Voltex Posted July 2, 2015 Share Posted July 2, 2015 (edited) Six sets find themselves stuck out of time, in a House at war. They will soon be forced to pick a side - and if they make the wrong choice, it may spell the end of what little they have gotten to know.NOTE: This story is standalone! No prior reading required! ARC #1: WARRIORS ARC #2: GUARDIANS CHARACTERS (SPOILERS) 1999Scuba - (8 Appearances)Amazon - (3 Appearances)Ski - (3 Appearances)Jet – (3 Appearances)Electro – (2 Appearances)Spark – (2 Appearances)Flare - (1 Appearance; Deceased) - Killed by Torch, Episode 03Millennia – (2 Appearances; Deceased) – Killed by Umarak, Episode 14Granite – (2 Appearances; Deceased) – Killed by Umarak, Episode 14Blaster – (2 Appearances; Deceased) – Killed by Umarak, Episode 14Turbo – (2 Appearances; Deceased) – Killed by Umarak, Episode 14Torch - (5 Appearances; Deceased) – Killed by Umarak, Episode 14 2001Tahu Mata - (11 Appearances)Tahu Mata Prime – (1 Appearance)Lewa Mata - (10 Appearances)Gali Mata - (8 Appearances)Onua Mata - (2 Appearances)Kopaka Mata - (3 Appearances)Pohatu Mata - (2 Appearances)Turaga Vakama - (2 Appearances) 2002Lewa Nuva - (4 Appearances)Tahu Nuva – (3 Appearances) 2003Turahk x7 - (6 Appearances)Vorahk x10 - (6 Appearances)Lerahk x9 - (6 Appearances)Kurahk x8 - (6 Appearances)Guurahk x6 - (6 Appearances)Panrahk x5 - (6 Appearances)Macku – (1 Appearance)Takua – (1 Appearance)Makuta - (6 Appearances; Deceased) - Killed by Sergei & Rahkshi, Episode 06 2004Ahkmou – (1 Appearance)Tehutti – (1 Appearance)Orkham – (1 Appearance) – Killed by Dragon, Episode 13Matau Metru - (4 Appearances) – Killed by Umarak, Episode 11Nuju Metru - (5 Appearances; Deceased) – Killed by Matoro Inika, Episode 14 2005Norik Hagah - (5 Appearances)Roodaka – (1 Appearance)Sidorak - (2 Appearances) - Killed by Lewa Phantoka, Episode 08Iruini Hagah - (4 Appearances) - Killed by Gali Mata, Episode 08 2006Matoro Inika - (11 Appearances)Vezok - (6 Appearances)Kazi - (5 Appearances)Axonn - (3 Appearances)Brutaka - (2 Appearances)Vezon w/ Kardas – (2 Appearances)Vezon w/ Fenrakk – (2 Appearances)Nuparu Inika – (3 Appearances)Avak – (1 Appearance)Irnakk – (2 Appearances)Garan – (1 Appearance)Dalu – (1 Appearance)Zaktan – (1 Appearance) 2007Takadox - (9 Appearances)Maxilos - (7 Appearances)Pridak - (7 Appearances)Ehlek - (2 Appearances)Mantax - (5 Appearances)Kalmah - (2 Appearances)Carapar - (2 Appearances)Nocturn - (1 Appearance)Hahli Mahri – (3 Appearances)Spinax - (3 Appearances; Deceased) - Killed by Gali Mistika, Episode 05 2008Tahu Mistika - (4 Appearances)Onua Mistika - (4 Appearances)Takanuva Mistika - (4 Appearances)Pohatu Mistika w/ Rockoh T3 - (5 Appearances)Kopaka Phantoka - (3 Appearances)Pohatu Phantoka - (5 Appearances)Lewa Phantoka - (5 Appearances)Lewa Mistika w/ Axalara T9 - (5 Appearances)Antroz Mistika w/ Jetrax T6 - (3 Appearances)Vultraz – (3 Appearances)Gali Mistika - (2 Appearances; Deceased) - Killed by Maxilos, Episode 05 2009Kiina - (6 Appearances)Tarix - (5 Appearances)Tuma – (1 Appearance)Stronius – (1 Appearance) 2010Tahu Stars - (9 Appearances)Tahu Stars Prime – (1 Appearance)Takanuva Stars - (9 Appearances)Nektann - (4 Appearances)Gresh Stars - (6 Appearances)Rahkshi Stars x5 - (4 Appearances)Skrall Stars x10 - (2 Appearances)Von Nebula – (3 Appearances)William Furno – (4 Appearances)Dunkan Bulk – (4 Appearances)Rotor – (1 Appearance)Meltdown – (1 Appearance)Natalie Breez – (1 Appearance) 2011Nex 2.0 – (1 Appearance)Fire Lord – (1 Appearance; Deceased) – Killed by Umarak, Episode 15 2012Rocka - (5 Appearances)Evo – (1 Appearance) 2015Tahu Okoto - (13 Appearances)Pohatu Okoto - (12 Appearances)Kopaka Okoto - (12 Appearances)Lewa Okoto - (11 Appearances)Gali Okoto - (9 Appearances)Onua Okoto - (8 Appearances) 2016Umarak the Hunter – (6 Appearances)Tahu Uniter – (1 Appearance)Gali Uniter – (1 Appearance)Onua Uniter – (1 Appearance)Kopaka Uniter – (1 Appearance)Pohatu Uniter – (1 Appearance)Lewa Uniter – (1 Appearance) CREATIONSSergei - (7 Appearances)Dragon – (2 Appearances)Exo-Zadakh – (2 Appearances)Luroka - (5 Appearances) – Killed by Irnakk & Kazi, Episode 13 HUMANSDirector Wu - (2 Appearances)Doctor Hawthorne - (2 Appearances) GUEST STARSThese are the appearances of the GS "creation" characters that appear in the epic. They're based on BZPower members, and are usually created as rewards, which are noted below.Sergei - Awarded for reaching 50 points in Activity BoostLuroka - Awarded for winning A Clockwork SpiralDragon - Awarded for reaching 50 points in Activity BoostExo-Zadakh - Awarded for reaching 50 points in Activity Boost ---Share your thoughts below! Starting with Chapter One, the choices that you make will determine the outcome of the story! Edited December 19, 2015 by Lucina Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenore Posted July 2, 2015 Share Posted July 2, 2015 So, this seems like a pretty cool start. I thought TvT made an awesome comedy and I'm really interested to see how it translates into an epic. My only question is whether the "Episode 01 Launches June 14th" announcement is outdated or if we