Jump to content

  • Log in with Facebook Log in with Twitter Log In with Google      Sign In   
  • Create Account

Welcome to BZPower!

Hi there, while we hope you enjoy browsing through the site, there's a lot more you can do if you register. The process is easy and you can use your Google, Facebook, or Twitter account to make it even faster. Some perks of joining include:
  • Create your own topics, participate in existing discussions, and vote in polls
  • Show off your creations, stories, art, music, and movies and play member and staff-run games
  • Enter contests to win free LEGO sets and other prizes, and vote to decide the winners
  • Participate in raffles, including exclusive raffles for new members, and win free LEGO sets
  • Send private messages to other members
  • Organize with other members to attend or send your MOCs to LEGO fan events all over the world
  • Much, much more!
Enjoy your visit!

Posted Image


Photo

Short Stories Contest #8: Winners!

Title Twisters Winners Short Story Contest

  • Please log in to reply
21 replies to this topic

#1 Offline Velox

Velox
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Forum Assistants
  • Bibliophilic Littérateur & Senior Staff

  • 20-September 07
  • 11,831 posts
  •   BZP Assistant

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 02:57 AM

Posted Image

Original Contest Topic

Judged Winners - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -------------- - - -- -- - Polled WinnersFirst Place: #39: Fractures - by GSR - - - ------------- - ---- - - - -- - - -First Place: #37: Ignition - by Legolover-361Second Place: #28: All Our Sins Remembered - by Aderia: Toa of Ducklings - - - - - Second Place: #25: Divided We Fall - by Grant-SudThird Place: #2: The Coming of the Toa - by Tolkien - - -- - --- - - ---- - ----- - - Third Place: #16: Dreams of Darkness - by Riisiing Moon

--------------------------------------------------------------------------[Poll Topic]Honorable Mentions[in order of entry, not rank]

#6: 12.5 - by Shyyrn

#11: Deep into Darkness - by cap'n k#12: The Exile's Tale - by Nuile: Crazy Writer

#18: What Lurks Below - by Inferna Firesword

#24: Showdown - by Taipu1

#33: Rebirth - by Peach 00

Prizes: GSR, Aderia, Tolkien, Legolover-361, Grant Sud, and Riisiing Moon will receive prototypes, courtesy of Black Six, along with, of course, eternal fame and glory.Next, I'd like to give a huge thank-you to our contest judges:-Nuju Metru-Lloyd: the White Wolf-Tolkien-Snoopy82-xccj-Tre Cool-Toa of Dancing-Eeko-55555-VeloxThey were all extremely awesome, and I'm so thankful that we were able to get all our results in so quick.Additionally, I'd like to give an enormous thank-you shout-out to 55555, Ziko, Friar Tuck, xccj, and Nuju Metru who were incredibly helpful throughout this contest and in planning this contest.Lastly, I'd like to thank everyone who participated in this contest. I hope you'll forgive a few hiccups that we had, and 55555 and I definitely have learned from this and hope to make future contests even better. Congrats to all, thank you again, and we'll see you again soon!Posted Image

Edited by Velox, Dec 19 2011 - 12:24 AM.

  • 0

"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender


#2 Offline Erebus

Erebus
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Forum Assistants
  • Fact Team Member

  • 26-April 06
  • 11,495 posts
  •   BZP Assistant

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 03:25 AM

Congratulations to the winners. The prototype pieces are a great prize. :)
  • 0

jlovfkk.jpg


#3 Online xccj

xccj
  • Premier Member
    BioniLUG Member
  • Premier Reporters
  • Senior Staff Mask Maker

  • 17-January 03
  • 6,510 posts
  •   BZP Reporter

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 03:32 AM

I didn't give you guys any help; you always did the exact opposite of what I suggested. :PAnyway, there were some really good stories here, and the winners are all worthy of their titles. Congratulations!:music:
  • 0

b-bolin-03.jpg


#4 Offline Shyyrn

Shyyrn
  • Members
  • Submerged!

  • 14-August 07
  • 1,172 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 04:04 AM

I won honorable mention! This is a great honor. :)Props to the winners. I read a bunch of the stories, and I enjoyed them a lot--I can see why they won. Enjoy your pieces!Thank you, judges, for appraising my work and judging it worthy. Perhaps now I will flesh it out and actually explain what happens to the characters. :PThank you again,Shyyrn
  • 0

"Let me realize that my past failures at follow-through are no indication of my future performance...

...They're just healthy little fires that are going to light up my resolve." 


#5 Offline The Duchess Approves

The Duchess Approves
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Members
  • Illusory Instigator

  • 12-October 03
  • 1,359 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 05:04 AM

Yes! I was hoping to see Aderia's entry up here! Good to see she got second. ^^Well, I didn't win anything, but I still had loads of fun with this contest (considering I posted my first ever short story into this contest, I'm not at all surprised. Even so, I got a good deal of feedback for my story and one very, very helpful review from the SSCC). I'll see you guys around the Short Story forum. ^^Anyway, it looks like I've got some good reading ahead of me. Congratulations again to the winners! =D
  • 0

#6 Offline Darthbrandon

Darthbrandon
  • Members
  • Descending into Protodermis

  • 19-February 06
  • 1,036 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 09:47 AM

Congrats to my good friend Legolover-361 for winning the people's choice! :biggrin:
  • 0
I'm BACK!!!!!!!!
PM me if you want your comics or movie's reviewed by a guy who loves Bum Reviews!
Posted ImageP.S. I am not Doug Walker, nor do I claim to be.

