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The Toa Mizore - The Return


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There once was an island, and on this island lived six Toa heroes; it was their duty to protect the island from all harm that may come to its inhabitants. The island was not whole, as it once was, long ago, long before the Toa had come to the island, a battle for power split the island into sixteen pieces, and fifteen of those shards of the island were blown far away, never to be seen again.When the Toa did first arrive on the island, they discovered their purpose; to bring the island back to its former state. And so they set out on their goal, traveling out to the far spread islands, and using their awesome powers to bring the island slowly back together…

The Toa Mizore - The Return

Chapter One: Rest and RelaxationSarda: OW! OUCH! Argh, this was never in the job description.Vhisola: Stop your complaining, at least we never get a decent break around here, and now we finally get to rest up a bit.Sarda: But… yoga, really? I hate yoga.Piruk: (Unfolds himself from some ridiculous position) I think it’s actually very calm-relaxing.Vhisola: At least one of you is positive about this.Sarda: (Sighs) I’d rather chill at Utario’s Pizza Parlor, if you two yoga.. ers, don’t mind. (Stands up, and walks away from the two stretching Toa)Vhisola: Oh well, at least he’ll get some rest in his own greasy, slimy, Xbox filled way.Piruk: And to think we’re only eight islands down… Current sure was hard.Vhisola: Agreed, but I’m glad that we all walked away unscathed, for the most part.Piruk: Yeah. Now… how in the world did I get my leg around my neck?Elsewhere…MT: So… you want me to pick you up, and throw you off the top of that building?Tath: *Nods* Just throw me off the edge; I want to see what its like to fly.MT: *Glances at Onepu* Well?Onepu: Well, the chances of survival are against him, perhaps if you tossed him into a conveniently placed barrel of water, he would survive.MT: Well, Tath, I can fly, why don’t you just let me fly you around?Tath: No, I want to fly on my own.Onepu: You wouldn’t be flying, per se, you’d be falling.MT: And screaming.Tath: Okay, I have a better idea, how about you fly me up reeeeeeeeeeaaallly high, and then drop me into the water surrounding the island?MT: *Glances at Onepu* Well?Onepu: Oh come on, you don’t seriously think he would survive a fall from ‘reeeeeeeeaaalllly high’, do you? Why do you have to ask me?MT: *Shrugs* you’re the expert on a lot of stuff.Onepu: Fine… Depending on the height from which you dropped Tath here, the water would either break many of his bones, or kill him. Personally, I don’t think that his terminal velocity would be high enough to effectively end his life upon impact, but it is possible.MT: Uh huh… Alright Tath, how high do you want to go?Tath: A thousand feet! No, no, a mile!Onepu: … MT, if you do drop him, pray that his terminal velocity is low.MT: Gotcha, alright Tath, let’s go. *Picks up Tath and flies him away*Onepu: It was nice knowing that optimistic Matoran.Following a couple Toa…Dekar: This is definitely my idea of relaxation! *Leaps off of cliff, diving into the water far below*Kara: *Watches Dekar as he disappears into the water below* … yeah, I’d never do that.Kono: Me neither.Kara: Should we go grab something to eat?Kono: Yes. I’d rather eat than dive off cliffs all day.*The two proceed to walk away, off to some restaurant*Dekar: *Climbs up onto the cliff* you guys gotta try this!! Alright, who’s first? How about we all go togeth-*notices no one is to be found* … they left? Wait, maybe they already went off the cliff. *Turns around, and runs off the cliff again, diving down into the waters below*On a trail in the Hidden woods…Kazi: I swear to Mata Nui I am never going hiking ever again.Garth: Ah come on, you unfit sloucher. You need some exer’ise e’ry once in a w’ile.Kazi: Sloucher? Is that ever a word?Garth: Doesn’t matter, you slouch, so that makes you a sloucher.Kazi: Kpik, are you enjoying this hike?Kpik: *Is engrossed in his right arm* Hm?Kazi: I asked if you were enjoying the hike.Kpik: Oh, yeah, it’s