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ga matoran adventures


SynthMav

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Okay, good start. Nice concept, a cliffhanger, and a promise for more make a good pilot. We might be seeing a nice story coming along! It's also good that you're using a mystery aspect. Keeps the readers interested.

 

Also, a couple pieces of friendly advice. There's actually a resize tool in MSPaint (you're using that, right?) that you can use to cleanly make your sprites bigger. Just use the select tool to select what you want to resize, right click in the select box, and you'll find the resize tool. As for the text bubbles, they do their job by making the text easier to see, but they'd be more effective and less awkward-looking if the arrow's pointing at Mavrick's head.

 

I hope you'll keep making comics and that my advice will help you along the way! Being a comic maker isn't the easiest business, but you'll be making some nice comics in no time. Have fun with your series!

mindeth the cobwebs

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