This is the review topic for my little Bionicle story, i guess.
I'm not the best writer, and i make mistakes often, if something looks funny, feel free to point it out. :t
the story topic is HERE.
This is the story of Tiricus, an agori who just wanted to do his job and live his life,
now he finds himself far from home, in an alien location, with little hope of return.
What perils and adventures await him on the far side?
Edited by Rahkshi Lalonde, Jun 11 2015 - 03:41 AM.