Dark709 Fanmovie CHECK OUT DARK709's COMICS AND MOVIES!
Darthbrandon14's "ESCAPE FROM DARKNESS", coming soon
IF YOU WANT TO GUEST STAR, PM ME ASAP! GIVE ME A "RAZOR" SPRITESHEET! DON'T POST IN MY COMICS!
Posted Image

#7 Offline Thunder on the Mountain

Thunder on the Mountain
  • Members
  • Steely Visionary

  • 08-August 07
  • 357 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 10:56 AM

Not even a mention for the losing people's choice contestants? Bah. :P Anyway, I haven't actually read the first and second place judged winners from start to finish, so I'll have to get around to that. Congrats to all final placers! Such an awesome contest, with such open options for stories and such a huge number of entries. I'm a bit confused about a couple entries that didn't make the polls, judge choice, or honorable mentions, but hey, there were a lot of entries. They can't all be winners. :PAgain, good job to basically everyone who made that top post there! (Plus Cederak and Sumiki. Just 'cause. :P)
  • 0

Posted Image


#8 Offline CHRIS PRATT

CHRIS PRATT
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens
  • The Storyteller

  • 22-December 08
  • 4,671 posts
  •   Outstanding BZPower Citizen

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 11:14 AM

Well done to the winners; glad to see Aderia's All Our Sins Remembered in second place, and Grant-Sud's Divided We Fall also in second place.-ibrow
  • 0

THE BZP STORY: Full Cast - OFFICIAL PREVIEW

 

bzp_banner.jpg

 

^Click for the Topic^


#9 Offline Peach 00

Peach 00
  • Banned Members
  • Submerged!

  • 31-August 09
  • 1,195 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 12:17 PM

Congrats to the winners, they definitely deserve their places. ^_^ *raises glass of sparkling cider in toast*
  • 0
On the day the wall came down / They threw the locks onto the ground
And with glasses high / We raised a cry / For freedom had arrived
 
On the day the wall came down / The ship of fools had finally run aground
Promises lit up the night / Like paper doves in flight
 
I dreamed you had left my side / No warmth, not even pride remained
And even though you needed me / It was clear that I could not do a thing for you
 
Now life devalues day by day / As friends and neighbors turn away
And there's a change that even with regret / Cannot be undone
 
Now frontiers shift like desert sands / While nations wash their bloodied hands
Of loyalty, of history / In shades of grey
 
I woke to the sound of drums / The music played, the morning sun streamed in
I turned and I looked at you / And all but the bitter residues slipped away
 
slipped away...
 




#10 Offline Sumiki

Sumiki
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Forum Assistants
  • Hat Enterprises CEO

  • 04-September 06
  • 11,322 posts
  •   BZP Assistant

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 12:44 PM

Congratulations to all the winners. You had some great entries - I was glad to come in tied for fifth in the People's Choice Poll. It was fun - hopefully there will be another SSC sometime very soon. :)
  • 0

Posted Image


#11 Offline Inferna Firesword

Inferna Firesword
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens
  • Tahnok-Kal Attacks!

  • 02-June 08
  • 3,257 posts
  •   Outstanding BZPower Citizen

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 12:48 PM

I'm shocked. I didn't think I'd rank anywhere on here. :oCongrats, everyone!-Inferna
  • 0

Thanks for the memories, BZP. Time for me to leave.


#12 Offline Eeko

Eeko
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Forum Assistants
  • Mask of Time Discovered

  • 31-August 08
  • 4,288 posts
  •   BZP Assistant

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 12:59 PM

Congrats to all the winners! :DI had a blast reading and judging your entries, even though it took several hours. :P
  • 0

jlovfkk.jpg


#13 Offline Taipu1

Taipu1
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens
  • Stone Champion Defeated

  • 20-April 06
  • 2,784 posts
  •   Outstanding BZPower Citizen

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 01:07 PM

Yes, Honourable mention! That is the best I've ever done in any contest, ever. :D
  • 0

- Taipu1.

tayis.png

HighFly Matoran

Showdown

BZPRPG Profiles

Have you seen my Blog? I understand if you haven't


#14 Offline Legolover-361

Legolover-361
  • Members
  • Stellar Storyteller

  • 09-June 09
  • 3,495 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 01:47 PM

I feel honored to have placed so high in this competition, especially among plenty of well-written entries. Thank you, judges, for deeming my story worthy of the People's Choice poll, and thank you, voters and reviewers, for reading and enjoying it. I greatly enjoyed writing my entry and am glad to see my enjoyment translated into a great story.I would like to offer a great congratulations to the other People's Choices and the Judge's Choices -- I read all those stories, and they were great. A somewhat quieter but no less well-meaning congratulations to the Honorable Mentions; remember that even though you didn't win here, there's always next contest. Lastly, to all entrants, good luck in your future writing endeavors.
  • 0

#15 Offline Ziko

Ziko
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Retired Staff
  • Stone Champion Defeated

  • 04-October 07
  • 2,772 posts
  •   Retired Staff

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 01:57 PM

Congratulations! Enjoy your eternal fame and glory (and those other prizes, I guess =P).
  • 0

#16 Offline Toa of Dancing

Toa of Dancing
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Members
  • Night of the Past

  • 03-May 07
  • 7,976 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 02:08 PM

Well, my favorite three all placed, so I'm happy. Good job guys. And thanks for thanking us, Velox. XD
  • 0

KHrIaSF.jpg

The League of Draaaaaven is too stronk.