alright. Nice… scenery… *looks back at his right arm*Garth: Somethin’ wrong with yer arm, Kpik?Kpik: I don’t know, but it was changing colors when we brought the island back…Kazi: Changing colors? Like from red to purple?Kpik: No, just from white to black, over and over.Garth: Think it could have anythin’ ter do with yer double?Kpik: He wasn’t my double, he was just part of the team, and we were fused together.Garth: Ah’right, no need ter get chippy about it...Kazi: We’re just trying to help, Kpik.Kpik: I know… I just want to know what’s wrong with my arm, is all.Kazi: *Looks to Garth* should we get him some help?Garth: Would we be anneh kind o’ friends if we di’n’t?Kazi: I’ll take that as a yes. Come on, Kpik, I’m sure there’s someone that can help you.In a Basement…Sarda: OH YEAH, YES YES YES. I GOT YOU, I SO GOT YOU.TDL: NO, NO WAY. NOOOOOOOO WAAAAAAAAYYY, I’M THE BEAST, I AM THE BEAST, LITERALLY!Sarda: I GOT YOU AND YOU KNOW IT. YES, OH YES. I JUST RANKED UP.TDL: UNACCPETABLE!!Utario: Will you two shut up!? STOP SCREAMING OVER A VIDEO GAME!Sarda: You’re shouting over a video game right now, I say we continue this shouting match. FUS RO DAH!TDL: NO, I’M THE DRAGONBORN, FOO. *Shouts unintelligible Elder Scrolls gibberish at Sarda and Utario*Utario: … there’s no winning this fight. *Walks up the flight of stairs to the parlor**Upstairs*Ikod: And… I’ll take… er… a soda.Koon: Anything else?Ikod: That’s the fifth time you’ve asked that, no, I do not want anything else with my Pizza.Koon: Just trying to rob you of your money. *Walks away to fetch Ikod’s food*Ikod: ._.Gula: I buy everything at once, and normally get him to cut me a deal, kinda like a bundle package, only with food.Ikod: Hm…Utario: Everything alright over here? Does anybody want anything?Ikod: Please no, I’ve already bought enough food.Utario: … okay…Door Bell: *Rings as two customers walk in*Utario: Welcome to my pizza parlor. Oh, hey Kara, hi Kono, what can I get you two?Kono: A large slice of cheese pizza will do.Kara: An entire supreme supreme, please.Utario: A supreme supreme? Been a while since someone got one of those… I’ll be right back with your food, would either of you like any drinks?Kono: Don’t try to rob us; I know you and Koon have a way of getting people to buy things.Utario: Haha, alright. *Walks away to bring the two their food*Kara: Hey Ikod, how goes your new shop you opened?Ikod: Eh… it could be better, I mean, not like I’m getting customers, it’s just that the shop isn’t showing any signs of growing.Kono: Hey, what was it you sold again?Ikod: Anything, really, but mostly old antiques that aren’t found anywhere else.Kono: So I could go down there and buy a comic book and a thousand year old trinket at the same time? I don’t know why people wouldn’t be swarming the area…Ikod: I’m thinking of doing auctions as well, but I’d need to expand the shop…Kara: There’s an empty building on Thrive, and the people there are always ready to buy stuff… I don’t know why it hasn’t been completely redone yet, either.Kono: They really like the wilderness, and their little villages.Ikod: Kono, you came from Levi, right? How is the Toa Academy there going?Kono: It’s alright, we’re getting new recruits all the time, and we’re teaming up with other guards all around Hidden to keep the place safe.Kara: Here comes our food.Utario: Alright, one slice of cheese… a whole supreme supreme, and what you ordered, Ikod. *Hands out the food to their respective owners*Ikod: I can’t believe I bought this much food… *Begins to eat the mountain of food*Kara: *Wolfs her food down as well*Kono: *Also starts the process of eating*Ikod: So, this Thrive building… can you guys take me to it when we’re done eating?Kara: Sure. *Finishes her pizza*Kono: … quite an appetite…Ikod: I haven’t even started eating my food!-End Chapter OneI know. I know. It’s not a good start to a good story, but I really need to get this thing on its feet again. The next chapter may be more humorous, but I just need to take a break from all the action and stuff.If you have any questions at all about the chapter or the story, don't hesitate to PM me about it. :biggrin:-Skar