have to wait a year before the next chapter? XP Quote Blog "A Cask of Amontillado": Breaking News Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 2, 2015 Author Share Posted July 2, 2015 So, this seems like a pretty cool start. I thought TvT made an awesome comedy and I'm really interested to see how it translates into an epic. My only question is whether the "Episode 01 Launches June 14th" announcement is outdated or if we have to wait a year before the next chapter? XPWoops yeah that's supposed to be July haha 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Guurahk Posted July 2, 2015 Share Posted July 2, 2015 Yay, the return of the glorious epicomedy!I'm interested to see how far our choices are going to impact the story. Quote -Rahkshi GuurahkGENERATION 3: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.If I actually tried putting all the stuff I like on here, the sig would burst. (This banner is created by http://www.bzpower.com/board/user/59020-onaku/ ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 2, 2015 Author Share Posted July 2, 2015 Yay, the return of the glorious epicomedy!I'm interested to see how far our choices are going to impact the story. The choice coming with chapter one is a really big one. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted July 3, 2015 Share Posted July 3, 2015 Lovely start!Now, all I need to do is read the previous one... Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 3, 2015 Author Share Posted July 3, 2015 Lovely start!Now, all I need to do is read the previous one... No prior reading is necessary for this story. While readers of the original will certainly pick up on the various similarities and differences (and possibly the occasional reference), this has been specifically designed to be standalone. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vrokorta Posted July 4, 2015 Share Posted July 4, 2015 (edited) Lovely start!Now, all I need to do is read the previous one... No prior reading is necessary for this story. While readers of the original will certainly pick up on the various similarities and differences (and possibly the occasional reference), this has been specifically designed to be standalone. I'll still read the rest of the first one before I read this. Edited July 4, 2015 by Vrokorta Quote If you use correct grammar in your posts (or try hard to), place this in your signature. Join Myst's campaign for correct grammar usage on BZPower! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Imrukii Posted July 4, 2015 Share Posted July 4, 2015 Why is everything happening on my birthday?!? First pictures of Pluto Then Nation Farshtey Reading Day Now This?!?! Not to mention Bastile Day in Franch!! Quote Quote: "Love has no fear, and no vengeance." | :i: | Andekas ⴳ A RUDE AWAKENING - A BIONICLE G1 Continuation and Video Game Project (ARTIST AND CONCEPTUALIST) | I am an ENFP, that is my Personality. Check Out Makuta Teridax: Reaper of Darkness | Check out my Taknuva Stars MOC | ⴳ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tea-rex Posted July 4, 2015 Share Posted July 4, 2015 Why is everything happening on my birthday?!? First pictures of Pluto Then Nation Farshtey Reading Day Now This?!?! Not to mention Bastile Day in Franch!!Heh, lucky.Anyway, I am enjoying this story greatly so far, the writing is quick and sharp, while also holding it's own pace.I await eagerly for the next chapter. Quote BZPRPG profiles / Corpus Rahkshi Profiles / Matoran un Panzar profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 4, 2015 Author Share Posted July 4, 2015 Lovely start!Now, all I need to do is read the previous one... No prior reading is necessary for this story. While readers of the original will certainly pick up on the various similarities and differences (and possibly the occasional reference), this has been specifically designed to be standalone. I'll still read the rest of the first one before I read this. You can if you wish! Most of it (maybe all of it) isn't too great looking back, but I feel like the concept is still very interesting. Why is everything happening on my birthday?!? First pictures of Pluto Then Nation Farshtey Reading Day Now This?!?! Not to mention Bastile Day in Franch!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Why is everything happening on my birthday?!? First pictures of Pluto Then Nation Farshtey Reading Day Now This?!?! Not to mention Bastile Day in Franch!!Heh, lucky.Anyway, I am enjoying this story greatly so far, the writing is quick and sharp, while also holding it's own pace.I await eagerly for the next chapter. I hope it will match up when it arrives! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Guurahk Posted July 7, 2015 Share Posted July 7, 2015 Lovely start!Now, all I need to do is read the previous one... No prior reading is necessary for this story. While readers of the original will certainly pick up on the various similarities and differences (and possibly the occasional reference), this has been specifically designed to be standalone. Does that mean we will finally get to see Mantax kill Torch? Quote -Rahkshi GuurahkGENERATION 3: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.If I actually tried putting all the stuff I like on here, the sig would burst. (This banner is created by http://www.bzpower.com/board/user/59020-onaku/ ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 7, 2015 Author Share Posted July 7, 2015 No, because I am evil. