty darn accurate and translates well to your style. I wonder what has her vexed? Maybe Tahu is trying to impress her with push-ups and she's having none of it. Haha.

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This looks great! My only complaint is that it appears you've fallen into the Chest-Mould Trap. A common misconceptions is that armor needs to be molded to a female's chest when in actuality, that could cause all sorts of harm to fall upon the wearer.

 

Either that, or I have no sense of perspective. 

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Not a bad sketch... up can it really be called a sketch? I mean this is a full drawing, not random lines that will become a coherent image with more work. Then what do I know...

 

Oh. Well I call everything I spent less than/ about an hour on a 'sketch'. Sorry. ^^" But thanks, anyway.

 

You know I always love to see femine-yet-armoured characters :D

Hands are really good and for reasons unknown to me at the moment, I like the legs a lot.

Perspective is very good (in particoular on the torso area, where the arms cross), as well as shading. And proportions seem just fine to me.

Hope we'll see more Toa Masters in the future! ;)

 

Heh. You know, considering how often I draw characters with their arms crossed, I'm glad I apparently figured it out. xD Glad you like it.

 

Epic! Love the physique and detailed shading. My main criticisms are that the pose feels somewhat awkward (her lower body is very open while her upper body is very closed off), and the mask is very abstracted, so details like the "swim goggles" are very difficult to discern.

 

Fun thing is, I never even saw 'swim goggles' in the original mask until you pointed it out. That's probably the issue here, that I often miss out on some details while others totally catch my eye. ^^"

 

As for the pose, I guess you're right. Although I was aiming for some kind of asymmetry in body language.

 

Hoo hoo she so love-el-ly!

 

Always liked how you draw eyes, they suit her here. Good use of form when shaping up those CCBS bits to form more rounded armour. Pretty darn accurate and translates well to your style. I wonder what has her vexed? Maybe Tahu is trying to impress her with push-ups and she's having none of it. Haha.

 

CCBS works unexpectedly well with my style, due to the sleeker, more streamlined nature of the armour shells (I think). I was pleasantly surprised myself by how natural the translation felt. =)

 

This looks great! My only complaint is that it appears you've fallen into the Chest-Mould Trap. A common misconceptions is that armor needs to be molded to a female's chest when in actuality, that could cause all sorts of harm to fall upon the wearer.

 

Either that, or I have no sense of perspective. 

 

I have walked into that trap knowingly, to be honest. But don't worry, I am well aware of the problem and its implications, and have done some research on the topic (historical armour as well as problematic depictions in contemporary media)

. Compare Hahli Inika from last year for a more sensible approach where I actually paid attention to armour being useful. :]

 

(old habits die hard, though. I realized recently that lots of my older fanart was shaped by the media etc in a rather, uh, bad way. I'm working on it. ^^)

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Is that you, Taka? It is! I didn't need to check your profile to recognize your style instantly, despite the name-change :P

 

Wonderful, wonderful drawing as always! You certainly have improved a lot over the years! :) 

 

Also, I guess this explains things; I thought for a little while that you may have stopped drawing, seeing your inactivity on DA, but I'm glad to see your doing better then ever over here! I've been considering returning to BZP for quite a while now, and seeing you hanging out here makes me awfully tempted, at least for the sake of commenting on my friend's Art :P

 

Keep drawing away, Taka! Cant wait to see more!

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Well, I saw a few of your other posts and already thought they were great. And then this comes up and I am blown away. The shading, the crisp detail, the eyes.

 

All of it is fantastic, and my favorite thing about it has to be how the armor flows and perfectly contours to fit the body.


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Is that you, Taka? It is! I didn't need to check your profile to recognize your style instantly, despite the name-change :P

 

Wonderful, wonderful drawing as always! You certainly have improved a lot over the years! :)

 

Also, I guess this explains things; I thought for a little while that you may have stopped drawing, seeing your inactivity on DA, but I'm glad to see your doing better then ever over here! I've been considering returning to BZP for quite a while now, and seeing you hanging out here makes me awfully tempted, at least for the sake of commenting on my friend's Art :P

 

Keep drawing away, Taka! Cant wait to see more!

Hey, it's you, too! =D Nice to see you're still sort of around! And glad to hear my style is still recogniseable, even after all these years. xD

 

And thanks!

 

As for my inactivity on DA, that's party because I don't have the time or energy to keep up with and maintain more than one account; also somehow I never felt quite at home there like I do at BZP. But yeah, I still draw, and I don't see any reason why that should change in the future. It would be nice seeing you around more. ^^

 

And sure, will do! ^^

 

Well, I saw a few of your other posts and already thought they were great. And then this comes up and I am blown away. The shading, the crisp detail, the eyes.

 

All of it is fantastic, and my favorite thing about it has to be how the armor flows and perfectly contours to fit the body.

 

Awesome, thanks a lot! :3

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The beginning of the thighs kind of look weird. Other then that, this is awesome. :D Shading is very well done, and I think more female characters in-general should be armored up like Gali 2015 here.

 

And I know I have been looking at thine artwork for years, but I just realized that you always give MU inhabitants human eyes. But they way you draw them it's not good or bad,  just different.

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The beginning of the thighs kind of look weird. Other then that, this is awesome. :D Shading is very well done, and I think more female characters in-general should be armored up like Gali 2015 here.

 

And I know I have been looking at thine artwork for years, but I just realized that you always give MU inhabitants human eyes. But they way you draw them it's not good or bad,  just different.

 

The beginning of the thighs also felt kinda weird when drawing, so something's definitely gone amiss there. Should you happen to find out what exactly it is, do let me know so I can avoid that mistake in the future. :3

 

For the most part not just even human eyes, but complete faces; I like having something to work with in terms of facial expressions.

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