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Piruk: (Unfolds himself from some ridiculous position) I think it’s actually very calm-relaxing.

I did yoga in strength and conditioning class last year. And it is anything but.

MT: Well, Tath, I can fly, why don’t you just let me fly you around?Tath: No, I want to fly on my own.Onepu: You wouldn’t be flying, per se, you’d be falling.MT: And screaming.Tath: Okay, I have a better idea, how about you fly me up reeeeeeeeeeaaallly high, and then drop me into the water surrounding the island?

I don't think Tath gets the concept.

Sarda: OH YEAH, YES YES YES. I GOT YOU, I SO GOT YOU.TDL: NO, NO WAY. NOOOOOOOO WAAAAAAAAYYY, I’M THE BEAST, I AM THE BEAST, LITERALLY!Sarda: I GOT YOU AND YOU KNOW IT. YES, OH YES. I JUST RANKED UP.TDL: UNACCPETABLE!!Utario: Will you two shut up!? STOP SCREAMING OVER A VIDEO GAME!

Ironically, he just screamed over a video game, too.

TDL: NO, I’M THE DRAGONBORN, FOO.

Quick, use the kill dragonborn shout!Oh, wait, there isn't one.Good first chappy to what I can tell is going to be an awesome comedy.-MT

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The Toa Mizore – The ReturnChapter Two: CookingIn a basementTDL(Tarre Ledius Dephinum): … meh, I’m bored now. Too much Halo can do that to you.Sarda: I disagree, too little Halo sends you into boredom. Too much can only strengthen your obsession.TDL: Well I’m not obsessed.Sarda: *Glances at the life size Master Chief figure in the corner* … yep, definitely not obsessed.TDL: No, seriously, some people are truly obsessed; I only have a mild case. I know one guy online that thinks he’s Thel Vadum. We all just call him freak show whenever we see him.Sarda: Well, there’s always the chance that he ‘is’ Thel Vadum.TDL: The chances of that are one in precisely zero.Sarda: That’s… no chance.TDL: Exactly. Thel Vadum is a fictional character of the Halo universe, nothing more.In a spaceship far off in some unknown area of the galaxyThel Vadum: I AM INDEED THE ARBITER, YOU FOOLISH HUMANS NEVER BELIEVE ME!Back in the basementSarda: Yeah, I guess you’re right. Well… since you’re bored, I guess I’ll play Skyrim.TDL: Ah, ah, ah, I said I was bored of Halo, not Skyrim.Sarda: But it’s only one player!TDL: Precisely, now bug off.Sarda: … fine. *Bugs off, going upstairs**Upstairs*Utario: Oh, hey Sarda. Let me guess, Skyrim?Sarda: *Nods* it noms on your social life like nothing else.Utario: Mhm… hey, you’re a good cook, right?Sarda: Is that a fire Toa joke?Utario: No, it’s a question.Sarda: Oh. Well, I guess… I’ve never really cooked much except some food when I’m hungry.Utario: Well I heard that you were a great chef, so I just was wondering if you could help Koon out in the kitchen back there, he’s really a one man pizza making crew, and he needs a break.Sarda: Yeah, sure. I could give it a try.Utario: Thanks, just listen to what Koon says, and you should be good.Sarda: *Nods, and heads off to the kitchen*In a hospital on LevitateDoctor: I’ve never seen anything like this… it’s like your entire control over shadow is contained in your right arm, and the light still in your body doesn’t know what to do with it… when you and the others traveled through that dimension of pure light, somehow your shadow side held on.Kpik: … well, what do we do about it? I can still control shadow just as good as I could before, and I’m twice as powerful with light.Doctor: Hm… I say we leave it, you say that you and another being were merged, correct?Kpik: Mhm.Doctor: This could be him-- your opposite, holding on for dear life in your right arm.Kpik: *Looks at his right arm* … Thanks for your help, Doctor.Doctor: *Nods and walks away*Garth: So… it looks like ye got a bit of a problem on yer hands…Kpik: You think? I don’t even know how to deal with this.Garth: Well, the Doc said ter leave it be, methinks we should take his advice.Kpik: I guess… And there isn’t really anything wrong, it’s not like my arm hurts, it just can’t choose between being the color black, or white.Garth: Aye. Let’s go back ter the Base, I’m sure the others are wonderin’ how yer doin’.Kpik: Yeah…Above the ocean surrounding HiddenTath: Alright, drop me here!MT: *Promptly drops Tath* Seeya!Tath: *Falls toward the ocean, flailing about and screaming*MT: … I wonder if it’s what he expected.Tath: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!MT: Sounds like he’s having a blast.Tath: HELP ME!!!!!MT: … kelp he?Tath: *Falls beyond MT’s range of hearing*MT: Kelp… I doubt Tath would want kelp at a time like this.Down further belowTath: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!(Silence…)Tath: …(Silence…)Tath: … how much further do I have to fall? *Looks down*Ocean: *Is down there*Tath: How high did he fly me up?! MT! HELP!Up aboveMT: Kelp he… Hm… Oh well, maybe he’s in cahoots with Velika or something. *Flies downward* I think I’ll go see how his flight is going.Screams: *Are heard*MT: Hey Tath, how goes the flight?Tath: PLEASE, PLEASE TAKE ME DOWN!MT: But isn’t this what you wanted?Tath: I’M FALLING AT LIKE A MILLION MILES AN HOUR, TAKE ME TO LAND NOW!MT: Alright, suit yourself. *Grabs onto the falling Tath, and flies him quickly back down to shore*Tath: LAND, OH SWEET LAND! *Leaps to the ground, rolling around in the sand*MT: Okay… I’ll leave you to your sandy devices, then. *Flies off*Tath: I’ll never leave land ever, ever, ever, ever again!On ThriveIkod: So… this is it?Kara: Yep.Kono: In all its glory.Ikod: … inglory, you mean. This thing is a pile of junk almost!Kara: You asked to see it.Ikod: I can’t believe you even suggested putting my shop in this place.Kono: It just needs a little… fixing up.Ikod: Pfft, demolishing is more the word. Repairing this would be more expensive than building a brand new shop.Kara: Well, let’s look inside before we condemn it to destruction; maybe the inside is better than the outside.Ikod: … me? Go in there? Only if the whole thing doesn’t collapse on us once