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Beyond The Fourth Wall

3D comics omg yes

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#1 Offline Toa Chuck

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Posted Dec 28 2011 - 05:59 PM

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Seeing as my previous series have come and gone without notice, I am trying again.

Now with an original plot, and condensed character list, this series will try to break out of it's generic content,

and succeed where my other comics failed.

:br: ITS IN 3D! :br:

Main Comics:

The Revelation

Nails' Intro

Chuckette is not impressed.

The fourth wall explained.

The journey begins <-- 3d doesn't start till here

The journey actually begins

THE ULTRA MEGA AWESOME BEST HEDGEHOG BATTLE OF THE CENTURY TO THE DEATH!

Fillers:

The Plot of Bionicle

The Plot of Hero Factory

I am currently accepting guest stars. If you choose to guest star, the gang will arrive in your comic's dimension and stick around a while.

Guest star list:

1. King Joe

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Edited by Chuck the Toa of crazyness, Mar 20 2012 - 08:33 PM.

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#2 Offline -Absorba-

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Posted Dec 28 2011 - 06:08 PM

Welcome to Atop the Fourth Wall, where bad comics burn!I'm sorry, just had to. :DAnyways, promising stuff. Gonna check later for progress.
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#3 Offline Tenebrae Invictus

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Posted Dec 28 2011 - 06:34 PM

Your graphics are okay - the floor could definitely be improved and having outlines around your text would greatly help.It will be interesting to see how the rest of the characters break the fourth wall, as Nails did in his intro.
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#4 Offline King Joe

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Posted Dec 28 2011 - 06:51 PM

Not a bad start. The title gave me the idea that you would be putting Chimoru sprites in the real world, which would be a very interesting concept that may still come to fruition. An yes, some speech bubbles or glowy text would be nice.
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#5 Offline Toa Chuck

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Posted Jan 07 2012 - 07:42 PM

New comic!The fourth wall explained.This comic should explain things. Or just make your brain hurt.I went ahead and tried some glow effects on paint.net, and it looks pretty good.
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#6 Offline King Joe

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Posted Jan 07 2012 - 11:05 PM

Duuuuuuuuuude! Technobabble for the win! Coincidentally, the explanation of realities is almost EXACTLY the one I used for my comics! Interested in a small crossover? PM me.
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#7 Offline Toa Chuck

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Posted Jan 08 2012 - 05:03 PM

Well, in the series, they will be dimention hopping and exploring the BZreality, and will often encounter other comics, and stay for a bit. If you want, you could GS this way.

Edited by Chuck the Toa of crazyness, Jan 08 2012 - 05:04 PM.

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#8 Offline Exon

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Posted Jan 08 2012 - 06:55 PM

I love technobabble. I love theoretical physics. You just combined my two intrests into one interesting scene, much like the 2009 Star Trek movie. I have one criticism, though, "the glowing part" around the "glowy text" is a bit to small. Now, I have never used Paint.net, but I'm supposing that it would have a tool that lets you make that area bigger or something. I'd suggest a safe 3 pixel enlargement (the glowy part would be 3 pixels larger than the text). That's all the advice I can give, seeing as I use GIMP.I look forward to reading these comics.~Exon :hau:

Edited by Exon, Jan 10 2012 - 06:26 PM.

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I would post saying only, "You're awesome," but I would get reported for spam, and rightfully so. Then I would have to delete my own post or maybe leave an edit telling myself to read the rules, which I wrote. You get the picture.


As you can see, I support the "put a windrider quote in your sig" movement. I do hope it catches on.

O kewl. I be Tohunga. But I suh tinee. owell.