#17 Offline Grant-Sud

Grant-Sud
  • Members
  • Defender of the Page

  • 26-June 09
  • 490 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 02:36 PM

First off, I swore there were three really good stories missing from the Public Polls. I had a feeling they'd make a reappearance and they did. :3All three of the Judges Winners are excellent tales, but unfortunately I haven't completely finished The Coming of the Toa. Fractures and All Our Sins Remembered were easily the most original plots.I don't think I've seen another Short Story that portrays Tren Krom so well, and the writing style is on par with Tolkien's. It's overall meaning of fate, and the flowing plot, deserves the top spot, so congratulations!As for Aderia's you can feel the turmoil of the main Toa as the story goes on. What was probably the best thing though, and I don't mean to spoil anything, but what threw me off was that these mental manifestations ended up becoming something real. It wasn't just an evil he fought in himself, but something he had to handle physically and imo that's what really set the story apart.I'm going to get to Tolkien's as well, and I don't mean to leave him out. What I've read so far is excellent.I'm glad to see a few honorable mentions that I had my eye on from the beginning. My only disappointment was the fact that Hanging by a Thread by Elzy, didn't make it on that list. It's a great story and written well. ^_^ Also for the honor mention 12.5, I'm singling it out forthe chosen title and plot which were just flippin unique. Very glad that one was mentioned as well.All That Glitters, All Our Sins Remembered and To Trap a Tahnok were also excellent entries that made it into the public polls, and no one should forget that. :)Besides that, the contest was a blast and hopefully we'll all be able to do it again soon! Congrats everyone!

Edited by The Great Grant in the Sky, Dec 18 2011 - 02:47 PM.

  • 0

#18 Offline Project Nightfall

Project Nightfall
  • Members
  • Flying Force!

  • 15-November 05
  • 2,360 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 06:32 PM

I HATE YOU REALITY.Anyway, congratulations to the winners ^^Maybe next time for me.
  • 0

27946801_un-live-action-trailer-per-il-d


#19 Offline GSR

GSR
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Forum Leaders
  • Book Badger

  • 18-January 03
  • 1,070 posts
  •   BZP Leader

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 06:50 PM

whwhwhawhawhatUm. Wow. Thank you! To be honest, I felt bad about not having time to revise my entry as much as I would have liked before submitting (in fact I was thinking about taking it down until such time as I can), and I felt a lot of the other fics were really good (even if I didn't have time to read them all), so this is a really big surprise. Congratulations to all the other winners as well!

Edited by GSR, Dec 19 2011 - 01:57 AM.

  • 0

#20 Offline Toa Smoke Monster

Toa Smoke Monster
  • Outstanding BZPower Citizens
  • Master of Fragmentation Rampant

  • 09-April 10
  • 5,425 posts
  •   Outstanding BZPower Citizen

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 07:02 PM

Congrats to all the winners! http://www.bzpower.c...tyle_emoticons/default/cool.png
  • 0

Everyone is one choice away from being a bad guy in someone else's story.

 

Check out my Bionicle short stories The Agori and A Skakdi Horror Story.

 

 

Also check out my comedy series Adventures of the Bara Magna Sets!


#21 Offline Legolover-361

Legolover-361
  • Members
  • Stellar Storyteller

  • 09-June 09
  • 3,495 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 18 2011 - 07:05 PM

Out of idle curiosity, how did the judges rank all the entries? Also, would I be right in assuming I can now edit out any typos in my story?
  • 0

#22 Offline TNTOS

TNTOS
  • Premier Member
  • Premier Members
  • Nuhvok-Kal Attacks!

  • 13-October 06
  • 3,003 posts
  •  

Posted Dec 19 2011 - 10:29 AM

Congrats to the winners and honorable mentions!Even though I didn't vote for it, I think Ignition definitely deserved to win. I'm going to need to read Fractures now, though, just to see what it is like.-TNTOS-
  • 0

"It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat." - Theodore Roosevelt

A Writerly Blog
The Tasty Library of Sugary Goodness
(My Little BIONICLE: Friendship is Explosive Completed 01/05/14)
{The Shika Trilogy Omnibus Completed 03/31/14) (Review Topic)
(In the End Completed 09/01/14) (Review Topic)
The Biological Chronicle: (2001) (2002) (2003) (2004) (2005) (2006) (2007) (2008) (2009) (2010)





0 user(s) are browsing this forum

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users