we’re in there.Kono: It won’t, and if it does, I should be able to stop it.Ikod: I hope so. *Walks inside the building, followed by the other two*Kara: See? It isn’t as bad as the outside… just a little old is all.Ikod: Mhm… the ceiling needs to be replaced… the floor needs major repairs; there are holes everywhere in the walls… and I don’t see a single electrical outlet anywhere.Kono: Y’know, he’s right, this place isn’t worth saving, and there are tons of better places closer to the villages.Kara: *Sighs* I guess. Well, come on, no use in sticking around here.Mysterious Glow: *Glows behind them*Ikod: … what’s that?Kono: Some kind of blue glow… *Walks over to the dresser where the blue light is emitting from*Kara: What is it?Kono: *Opens the dresser* It’s a… thing… a blue orb of some kind. *Reaches out to pick up the orb*Blue Orb: *Shocks Kono*Kono: Ah! *Steps back*Ikod: Let me see. *Walks over to see the Blue orb*Kono: Don’t touch it, it’ll only shock you.Ikod: *Quickly reaches out and scoops up the orb* … no shock.Kono: What? Here, let me see it- *reaches out to grab it and receives another shock* OW! … This doesn’t make sense, how come you can pick it up?Ikod: *Begins to speak, only to blast Kono away with sound waves emitting from his mouth*Kono: GAH! *Is blown back through a wall*Kara: Ikod!Ikod: *Drops the orb, and turns to Kara* I... I don’t know what happened! I started to respond, and then suddenly he was blasted away.Kara: Amazing… *Attempts to lift the orb with telekinesis, only to be shocked by the orb*Kono: *Breaks his way through the wall, blasting it away with shadow* what the heck just happened, Ikod? Are you hiding some kind of power from us?Ikod: What? No, I don’t have any powers than I know of.Kono: Then… was it this orb?Ikod: Maybe, probably. *Picks up the orb* maybe it has a grudge against Toa. Heh…Kara: Whatever it is, we need to show it to Onepu; he might know what it is.Kono: Yeah, I think I saw him on the main island.Ikod: Wait, before we leave, I want to see what else I can do with this thing-Kono: No, we don’t know what this thing is, and we have no idea what it could do to you. Just… hold onto it, and… wait, why haven’t you blown me through another wall already?Ikod: *Looks down at the orb in his hands* … I don’t know…Kono: Yep, we know absolutely nothing about it. Come on, let’s get out of here.In a kitchen on CoreKoon: Alright, cut up these vegetables, and sprinkle them around on this pizza. When you’re done with that, serve these breadsticks to the waiting customers.Sarda: *Nods* Got it. *Begins chopping vegetables*Koon: *Walks away to check on cooking pizzas*Voice: Hey, hurry up in there, the customers are waiting!Koon: We’re hurrying, we’re hurrying, just give us and the oven some time.Sarda: I could speed it up; I am a Toa of fire after all.Koon: No, we let the oven do its work, and you can do yours.Voice: Koon, I sent him back there to help you, not cut vegetables.Koon: *Glares* alright then, Sarda, double the temperature in the oven, and take the pizzas out in two minutes exactly.Sarda: … why not one? At the temperature it already is, doubling it would almost burn them in two minutes.Koon: Well… I suppose you know fire best, but I know how to cook pizza best. Two minutes.Sarda: Alright, fine by me. *Sprinkles chopped vegetables over pizza, and walks over to the oven* Annnnd… fire. *Doubles the temperature*Koon: *Walks over to begin preparing another pizza for the oven* Keep an eye on that, Sarda.Sarda: That’s what I’m doing, I just wish I could see what the pizza was doing while I-*SPLAT* what the-?!Koon: What was that?Sarda: … the pizza.Koon: How long did you leave it?!Sarda: Two minutes… on the dot. *Opens oven to reveal pizza splattered everywhere* yep, two minutes did the trick.Koon: *Glares at Sarda* Alright, alright. You were right, I was… wrong. Just clean out the oven and get it operational again.Sarda: And this time, take my advice when it comes to heat.In an aircraft hanger at the base of a mountainPiruk: Can I fly that one? *Points to a large fighter jet*Bontu: … you would get in the plane, take off, and most likely crash it into the ocean, destroying it and yourself.Piruk: So… is that a no?Bontu: That’s a definite no.Piruk: Aw. Can I fly that? *Points to a floating submarine*Bontu: Hm… no. The immense pressure that is created underwater would most likely destroy you and the submarine.Piruk: But isn’t it meant for underwater?Bontu: Yes, but someone like you would most likely crash into a reef, rupture the hull and then watch as water poured in slowly from all sides, sinking the craft.Piruk: That doesn’t sound nice.Bontu: The one thing that I would let you pilot here is… *Looks around* uh… this. *Grabs an old bicycle from a pile of scrap*Piruk: …I can’t even have that old hover board?Bontu: Most definitely not. The speeds that device can fly at are far too dangerous for you, even if you are a speed demon.Piruk: I don’t know why you never trust me with anything, I’m a Toa now, and I can handle things.Bontu: I know, Piruk, but these things are just too expensive and advanced for me to let anyone pilot them.Piruk: *Sighs* I guess I’m stuck with this bike… *hops onto the bike, and rides around the hanger*Bontu: Well… at least he’s entertained. Geez, he’s almost like a little kid. *Walks off near the back of the hanger*Piruk: *Stops on the bike, and glances over at the large jet that he first wanted to fly* … :3Three minutes laterBontu: *Hears the sound a jet plane starting up* what the… *Turns to see one of his jets taking off* NO, NO, NO, NO! *Runs after the jet*Piruk: So… thrust? *Pushes the thrust, flying the jet out of the hanger at over 100 miles an hour* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!Bontu: Agh… I can’t stop him now… *Watches as Piruk flies the jet around crazily* hm… I think… yes, that should work. *Runs over and gets in his own jet, taking off after Piruk*-End Chapter TwoThere. :3-Skar

