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"Ghost," The Sp00kiest


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#1 Offline capMARVELOUS

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Posted May 19 2017 - 06:46 PM

"I'll admit, my haunting hasn't gone very well lately.  I think it all started going downhill when I tried to haunt that stick of butter."

--Ghost

 

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CREATOR'S NOTES:

This little guy was originally supposed to be finished and posted by Halloween of last year, but a sudden shortage of parts in the right colors prevented me from doing so.  He's here now, though.  Just pretend that it's Halloween.

Making "Ghost" was interesting because he was the first MOC I've ever made that required a stand.  I think I did a pretty good job, though that's just my own opinion.

 

He doesn't have a full backstory just yet, but the link will be here once I make it.

More photos on my Flickr.

As always, comments and criticisms are welcome.


Edited by capMARVELOUS, May 26 2017 - 09:14 PM.

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#2 Offline Toa TimeLord

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Posted May 19 2017 - 09:42 PM

It's cute yet spooky. :P

The only criticism I have is continuing the trans blue by using trans blue bones in the tail and arms.
It would give it a more spirit glow and more solid color scheme.

Over all I like the custom builds and design.

Good job.

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I've lived for over two billion years. I've seen the rise and fall of my people. I fought in a war that destroyed everything including the very universe I came from.
I now walk in this universe and stand as a silent protector. I always go where I'm needed even if it's impossible to help. For you don’t just give up. You don’t just let things happen. You make a stand! You say no! You have the guts to do what’s right, even when everyone else just runs away.
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#3 Offline Supreme King TIN

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Posted May 20 2017 - 02:49 AM

Feels more aquatic than ghostly but then again those are Takadox's parts. As before I recommend taking a few more photo's. The colour scheme is solid with teh blue and orange contrast, and the model is good but I feel like the wings should be bigger. They look way too small to lift his body (which admittedly is weightless since he's a ghost).


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#4 Offline capMARVELOUS

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Posted May 26 2017 - 09:13 PM

It's cute yet spooky. :P

The only criticism I have is continuing the trans blue by using trans blue bones in the tail and arms.
It would give it a more spirit glow and more solid color scheme.

Over all I like the custom builds and design.

Good job.

Thank you!  As soon as I get more trans blue bones, I'll switch out the drab gray ones.

The build was actually very simple.  If you'd like to replicate it, I can show you how I did it.

 

Feels more aquatic than ghostly but then again those are Takadox's parts. As before I recommend taking a few more photo's. The colour scheme is solid with teh blue and orange contrast, and the model is good but I feel like the wings should be bigger. They look way too small to lift his body (which admittedly is weightless since he's a ghost).

Thank you!  He does feel aquatic, yeah, perhaps because he's a member of Takadox's species.  (I forgot to mention that.)

I can see where you're coming from on the wings.  They are a bit small, though I didn't really intend for them to be wings; they were more decoration than anything else.  I'll see if I can't scrounge up some bigger ones.


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#5 Offline Wiriamu

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Posted May 27 2017 - 01:09 PM

He's definitely an interesting model-like the color scheme and everything. Is he a mutated/undead member of Takadox's species by chance?


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