W.A.M.W Posted August 28, 2016 Share Posted August 28, 2016 Remember when I posted my first MOC on the forums, Teridax the Risen? Well, after a bunch of Bricklink orders and a bunch of feedback, I've updated him quite a bit. What I've tried to update in this MOC was to make the legs and arms proportional with the rest of the body. Speaking of the arms, I also wanted to bulk them up to (Thanks to Invisible for the feedback). I also got rid of the unnecessary purple on the feet. Another goal I wanted to fulfill was stability (and we all know how fun THAT is with Titans). Let me just say that posing the first version of this MOC was a PAIN to do, and it still is with this latest version, sadly. If you're wondering, yes, I did enter this into the Makuta Contest. And, yes, I know how cliche this looks, since it's just another red Titan with the Mask of Control. Fun fact actually: I made this update before the contest was even announced. So, anyway, enough of my jibber-jabber, on to the MOC: https://flic.kr/p/KeUV2Mhttps://flic.kr/p/KpLQ3phttps://flic.kr/p/KwE63Rhttps://flic.kr/p/K6wQMWhttps://flic.kr/p/JA7fK3 Also, a sort-of size comparison with my other MOCs. https://flic.kr/p/KtN9KJ Feedback is always appreciated. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted August 28, 2016 Share Posted August 28, 2016 It's certainly better than some other Makuta MOCs I've seen. Often I'm pretty critical of larger MOCs, but this one is able to nicely convey personality without making it an incomprehensible jumble of parts.Although I would recommend adjusting the color scheme to include less gold. I think it would look rather nice with just black, red, and silver. Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Invisible Handman Posted August 28, 2016 Share Posted August 28, 2016 It's certainly big and impressive. The green of the corrupted mask of control clashes with the rest of the set. I do also feel like he needs a better distribution of gold on his body, maybe just get rid of it even. The rest of him is excellent though. Quote {Brickshelf Page - BZPRPG Profile - HFRPG Profile - Project Protodermis Profile} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millennium Posted August 28, 2016 Share Posted August 28, 2016 (edited) While I'm not a fan of absurdly large MOCs, I must say this one is impressive, I like it! It fits The Kingdom alternate universe Teridax more than G2 Makuta, but that will be up to Lego to decide.The gold and orange parts break down the anonymous black/red color scheme fairly well, and I think the green bits of his mask create a nice contrast, as if his head is on fire, or surrounded by some dark force. Edited August 28, 2016 by Millennium Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W.A.M.W Posted August 29, 2016 Author Share Posted August 29, 2016 Thanks everyone for the feedback! I wanted to add that I wanted to give the previous version an "ignited" look, like the mask of Control was corrupted by anger and transformed Teridax's body to show his rage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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