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Three minutes laterBontu: *Hears the sound a jet plane starting up* what the… *Turns to see one of his jets taking off* NO, NO, NO, NO! *Runs after the jet*Piruk: So… thrust? *Pushes the thrust, flying the jet out of the hanger at over 100 miles an hour* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!Bontu: Agh… I can’t stop him now… *Watches as Piruk flies the jet around crazily* hm… I think… yes, that should work. *Runs over and gets in his own jet, taking off after Piruk*

Wow. That's...intriguing. I read both Chapters, and I am engrossed. [/smart]. I appreciate the gaming references, Skyrim a bit more than Halo, but both great nonetheless. Maybe a Brawl reference though...?

"The moral of the story is, I chose a half measure when I should have gone all the way. I'll never make that mistake again. No more half measures Walter."

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.... Wow. All I can say is....... LOL! Me gusta! Can I guest star in this? Its amazingly funny!

Tath: I’ll never leave land ever, ever, ever, ever again!

I can just see him leaving it after 5 minutes. Win.
lol, I can think up a few situations of him leaving the ground... :PAnd sure, you can guest start if you want to. :D

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Three minutes laterBontu: *Hears the sound a jet plane starting up* what the… *Turns to see one of his jets taking off* NO, NO, NO, NO! *Runs after the jet*Piruk: So… thrust? *Pushes the thrust, flying the jet out of the hanger at over 100 miles an hour* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!Bontu: Agh… I can’t stop him now… *Watches as Piruk flies the jet around crazily* hm… I think… yes, that should work. *Runs over and gets in his own jet, taking off after Piruk*

Wow. That's...intriguing. I read both Chapters, and I am engrossed. [/smart]. I appreciate the gaming references, Skyrim a bit more than Halo, but both great nonetheless. Maybe a Brawl reference though...?
Awesome, thanks. :DAnd by Brawl, do you mean Super Smash Bros. or something?Thanks for the replies, guys. :) [/rhyme]-Skar
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Sarda: Alright, fine by me. *Sprinkles chopped vegetables over pizza, and walks over to the oven* Annnnd… fire. *Doubles the temperature*

....so....when does he get his own cooking show, exactly?

MT: Kelp he… Hm… Oh well, maybe he’s in cahoots with Velika or something. *Flies downward* I think I’ll go see how his flight is going.

