SynthMav Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 2 Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 I'm excited to see that you're starting your own comic, and curious to see how it'll play out, the first bit doesn't say much, but can't wait for the next bit. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynthMav Posted November 27, 2015 Author Share Posted November 27, 2015 because i want mystery to the comic Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 Okay, good start. Nice concept, a cliffhanger, and a promise for more make a good pilot. We might be seeing a nice story coming along! It's also good that you're using a mystery aspect. Keeps the readers interested. Also, a couple pieces of friendly advice. There's actually a resize tool in MSPaint (you're using that, right?) that you can use to cleanly make your sprites bigger. Just use the select tool to select what you want to resize, right click in the select box, and you'll find the resize tool. As for the text bubbles, they do their job by making the text easier to see, but they'd be more effective and less awkward-looking if the arrow's pointing at Mavrick's head. I hope you'll keep making comics and that my advice will help you along the way! Being a comic maker isn't the easiest business, but you'll be making some nice comics in no time. Have fun with your series! Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynthMav Posted November 27, 2015 Author Share Posted November 27, 2015 i have been trying with the text box i havent found the thing to alter the arrows and i have tried but guess what page 1. 1 Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 My goggles are gray. Aside from the Rahkshi's chicken legs, it looks goodt, and I still have not idea what's going on, so the mystery factor is still running strong. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynthMav Posted November 27, 2015 Author Share Posted November 27, 2015 it will all be explained tomorrowor on the hey mavrick blog today once i am done with it Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynthMav Posted November 28, 2015 Author Share Posted November 28, 2015 episodes 2 and 3 will be up tomorrow to make up for episode 2 note being uploaded today on the main site(note this is not a daily comic i just so happened to be able to do it this week) Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynthMav Posted November 28, 2015 Author Share Posted November 28, 2015 episode 2 almost done Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynthMav Posted November 30, 2015 Author Share Posted November 30, 2015 episode 2 was unable to be complete due to technical problems will attempt if i can to finish it Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted November 30, 2015 Share Posted November 30, 2015 It's all right, it happens to everyone. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynthMav Posted December 11, 2015 Author Share Posted December 11, 2015 ga matoran is ending i am unable to make a sprite comic and i cant think of a long storyline so i will make a new comic instead and just let this one get deleted Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted December 11, 2015 Share Posted December 11, 2015 Well that's alarming. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynthMav Posted December 11, 2015 Author Share Posted December 11, 2015 hey also i really cant work on it anyway that often so this is better Quote The Mavrick thanks to Starwars ep. 7 for the avatar pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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