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BIONICLE: A New Life - [Review Thread]


Toa-Aletrax

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Hello, readers! I started writing a story one month ago. I would like to get some feedback and tips from you.

Summary
After the Reformation of Spherus Magna the Matoran, Toa and other
residents of the Matoran Universe try to start a new life on their new
planet. A mysterious Dark Hunter wants to rule the planet and creates a
plan that involves stealing something from his former friends.


Note:
I'm not English so I might make some mistakes in writing the story.


You can read the story here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11922130/1/A-New-Life
I will write more chapters in the near future, so stay tuned.
I'll add more stuff from the canon, in case you're wondering.

 

:l: :e: :s: :m_o: :v: :i: :k: :k:

 

Thanks! 

 

"The future will bring the answers to your questions, but only if you stop speaking long enough to notice them."

~Toa Nuju

 

My fanfiction (continuation of G1):

Chapter1 The Plan

Chapter2 The Encounter

Chapter3 The Blueprints

Chapter4 The Fight

Chapter5 The Traveller

Chapter6 New Tools

Chapter7 Rescuers on the Red Star

 

My musical project: The Chronicler (the topic of the project)

 

Songs:

- Le-Matoran in Bota Magna

- Triumph of The Seventh Toa

- Building New Atero (Le-Matoran in Bota Magna VIP)

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