I feel like Vezok.Ah well. Good chappy. Glad to see this back up and running.-MT

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Ten days. Wow. I need to focus on this more, because I know I can update this more often.The Toa Mizore – The ReturnChapter Three: The Objects of DestinyOnepu: I’ve never seen anything like this in my life! I can’t say exactly what it is, or what it does, even. It glows, and for some reason unknown to us, it refuses to be touched by any and all Toa… even Vortixx and Skakdi are unable to touch it, along with other Matoran as well…Kono: I know you’ve only been looking at it for an hour now, but is there anything you can tell us about this?Onepu: Well, it seems eerily similar to one of the Objects of Destiny, but this can’t possibly-Kono: Wait, what? What are the Objects of Destiny?Onepu: We don’t know, to be honest. All we know is that each of them glows with their own color of odd light, just like this one, and they refuse to be held by anyone but a specific being. They’ve come and gone throughout the timeline of this universe, choosing their owners and granting them immense power to defeat some kind of evil.Ikod: *Gulps*Kara: So, does this mean that Ikod is one of these chosen ones?Onepu: Apparently so… all I can say is keep it safe, and secret. If anyone else knew about this, they might be tempted to steal the orb despite its nature of choosing one owner.Ikod: Whoa, whoa, whoa. I woke up this morning thinking that I was going to run my shop, and maybe take the afternoon off, not become the owner of a super powerful weapon that nobody understands!Onepu: I understand your hesitation, but you can’t just walk away from something like this. Ikod, I’m not asking you to defeat a great evil singlehandedly, but I do want you to at least embrace the powers this object will give you.Ikod: I… I don’t know. What if I can’t take it? What if this orb kills me?Onepu: I can assure you it will not kill you. It will only make you stronger. If you are fearful of this, then know that you will not travel this road alone. We will be by your side, helping you along as you slowly fulfill your destiny.Kono: He has a point, Ikod. This is an opportunity, a big one; if you throw this away, you throw away your destiny.Ikod: I didn’t ask for this, whatever it is. And honestly, you two urging me on isn’t helping. I’ll take the orb, and… I don’t know; figure out how to use its power.Onepu: *Sighs with relief* good. Now, take the orb, and hold it in both hands firmly. According to the legends, the orb should form into any object that the chosen one wishes it to be.Ikod: Okay… *picks up the orb, holding it in his hands* … shift. Transform. Change already. Come on, do something!Onepu: Perhaps calming oneself would prompt the transformation.Ikod: *Closes his eyes**Silence…*Ikod: … it’s not doing anything.Onepu: Were you thinking of a certain weapon?Ikod: Yeah, a sword, but it won’t change.Kono: *Pulls out his own sword, slashing at Ikod*Ikod: Gah!Orb: *Transforms into a sword, blocking Kono’s strike*Onepu: Aha!Ikod: … whoa. *Looks closer at the glowing blue sword*Onepu: Kono, how did you know that would work?Kono: I… guessed.Ikod: … so I could have been chopped liver on the floor over there.Kono: Yeah.Onepu: Well, he isn’t. Obviously, the object will change when the user needs it to… perhaps you can change it willingly when you have some control over it.Ikod: Maybe… wow, this sword is perfect; it’s the right length, weight, and size.Onepu: The object must have formed to perfectly fit your being. Now then, Ikod, I suggest you try to tap into the power the object will give you, just… be careful.Ikod: *Nods* Er… I don’t know exactly what to do. Should I just focus on doing something?Onepu: *Nods* I think that would be best, such as… try to lift that stone over there. *Points to a stone the size of Ikod*Ikod: That stone is as big as I am! I don’t think I can lift it…Onepu: Just try.Kara: This reminds me of Star Wars way too much.Ikod: *Focuses on the large stone, pointing the sword at it* Grrr…. Lift. Up! I COMMAND YOU TO RISE!Stone: *Flies up off the ground, embedding itself into the ceiling*Kono: Whoa!Onepu: Excellent job, Ikod, I knew you could do it.Ikod: Heh… apparently so. That wasn’t even hard… I thought it was going to be a lot harder…Onepu: You seem to be a quick learner, Ikod; you shouldn’t have much trouble commanding the object.Ikod: Yeah… so should we just continue lifting rocks and making this thing change shape?Onepu: That is exactly what we should do. But we must find the boundaries of this object, and the full extent of its power.Ikod: … that’s quite a bit to ask for the first day, don’t you think?In a Pizza ParlorSarda: Here’s your food, enjoy. *Hands over pizza to customers, and walks back into the kitchen*Koon: *Roughly mashes dough into a pizza shape*Sarda: … something wrong?Koon: Wrong? Nothing’s wrong. *Flips pizza crust violently, tearing it in two*Sarda: …Koon: *Picks up two halves, and begins mashing them back together*Sarda: … you’re jealous, aren’t you?Koon: *Glare* jealous? Me? Nah, it’s just that I’m being outworked by you, of all people.Sarda: Me of all people? What’s wrong with me outworking a Matoran? Physically, Toa are stronger, and I’m a Toa of fire on top of that.Koon: And I’m a Matoran of acid. I’ve been making these pizzas in here for years now, and to be outdone on the very first day is not only daunting, but humiliating.Sarda: Yeah, I guess… but