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 9, 2015 Author Share Posted July 9, 2015 Fun Fact: I cannot dates. Anyway, EPISODE 01: FUTURE PAST Has now released! Will the Toa Okoto join with Tahu Mata or Tahu Stars?Vote now! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Guurahk Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 (edited) uurgh this is tough.Hmmm....I guesswaitno Mata. Edited July 9, 2015 by Rahkshi Guurahk Quote -Rahkshi GuurahkGENERATION 3: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.If I actually tried putting all the stuff I like on here, the sig would burst. (This banner is created by http://www.bzpower.com/board/user/59020-onaku/ ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 9, 2015 Author Share Posted July 9, 2015 uurgh this is tough.Hmmm....I guesswaitno Mata. Are you sure? You don't sound sure. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 Tahu Mata. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vrokorta Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 Tahu Mata, he deserves it. Quote If you use correct grammar in your posts (or try hard to), place this in your signature. Join Myst's campaign for correct grammar usage on BZPower! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 9, 2015 Author Share Posted July 9, 2015 Tahu Mata. Tahu Mata, he deserves it. Both of your votes are noted! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Portalfig Posted July 10, 2015 Share Posted July 10, 2015 Gotta go for them overconfident new people. I say the Toa Okoto should go with the Stars. Why? Because you never jump on the bandwagon because it makes you suspicious obv. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Guurahk Posted July 10, 2015 Share Posted July 10, 2015 That vote was decided on mata. Eventuallly. Also, what if the Toa Okoto are there because of themselves because time travel? Quote -Rahkshi GuurahkGENERATION 3: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.If I actually tried putting all the stuff I like on here, the sig would burst. (This banner is created by http://www.bzpower.com/board/user/59020-onaku/ ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 10, 2015 Author Share Posted July 10, 2015 Gotta go for them overconfident new people. I say the Toa Okoto should go with the Stars. Why? Because you never jump on the bandwagon because it makes you suspicious obv. Mafia vs. Tahu vs. Tahu confirmed. That vote was decided on mata. Eventuallly. Also, what if the Toa Okoto are there because of themselves because time travel? We will find out why the Toa Okoto were sent back to the past eventually. 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenore Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 Tahu Mata. Because Stars is just nasty. Quote Blog "A Cask of Amontillado": Breaking News Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergei Rahkmaninoff Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 (edited) I agree, they should side with Tahu Mata. Edited July 11, 2015 by Sergei Rahkmaninoff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 11, 2015 Author Share Posted July 11, 2015 Tahu Mata. Because Stars is just nasty. He does seem to be that way. He's rather immature. I agree, they should side with Tahu Mata. Your vote has been noted! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tea-rex Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 They shold fight for their independence and freedom, taking down both banners of the Mata and Stars, and then siding with Makuta (G1 2003) and Skull Grinder.In all seriousness though... uuh... watch how the battle plays out and then side? Or what about half of the masters fighting with the Mata and the other half fighting with Stars?Also, who buys 10 Rahkshi & Skrall Stars? Quote BZPRPG profiles / Corpus Rahkshi Profiles / Matoran un Panzar profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 11, 2015 Author Share Posted July 11, 2015 They shold fight for their independence and freedom, taking down both banners of the Mata and Stars, and then siding with Makuta (G1 2003) and Skull Grinder.In all seriousness though... uuh... watch how the battle plays out and then side? Or what about half of the masters fighting with the Mata and the other half fighting with Stars?Also, who buys 10 Rahkshi & Skrall Stars? Unfortunately, the Toa Okoto appear to be incapable of this sort of decision making at the present time. As far as multiple versions of sets - with any set that was meant to represent a "species" such as the Skrall, Rahkshi, or Bohrok, there are multiple versions of the same set running round. 