W.A.M.W Posted September 8, 2016 Share Posted September 8, 2016 OH HEY WOULD YOU LOOK AT THAT A NON-MAKUTA MOC FINALLY DOES THAT MEAN I GET POINTS FOR BREAKING THE MOLD?!?!? So yeah, Teridax wasn't the only one where I adapted the feedback I received into making a new version of a MOC. Some things I tried to improve on the previous version were making the arms more armored, and to calm down some of the details a bit (especially in the upper legs). Well, that's all I have to say really. Onto the MOC: https://flic.kr/p/J8ftEhhttps://flic.kr/p/JUtCzohttps://flic.kr/p/K1BXuEhttps://flic.kr/p/J8fxLJhttps://flic.kr/p/J8fyMmhttps://flic.kr/p/JUtKvN Feedback is always appreciated. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katanga Posted September 8, 2016 Share Posted September 8, 2016 The weapon and heavily armored figure really dwarf the shield. It could be excused as a buckler, but I don't feel it makes sense with such a broad weapon. Just my opinion though. Others may prefer a smaller shield. Aside from that, I really dislike the red on the chest plate. I feel it's very jarring without any other colors to compliment it. Quote My Bionicle Tumblr. New photos are uploaded daily! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Invisible Handman Posted September 8, 2016 Share Posted September 8, 2016 I feel like he needs more covering shoulder armour than crystal pieces, his shoulders also feel too far back and his upper legs could benefit from some detailing to cover the grey bone beneath. Quote {Brickshelf Page - BZPRPG Profile - HFRPG Profile - Project Protodermis Profile} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W.A.M.W Posted September 8, 2016 Author Share Posted September 8, 2016 I feel like he needs more covering shoulder armour than crystal pieces, his shoulders also feel too far back and his upper legs could benefit from some detailing to cover the grey bone beneath. Might I ask, do you have any suggestions as to what piece I should try out on the shoulders? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Invisible Handman Posted September 8, 2016 Share Posted September 8, 2016 Traditionally Chima shoulders or those gold armour pieces Tahu has for shoulders would work. Yer using the chima pieces so those wont work, but vorox armour might look good if you can get the silver/black to work in his colour scheme. Quote {Brickshelf Page - BZPRPG Profile - HFRPG Profile - Project Protodermis Profile} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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