I wouldn’t pout over something like that, I’d appreciate the help.Koon: *Shrugs* It’s late, I suggest you go home, Sarda, I can handle the last few hours of the day… I always do.Sarda: *Nods* Seeya. And tell TDL to get some sleep for once.Koon: I’ll try.In a large BaseJeren: It is good news that you are alright, Kpik. But it is surprising to me that the Doctor could not deduce what the issue with your right arm was.Kpik: He said it might be my shadow side, trying to survive… his name was Zaltroz, just so you all know.Jeren: I have a question; does this side have the capability to overtake your body?Kpik: No, and if it does, then I’ve never seen it—him… try to take over.Garth: Puzzlin’, this is…Jeren: Indeed. I would suggest attempting to awaken this being inside yourself, but we do not know what might happen if he does awake.Kpik: When he was his own individual, he wasn’t the nicest of Toa… he still held the Toa code above all else, but he was just so different from the rest of us. I was his polar opposite, being a Toa of light, and him Shadow; but we always saw eye to eye for one reason or another.Jeren: Interesting… do you recall when you first met him?Kpik: Yeah. Our whole team had been stationed on another island because the Dark Hunters were waging war on it, and during an operation to capture a Dark Hunter base, we came across a half dead Toa of Shadow. We had one of our team run him back to the infirmary of our own base while we continued the operation. We conquered the base with the element of surprise, and when we returned back to our base, the Toa was fully awake, and on a rampage.Jeren: A killing spree?Kpik: No, he wasn’t hurting anyone; he was only trying to escape the infirmary with his powers. I was called into action to stop him, and after a long duel between the two of us, I prevailed, and due to terms before the duel took place, he was forced to join our team.Garth: Kpik! Why ‘aven’t ya told us anneh o’ this stuff before?Kpik: Because my past is too dark. And I never liked talking about Zaltroz anyway.Jeren: This is a very traumatic event, I see… I would like you to delve further into your past, but if you’re uncomfortable talking about it, then you can leave.Kpik: It’s… fine, I just… just need to get it out of my head, and off my chest.Jeren: Alright.Kpik: Well, the days went on, Zaltroz was beginning to come out with us on missions against the Dark Hunters, and he proved himself to be a worthy ally. In fact, without his help, the war on that island would have been different. He had a deep hatred for Dark Hunters for some reason, and we never learned why. We won the war, forcing the Dark Hunters off the island and saving the inhabitants. We decided to let Zaltroz go, but he decided to stay with us and be part of the team. We were all stationed on another island, called Shock, and for years we protected that island from any and all evil that threatened it. Well, one day, a powerful and evil being came to the island, a Makuta. He covered the island is darkness at first, requesting that Toa Zaltroz come forth and face him. His demands were not met; together, Zaltroz and I brought the light back to the island, and then went to its outskirts, where we found the Makuta, waiting for us.Necessary pause: *Occurs*Kpik: We fought him, and for hours it was evenly matched, despite the incredible amount of powers that the Makuta wielded. Then, when the three of us began to wear down, the Makuta saw an opportunity to destroy me. He unleashed a shadow hand on me, grabbing onto me with it and trying to absorb me into his being. Instead, Zaltroz took control of the shadow hand, and… well, everything went black. When I woke up, Zaltroz was nowhere to be seen, and the Makuta was dead, lying only yards from me. I couldn’t believe it, had we succeeded in killing the Makuta? I soon learned that we had, only that in the process, Zaltroz had been absorbed into me somehow, which is odd, since I should have been absorbed into him, he was controlling the shadow hand after all…Jeren: Do not linger on it. What is done is done, and as far as I know, there is nothing that can be done about your situation.Garth: Quite a story you ‘ave, son… ah’ve never ‘eard anythin’ like it in my whole life.Kpik: Neither had I, until it happened.Jeren: I’ve heard plenty foul stories in my time… but nothing like this. There is a being still inside you, and he is fighting for his life. We need to find a way to extract him from you, Kpik.Kpik: Hm… do you think he could come out like he once was?Jeren: I can’t say. After all this, and being exposed to light for such a long time, he will most likely be nothing but a spirit.Garth: Now ‘old on there, you aren’t sayin’ we have to find a body, are you?Jeren: No, but we must contain him somehow.Kpik: Is there any chance that he will come back in his own body?Jeren: I don’t know… it’s possible, but I don’t know where his body would be. It’s possible that his mass is scattered in the area where you and him were fused, and if that is the case, then separating the two of you must be done there.Kpik: Is there any point in waiting?Jeren: Yes, we must further study how he ended up inside you, and how you are able to use his abilities. I also want to see if it is possible to communicate with him, how, I do not know, but we will find a way if it is possible.-To be continuedHahahaha, this chapter is HUGE. :D I hope you guys enjoyed it, took me forever to write it. XP-Skar