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted July 12, 2015 Share Posted July 12, 2015 I vote Tahu Mata because reasons Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 12, 2015 Author Share Posted July 12, 2015 I vote Tahu Mata because reasons Such excellent reasons, indeed. 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Railblazer Posted July 15, 2015 Share Posted July 15, 2015 Given that the Toa Okoto have seen Tahu Mata try to make rational decisions and do things somewhat democratically, while Tahu Stars has only shown them a desire for battle and is looking ready to potentially KILL them, I think the Okoto should side with Tahu Mata. Quote 110,422 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 15, 2015 Author Share Posted July 15, 2015 Given that the Toa Okoto have seen Tahu Mata try to make rational decisions and do things somewhat democratically, while Tahu Stars has only shown them a desire for battle and is looking ready to potentially KILL them, I think the Okoto should side with Tahu Mata. Those are some solid observations!(Also welcome back) --- So! Update! Episode 2 is almost finished - I just need to write the conclusion to this key decision-making scene of the Toa Okoto, as well as the course the story will take for them immediately afterwards. Once that is done, I'll send it to my friendly editors (special thanks to both Portalfig and Vinylstep) to look over before it is published. Set Divisions is coming. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted July 15, 2015 Share Posted July 15, 2015 As opposed to the unfriendly editors... I could beat ya up for the beginning of this chapter having a marked resemblance to the trailer for Toy Story 3, but I suspect you already knew that. As of yet, I find this one to be quite dull. Nothing particularly stuck out as bad. Tahu's war against the boxes was mildly amusing. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 15, 2015 Author Share Posted July 15, 2015 As opposed to the unfriendly editors... I could beat ya up for the beginning of this chapter having a marked resemblance to the trailer for Toy Story 3, but I suspect you already knew that. As of yet, I find this one to be quite dull. Nothing particularly stuck out as bad. Tahu's war against the boxes was mildly amusing. I'm fairly certain the beginning of the original TvT back in 2010 was related to Toy Story. Apparently this one is Toy Story 3? This one is unintentional, but I imagine it shall vary from that formula rather quickly. Things start to pick up a bit in Episode 2 - we'll have a fight, and some mysterious stuff of mysterious mysteries. 3 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 16, 2015 Author Share Posted July 16, 2015 EPISODE 02: SET DIVISIONS HAS RELEASED!! Which should Nuju Metru pick?1 - Accept Matoro Inika’s offer, and join this mysterious third faction.2 - Decline Matoro Inika’s offer, and join Tahu Stars.3 - Decline Matoro Inika’s offer, and join Tahu Mata. Post your answer below!---I believe Episode 03 might include more than one choice for you all to make! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted July 16, 2015 Share Posted July 16, 2015 I vote for option #1 Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Railblazer Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 Hmm... On the one hand, joining this third faction might not end well. Hero Factory and the Throwbots may not appreciate having BIONICLE--the ones they replace and the ones who replaced them, respectively--try to join their ranks. On the other hand, they let Matoro Inika live, and with a roughly even split, the Tahus aren't likely to make much progress defeating each other. This third faction (choice one) is probably the wisest. Quote 110,422 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Some Random Phrase Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 I vote option 3. Quote Kopaka, the coolest(Pun intended) Ko-Toa ever: "If the fight had turned, Exann might be the one on the floor with Antidermis spurting out of him. This is how battle is. This is how life is." -Mar'jik, Corpus Rahkshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 17, 2015 Author Share Posted July 17, 2015 I vote for option #1 Hmm... On the one hand, joining this third faction might not end well. Hero Factory and the Throwbots may not appreciate having BIONICLE--the ones they replace and the ones who replaced them, respectively--try to join their ranks. On the other hand, they let Matoro Inika live, and with a roughly even split, the Tahus aren't likely to make much progress defeating each other. This third faction (choice one) is probably the wisest. I vote option 3. All have been noted! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 18, 2015 Author Share Posted July 18, 2015 I made some other banners (much like the one in my sig and the giant one up top) for Tahu vs. Tahu! Check them out! --- Also, an Episode 03 update: I can confirm that there will be at least two choices for you all to make, and possibly even three! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 I choose option 3 Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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