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#1 Offline Petewa

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Posted Jan 18 2017 - 10:07 PM

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Like any good story, ours starts with a maskmaker.
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#2 Offline The 1st Shadow

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Posted Jan 19 2017 - 01:34 AM

Hm... I usually like to know a bit about the personality in order to give them a fitting mask. Like how Tahu was defensive and felt invincible, he was endowed with a Mask of Shielding. Matau was a jokester and a show-off, hence the Mask of Illusion.

 

But, if you're letting us decide on what kind of character we want to see, I guess we can just decide on a mask and develop a matching personality as we go. I say we go for a Mask of Charisma or a Sanok.


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#3 Offline Toa Smoke Monster

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Posted Jan 19 2017 - 03:22 AM

I vote to have him/her wear a Hau, because I love that design. :)


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Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story.

 

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Posted Jan 19 2017 - 10:22 AM

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Posted Jan 19 2017 - 04:52 PM

He could be a Le-Matoran. And his mask could be a dark green color. 

 

That's just popped into my head at the moment.


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Posted Jan 20 2017 - 12:12 AM

Yeah, I'm good with a Le-Matoran.


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Posted Jan 20 2017 - 04:00 AM

Dark blue for a Po-Matoran


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Posted Jan 20 2017 - 07:28 AM

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#9 Offline Petewa

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Posted Jan 21 2017 - 11:55 PM

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Posted Jan 22 2017 - 09:31 PM

The new Le-Matoran's name is Vento, Esperanto/Italian for wind. or Luft, German for air. Pick one.

His or her question: "Where am !?"


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Posted Jan 23 2017 - 10:20 AM

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At this point you can ask another question, or ask to be led back to the village.

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Posted Jan 23 2017 - 09:58 PM

This looks fun! Hmm... What to ask...

 

Loganto asks with a bright smile on, giddy about the world-building exercise. "Do you enjoy madu fruit? Do you even have it on your island? I tell you, it's good. Sweet, tangy... I grow them on Mata Nui, if you've ever heard of the place."


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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 07:44 AM

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The same options remain.

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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 07:56 AM

I'm thinking a thinner brush might be good for the text, or even just using a font tool.


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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 08:20 AM

I'm thinking a thinner brush might be good for the text, or even just using a font tool.


You're prolly right.
Is this better?

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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 10:12 AM

Might want to watch out for those spaces too, to define each word better.


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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 10:18 AM

Might want to watch out for those spaces too, to define each word better.


Sorry, that's just my dysgraphia, I'll try to be better with it.

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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 03:16 PM

Vento/Luft asks, "And who exactly are you?"


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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 04:34 PM

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Your options remain the same.

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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 07:37 PM

Loganto scratches his head. "Wait, wha- Ohhhh... Oh yes. That's why I have a dent... Is there a medical matoran you know anywhere? Preferably a Ga-Matoran?"

 

Ga-Matoran? Dalika? Miru maybe? I love a girl in a Miru.


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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 09:34 PM

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The same options remain.

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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 10:22 PM

(Is that me?)

 

"Well, maybe one punch wouldn't hurt...." Loganto says, closing his eyes.


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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 10:56 PM

(Is that me?)


Kinda, it's the main character, Vento, whose course of actions are decided by you, the reader.

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Posted Jan 24 2017 - 11:14 PM

(Ohh! I get it now.)


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Posted Jan 25 2017 - 03:34 AM

"Hmmm... being that I am a new being, I think it's important that I learn the basics of this world. Are there any combat-related methods of gaining more political power?"


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Posted Jan 25 2017 - 07:26 AM

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Posted Jan 25 2017 - 07:43 AM

"Perhaps it's time we head to the village..."


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Posted Jan 25 2017 - 10:45 AM

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Posted Jan 25 2017 - 05:18 PM

May I ask for an aesthetic change? Could you please change the color of Vento's eyes to something less cyan? It's hard to see them. I'm thinking a reddish orange to contrast the blue and complement the green.

 

Vento: "So can we see some sights of... Le-Mataru, I'm assuming?"


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Posted Jan 26 2017 - 06:51 AM

Please link to images over 500 kB. -B6

The entirety of Le-Mataru is comprised of trees, not as large as the ones found in Bo-Mataru, but massive, nonetheless. From the trees hang fruits that rarely fall from their branches, many of these fruits have been hollowed out, as the Le-Matoran use them for housing.

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Posted Jan 26 2017 - 06:46 PM

Vento: "Well, how do they harvest them, then? May I see one up-close?"
 


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Posted Jan 27 2017 - 09:50 AM

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The Le-Matoran tend to simply scoop the flesh out of these fruits and send the flesh off to the Marketers across the island.

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Posted Jan 28 2017 - 01:00 AM

Vento: "I'm sorry, 'island'? I guess there's more to this place than greenery. So... you guys have anything fun to do around here?"


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Posted Feb 02 2017 - 06:12 AM

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Sorry for the wait, I was sick.

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Posted Feb 02 2017 - 07:45 AM

Vento: "Cage fighting! How does that work?"
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Posted Feb 02 2017 - 01:15 PM

"You mean hit back, right? Because obviously both dudes are going to be trying to punch each other, with the determining factor being who hits the other harder and more often... right?"


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Posted Feb 05 2017 - 06:12 PM

"It's simple logic really. Now, onto more important matters: Who's the big bad terrorizing the island and necessitating the intervention of a dynamic team of toa heroes, each with distinct personality?"


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