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Onepu: Kono, how did you know that would work?

I was gonna guess the instruction manual.

Kpik: We fought him, and for hours it was evenly matched, despite the incredible amount of powers that the Makuta wielded. Then, when the three of us began to wear down, the Makuta saw an opportunity to destroy me. He unleashed a shadow hand on me, grabbing onto me with it and trying to absorb me into his being. Instead, Zaltroz took control of the shadow hand, and… well, everything went black. When I woke up, Zaltroz was nowhere to be seen, and the Makuta was dead, lying only yards from me. I couldn’t believe it, had we succeeded in killing the Makuta? I soon learned that we had, only that in the process, Zaltroz had been absorbed into me somehow, which is odd, since I should have been absorbed into him, he was controlling the shadow hand after all…

How did Zaltroz taste? Being absorbed and all...

Jeren: I don’t know… it’s possible, but I don’t know where his body would be. It’s possible that his mass is scattered in the area where you and him were fused, and if that is the case, then separating the two of you must be done there.Kpik: Is there any point in waiting?Jeren: Yes, we must further study how he ended up inside you, and how you are able to use his abilities. I also want to see if it is possible to communicate with him, how, I do not know, but we will find a way if it is possible.

SCIENCE!Good chappy, Kpik. Sure looks like it took forever to write.KUTGW.-MT

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So yeah, I got something to say.As of Today, December 30th, 2011 (9:20 CST), all of my stories, wherever they may be, are off the air.I've been going at this for over two years now, with little to no success, so I've giving up on the writing industry, and turning my full attention to role playing and reviewing others stories. Maybe some day if I get up enough skill and knowledge, I'll try this again, but for the time being, I cannot write a story to save mine, nor anyone's life.Adieu, stories.-Skar

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OH!!! So your Didact!! Sorry about that PM, your name change confused me. Hope you didn't forget me!!!These are back?! Personally, the first chapter seemed dull, except for....

MT: So… you want me to pick you up, and throw you off the top of that building?Tath: *Nods* Just throw me off the edge; I want to see what its like to fly.MT: *Glances at Onepu* Well?Onepu: Well, the chances of survival are against him, perhaps if you tossed him into a conveniently placed barrel of water, he would survive.MT: Well, Tath, I can fly, why don’t you just let me fly you around?Tath: No, I want to fly on my own.Onepu: You wouldn’t be flying, per se, you’d be falling.MT: And screaming.Tath: Okay, I have a better idea, how about you fly me up reeeeeeeeeeaaallly high, and then drop me into the water surrounding the island?

That made me laugh XD and quoting Onepu "it was nice knowing him"

Piruk: *Stops on the bike, and glances over at the large jet that he first wanted to fly* … :3Three minutes laterBontu: *Hears the sound a jet plane starting up* what the… *Turns to see one of his jets taking off* NO, NO, NO, NO! *Runs after the jet*Piruk: So… thrust? *Pushes the thrust, flying the jet out of the hanger at over 100 miles an hour* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!Bontu: Agh… I can’t stop him now… *Watches as Piruk flies the jet around crazily* hm… I think… yes, that should work. *Runs over and gets in his own jet, taking off after Piruk*

That should teach Bontu not to leave a Toa alone with his stuff for more than two seconds. Actually he should have learned that long ago :P

Onepu: *Nods* I think that would be best, such as… try to lift that stone over there. *Points to a stone the size of Ikod*Ikod: That stone is as big as I am! I don’t think I can lift it…Onepu: Just try.Kara: This reminds me of Star Wars way too much.

No, in Star Wars, I think Yoda would try to make you move a mountain....

Ikod: *Focuses on the large stone, pointing the sword at it* Grrr…. Lift. Up! I COMMAND YOU TO RISE!Stone: *Flies up off the ground, embedding itself into the ceiling*

That is the most obedient rock I've ever seen, usually they just ignore you... or crush you under their weight. Of course that particular rock could crush Ikod under it's weight at any time now, unless they can find a way to safely remove it from the ceiling. Yeah, good luck with that. :sigh:

Sarda: *Nods* Seeya. And tell TDL to get some sleep for once.Koon: I’ll try.

I'll take that as a no. They've tried to get TDL to sleep before, and the only way he can is if he's knocked unconscious, which seemed to happen on numerous occasions in the old comedy...

Garth: Now ‘old on there, you aren’t sayin’ we have to find a body, are you?Jeren: No, but we must contain him somehow.

Ooh! Ooh! I have an idea!!! Use Maxilos again!!! Wait, scratch that, his line's been overused too much... Let him take over Radiak!!! That pyromaniac needs a better personality, even if it's not even his. :evilgrin: Edited by Solek-Toa of Shadows

Me: Hey guys! I'm back!!!

Crowd: *groans*

Me: Woot! I think..... wait, do I even know any of you?

"Now that I've caught up to you, there's three things that usually happens, I could torture you for the information that we need then turn you in, torture you and leave you here to suffer and be hunted down, or turn you in right away to be interrorgated. Or I can just kill you right now if you want." - Xerus, Toa of Shadows -

 

"But wait, that's four things... HURK!!!" - Sound of a dying victim -

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