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#9 Offline -Absorba-

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Posted Jan 08 2012 - 07:01 PM

I'm surprised that technobabble, once I "decoded" it, it actually made sense!
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Posted Jan 12 2012 - 12:15 PM

looks interesting, might be getting a PM from me soon, I really like the idea of them going around to other people's comics, and as said before, you need bigger glow around the text, I was straining my eyes to read it, and I have 20/20 vision... otherwise its really good!
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#11 Offline Toru Acura: The Saboteur

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Posted Jan 14 2012 - 01:56 PM

I understood the technobabble perfectly the first time :P. I did lose my position st some parts, though.Interesting concept, will keep my eye on this.
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#12 Offline Toa Chuck

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Posted Jan 15 2012 - 04:27 PM

Sorry for the wait. Its in progress, but I'm no narupurocks when it comes to speed.So here are two fillers I made a while back.(read both to get the joke)The plot of BionicleThe plot of Hero Factory
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Posted Jan 20 2012 - 05:39 PM

I know it! Why did they start hero factory if its almost the same thing as Bionicles but more futuristic, they could have at least just added hero factory as a part of the bionicle universe!
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#14 Offline Toa Chuck

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 08:25 PM

Well, many of my loyal and devoted fans may be wondering what has become of their favorite author. Fear not. My prolonged absance is due to a massive update to the comics, and the wait is almost over...2.0 Preview
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#15 Offline King Joe

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 08:39 PM

HOLY...!Hello Chuck Robot...
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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 02:25 PM

What tha E.T, who is that big man holding the tiny you.... And what program did you use to make it?
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#17 Offline Toa Chuck

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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 08:13 PM

First 2.0 comic!IN STUNNING 3D!Kirop, and the journey begins!
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#18 Offline Toru Acura: The Saboteur

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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 08:17 PM

Uh.... 3D models look a little... I don't know. The masks could use some work, I had trouble identifying some of them. Other than that, I don't know what to say about them.But why does everybody hate ponies!?
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#19 Offline -Absorba-

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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 08:21 PM

Was that done in Blender? Sure looks like it.I'm a little concerned about the colors. Most are kind of mismatched, and the heads are a little thin.Ah well. Trust me, I've used Blender, and it's hard, so I won't blame you. If it's not, I still won't, because it's pretty much the same with all 3d-sprites.
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#20 Offline Toa Chuck

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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 08:28 PM

I'm actually using Autodesk inventor, a 3d prototype program. I find it also doubles as a 3d modeling program. It mainly has textures for materials used in building, with some generic colors as well, so coloring was a pain, and still not perfect. It is still a work in progress, and the graphics should improve over time.
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#21 Offline Toa Chuck

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Posted Feb 20 2012 - 08:48 AM

New Comic!The Center
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Posted Feb 29 2012 - 11:17 AM

Wow! King Joe!!! Nice 3D modles, they look nice, but possibley a little edgey around the, well, edges. Otherwise, great as useual!
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Posted Mar 01 2012 - 11:26 AM

These comics interest me. And the Fourth Wall. It's real. Made of the hardest, densest material known to mankind. Found that out when I ran into it once. Anyway, you seem to have a good, humorous plot for this.Heh, Chuckette. That's a funny name.
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Posted Mar 04 2012 - 04:34 AM

Lol. The jokes are funny, especially the ending jokes. "IT'S HORRIBLE! IT'S FLUFFY! IT'S PINK!"And "Was it really that hard to look up from a candy wrapper?"Though I think the pony hate one was funnier. Also, nice 3D, but you could make them a bit more accurate. (However seeing as whenever I use Blender the best I've made was a gingerbread man...I can't complain.)I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
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Posted Mar 10 2012 - 08:32 PM

Sorry for the wait,New comic!THE MOST EPICALLY AWESOME HEDGEHOG BATTLE OF DEATH OF THE CENTURY!
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Posted Mar 10 2012 - 09:20 PM

LOL. Anticlimactic endings! Yay!But just as funny as the jokes, is that Sonic and whatever Pokemon that is are 3D sprites. It just looks funny.
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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 09:17 PM

NEW COMIC!The assassinI really like this one. We finally get a villain.Anyway, our time at the center of everywhere is drawing to a close. I need more Guest star comic series!
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Posted May 06 2013 - 03:05 PM

This is funny, I don't see how people could ignore your comics, what part is 3-D, I haven't gotten far, but I haven't seen a 3-D. I must be blind.


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Posted May 07 2013 - 06:15 PM

1. The first few are sprites, it isn't 3d till the fifth one.

2. This topic is dead. I havn't made a new comic for over a year. I am shocked you even found it.


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