tourmalinex Posted September 20, 2015 Share Posted September 20, 2015 (edited) This is my first comic and its comes in 3 parts.This comic deals with what if the Toa failed and new universe was created.However none of the original Toa star in this comic this is a universe without them. Tempus - Part OnePage 1Page 2Page 3Page 4Page 5Page 6Page 7 Tempus - Part Two Page 8Page 9Page 10Page 11Page 12Page 13Page 14Page 15Page 16Page 17 Tempus - Three - The End Page 18Page 19Page 20Page 21Page 22Page 23Page 24Page 25Page 26 Edited September 24, 2015 by tourmalinex 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naota Takizawa Posted September 20, 2015 Share Posted September 20, 2015 Comic link doesn't work. Quote If you like Pingu & want to support a good project, click here. Also, I've rejoined the BZPRPG & I have a new profile for a new game. Click here to see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tourmalinex Posted September 20, 2015 Author Share Posted September 20, 2015 Try now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Hip Historian Iaredios Posted September 20, 2015 Share Posted September 20, 2015 Nope, still not available to the public. You might have to either give us a direct link to a picture, or wait for over a month Quote A RUDE AWAKENING - A Spherus Magna redo | Tzais-Kuluu | Pushing Back The Tide | Last Words | Black Coronation | Blue Man Bound | Visions of Thasos ن We are all but grey specks in a dark complex before a single white light Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tourmalinex Posted September 20, 2015 Author Share Posted September 20, 2015 Hopefully now you guys can see them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naota Takizawa Posted September 20, 2015 Share Posted September 20, 2015 Alright, they're readable now. Quote If you like Pingu & want to support a good project, click here. Also, I've rejoined the BZPRPG & I have a new profile for a new game. Click here to see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Onuki Posted September 22, 2015 Share Posted September 22, 2015 Nice job! This must have taken a lot of work. So far my favorite part is the variety of backgrounds you've used. It's cool to see Bionicle figures in those places. I liked how I recognized some of the characters (Gali Nuva with a Pakari, a Rahkshi), but I had a little bit of a hard time following the original plot. But I'm guessing it will be easier to understand with the addition of future issues. Then again, I stopped following Bionicle when its story became too confusing, so maybe I'm not the best person to comment on that. Thanks for posting! Quote The Latest and Fakest in Bionicle News Wanted: Chronicler | Wedding Announced | Bohrok-Kal Miffed | Staring Contest Continues Hakuna Vakama | Rau Convention Held | Globe Circumnavigated | Carver Offers Advice | Parade Possible Onepu Characterized | Koli Ball Shortage | Le-Koro Discovered | Toa Don Disguises | Top Toa Tied | Ko-Koro Welcomes Tahnok Hakuna Vakama Animation | Macku Goes Missing | In the Ice | The 1000 Word 2001 Poem | Kopaka the Toa | Honest Bionicle Trailers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tourmalinex Posted September 22, 2015 Author Share Posted September 22, 2015 Part Two Added Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tourmalinex Posted September 24, 2015 Author Share Posted September 24, 2015 Final part added, hope to get some more comments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tourmalinex Posted September 26, 2015 Author Share Posted September 26, 2015 I am thinking about making a comedy, called "My life with Makuta". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tourmalinex Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 Must of made the worst comic in the multiverse! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Must of made the worst comic in the multiverse! Hey! Don't be discouraged when you don't get comments. No comments doesn't equal bad comics. I have seen some very bad comic series that got lots of comments. I didn't read through every part of the comic, but from what I saw, these are really awesome! I like how you took real pictures and cartoonified them! It's a nice effect that I haven't seen much of before. I also really like the effects you added. Most of them looked pretty clean, and they weren't randomly placed. Great work! -Rez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tourmalinex Posted September 30, 2015 Author Share Posted September 30, 2015 Must of made the worst comic in the multiverse! Hey! Don't be discouraged when you don't get comments. No comments doesn't equal bad comics. I have seen some very bad comic series that got lots of comments. I didn't read through every part of the comic, but from what I saw, these are really awesome! I like how you took real pictures and cartoonified them! It's a nice effect that I haven't seen much of before. I also really like the effects you added. Most of them looked pretty clean, and they weren't randomly placed. Great work! -Rez Thank you, I think that the way my comic presents itself is the problem ,if people where able to read it like a real comic they would enjoy it more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onuki Posted October 11, 2015 Share Posted October 11, 2015 Nice job! I liked the incorporation of Suvas into the plot and the MOC using a Bohrok head, and the backgrounds are still one of the best parts! I think that the plot is good, but remember that it's not as easy for us to relate to something where we don't know any of the characters as to something based on the regular Bionicle storyline. I think this is cool and you should make whatever comics you want to, but I'll still suggest that you could probably make some really cool comics just using the regular Bionicle characters and those backgrounds! The great thing about something like Bionicle is that its story is open-ended enough that there's always room for fans to write new storylines that don't conflict with the main one and fit right in! As long as you can figure out a plot that's entertaining and believable, it works. Nice work and thanks for posting! Quote The Latest and Fakest in Bionicle News Wanted: Chronicler | Wedding Announced | Bohrok-Kal Miffed | Staring Contest Continues Hakuna Vakama | Rau Convention Held | Globe Circumnavigated | Carver Offers Advice | Parade Possible Onepu Characterized | Koli Ball Shortage | Le-Koro Discovered | Toa Don Disguises | Top Toa Tied | Ko-Koro Welcomes Tahnok Hakuna Vakama Animation | Macku Goes Missing | In the Ice | The 1000 Word 2001 Poem | Kopaka the Toa | Honest Bionicle Trailers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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