MIY Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 (edited) So a old retirement home is for sale because the people who own it are moving to a new one. I buy the old one to use as a comic studio but the people who are taking the old people to the new home leave three turaga behind, Mr.Brown (Brown), Sir.Slime (Green) and B.A.Baldy (Blue). So I'll let you read the comics from then.Comic 1: Missed the BusComic 2: A Problem AwakensComic 3: IntrosComic 4: Meet...Toa 95?Comic 5: Missing PeopleComic 6: Visitors Comic 7: Bz-MetruBz-Metru Part 1: The AirportBz-Metru Part 2: The ArrivalBz-Metru Part 3: InterrogatingBz-Metru Part 4: Layziness Bz-Metru Part 5: TrainingBz-Metru Part 6: Finally Some Action ScenesBz-Metru Part 7: The ReunionPermanent Guest Stars and Guest Stars List Open!!PGS1:Kazi2:Toa953:Vahi4:Tahu Nuva Golden5:Open6:Open7:Open8:Open9.Open10.OpenGS1:Open2:Open3:Open4:Open5:Open6:Open7:Open8:Open9:Open10:OpenAlso excepting awards to!Awards:Credit to Dark709 for Cimoru Omega.Constructive Critisism appreciated.Tell Me What You Think! Edited March 9, 2012 by MIY Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 I like number 4 the best. The fact that you're not afraid to make fun your own series is humble. The subtle wash-room humor also makes me laugh too. Great job. Now you're next plan is to figure out Gimp. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 14, 2011 Author Share Posted October 14, 2011 (edited) New comic coming soon Edited October 14, 2011 by MIY Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 14, 2011 Author Share Posted October 14, 2011 (edited) Sorry about double post but New Comic!!Missing people Edited October 14, 2011 by MIY Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 Actually, you have to apologize because in the rules, they said that the author of the comics is allowed to double post. As LONG as it's about an update to the topic. About the comic: I like how your not one of those people that exaggerate anger problems in the main character. I could name a few *cough*Gerlicky*cough*. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 14, 2011 Author Share Posted October 14, 2011 Actually, you have to apologize because in the rules, they said that the author of the comics is allowed to double post. As LONG as it's about an update to the topic. About the comic: I like how your not one of those people that exaggerate anger problems in the main character. I could name a few *cough*Gerlicky*cough*. Thanks, I forgot about that rule!!! Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa 95 Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 FINALLY I get to laugh at new comics again! Like the one I read here a while ago! Loved it, and I hope to see more (me) soon! Quote Toa 95 Comics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 14, 2011 Author Share Posted October 14, 2011 FINALLY I get to laugh at new comics again! Like the one I read here a while ago! Loved it, and I hope to see more (me) soon!Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy them and I can 100% guarantee you will be in the next comic, I didn't actually realise you wern't in the comic until it was done. Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 15, 2011 Author Share Posted October 15, 2011 New comic!! I must apologies for the bad ending, I couldn't think of one. Comic 6: Visitors Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 What song was that guy singing? And I like the random crude humor that Takanuva executed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 15, 2011 Author Share Posted October 15, 2011 What song was that guy singing? And I like the random crude humor that Takanuva executed. That would be `Gonna Fly Now" aka, the theme from Rocky. If you look it up you will probably recognize it. Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MayFall Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 This is refreshingly original and funny, the dialog and style of humor especially. Nice work, I look forward to seeing more. Quote (I am Tahu) (Echoes of a Dream)(The Further Adventures of Fithos) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 16, 2011 Author Share Posted October 16, 2011 (edited) This is refreshingly original and funny, the dialog and style of humor especially. Nice work, I look forward to seeing more.Thank you!! You can expect more for about tomorrow or even today. Edited October 16, 2011 by MIY Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 19, 2011 Author Share Posted October 19, 2011 New comic, this one's a bit short but it leads to a new story arc. Comic 7: Bz-Metru Btw, the PGS list will be closed after this arc.Enjoy!! Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa 95 Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 So we're going to BZ-Metru. This can only mean one thing... ROAD TRIP! Quote Toa 95 Comics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 The Bob reference was just classic. What kind of son sues his own mother. And did you realize that Miys, Wii and PS3 rhyme? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Adam Jensen} Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 The Bob reference was just classic. What kind of son sues his own mother. And did you realize that Miys, Wii and PS3 rhyme? At first I though "How does PS3 rhyme with those two?" Then I said it out loud. I facepalmed. These comics are good so far right now! Hope to see more soon! Quote "I like everyone, Dr. Reed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 HAHA, FAIL! Seriously dude, I don't read comics in my head, I read them OUT LOUD. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 19, 2011 Author Share Posted October 19, 2011 So we're going to BZ-Metru. This can only mean one thing... ROAD TRIP! Oh you bet! The Bob reference was just classic. What kind of son sues his own mother. And did you realize that Miys, Wii and PS3 rhyme? Thanks, and the rhyming thing was completely by accident. At first I though "How does PS3 rhyme with those two?" Then I said it out loud. I facepalmed. These comics are good so far right now! Hope to see more soon!Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy them. Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zerothemaster Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 "Have you seen my lawyer?" "Yes, I ate him." Marmite is Terrible reference, right?XD Quote The Drawing Room (Comic) ~ Mata Nui Adventures (Comic)Lost Forgotten Souls (Comedy) ~ Bad Images (Comic) ~ Reality (Comic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tavakai Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 So, these are pretty good for where you are now. You definitely have some potential.I love how Absorba being missing could automatically make him a murder suspect. :PAnd the Kahi thing was great too. I'm pretty sure that confused people when I was making that big GS comic with both of you in it. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 "Have you seen my lawyer?" "Yes, I ate him." Marmite is Terrible reference, right? XD I think it was a ponie. But lets not go there. I hate ponies. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 19, 2011 Author Share Posted October 19, 2011 (edited) "Have you seen my lawyer?" "Yes, I ate him." Marmite is Terrible reference, right? XD Marmite? So, these are pretty good for where you are now. You definitely have some potential. I love how Absorba being missing could automatically make him a murder suspect. And the Kahi thing was great too. I'm pretty sure that confused people when I was making that big GS comic with both of you in it. XD Thanks! and yes I remember a few people saying I see Kahi twice. :PBtw, Miy is pronounced M-I-Y Edited October 20, 2011 by MIY Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 New comic Bz-Metru Part 1: The Airport A really short one due to a lot of new backgrounds especially Kazi's panel on the plane.Enjoy -Miy Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I'd change the text up a little bit. Some parts merge with the background.Other than that, keep it up. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Good comic. I love how whoever the red text guy was in the last couple panels kept his promise. Hey, mr. Brown isn't his hostage anymore, and he's dead. Works out perfectly for both sides! I'm gonna have to get on that PGS list before it closes. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 I'd change the text up a little bit. Some parts merge with the background.Other than that, keep it up.Ya I know about that panel, it was really hard to work with.Good comic. I love how whoever the red text guy was in the last couple panels kept his promise. Hey, mr. Brown isn't his hostage anymore, and he's dead. Works out perfectly for both sides! I'm gonna have to get on that PGS list before it closes.Thanks! And if you'd like to PGS just send me a pm with spirit sheet and personality and I'll be happy to have you as my pgs! Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted November 18, 2011 Author Share Posted November 18, 2011 Whoops forgot about this comic for a while glad I remembered when I did!Bz-Metru Part 2: The ArrivalEnjoy!Btw: I decided that after this series all of the PGS's will be removed and the PGS list will be open to anyone to join but don't worry if you are a PGS already and you would still like to then just send me a PM and I can guarantee you a spot on the PGS list. Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted November 18, 2011 Share Posted November 18, 2011 Whoa... Mr. Brown really had a full life, didn't he? Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted November 19, 2011 Author Share Posted November 19, 2011 Whoa... Mr. Brown really had a full life, didn't he?Yep a very full life! Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted November 20, 2011 Author Share Posted November 20, 2011 New Comic!!!Bz-Metru Part 3: Interrogating Sorry for the short length of the last few comics. I plan to do a really big comic for this series at one point (probably the last comic )Enjoy! Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa 95 Posted November 20, 2011 Share Posted November 20, 2011 I got the phone call joke. Nice. Quote Toa 95 Comics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted November 21, 2011 Author Share Posted November 21, 2011 (edited) I got the phone call joke. Nice.Haha good! I didn't think many people would get the joke!btw the text is a bit messy on a few panels sorry about that. Edited November 21, 2011 by MIY Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazi the Matoran Posted November 21, 2011 Share Posted November 21, 2011 Just caught up. These are getting quite good! The plot is very exciting, and I look forward to seeing more. Quote My comics: Kazi's Comics 3.0 My music: T-MG Music "And now for something completely different." -- Monty Python Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted November 22, 2011 Author Share Posted November 22, 2011 Just caught up. These are getting quite good! The plot is very exciting, and I look forward to seeing more.Thanks! Just started working on the Christmas comic, it wont relate to the storyline though.and I forgot to say about the comic that four characters from my first comic series where in the latest comic. Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted March 6, 2012 Author Share Posted March 6, 2012 (edited) Yay I'm back!!!! With a present to you all, I havn't forgotten about my comics!!Bz-Metru part 4: LayzinessThis topic is in need of a clean up, I'm gonna make a new banner and completley clear my PGS list for new people to join.Calm down everyone I know you like the last comic but enough with the posting!!Anyway I updated the banner up top, I don't plan to keep it though. Edited March 6, 2012 by Melorussophobia Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted March 6, 2012 Author Share Posted March 6, 2012 (edited) What's this? Two comics in two days?Bz-Metru Part 5: TrainingI also emptyed out the PGS list so it's now open!!Enjoy! Edited March 7, 2012 by MIY Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 7, 2012 Share Posted March 7, 2012 Wow. I just read all of these comics, and I like them. The beginning was the funniest, where the 3 turaga annoyed the Karz out of MIY. But there were various other scenes, like the "violent haggling" and the ending of "Training." I can't say stuff about all of them, because there are too many to fit in one post, but I'll post once per comic now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIY Posted March 7, 2012 Author Share Posted March 7, 2012 Wow. I just read all of these comics, and I like them. The beginning was the funniest, where the 3 turaga annoyed the Karz out of MIY.But there were various other scenes, like the "violent haggling" and the ending of "Training." I can't say stuff about all of them, because there are too many to fit in one post, but I'll post once per comic now.Thank you very much, I wrote the first comic so long ago I don't even remember when I wrote it.Here's a present from me to you and whoever else wants to read it.Bz-Metru Part 6: Finally Some Action Scenes!This comic was filled with nonsense and It would probably be my least favorite comic if it wasn't so hard to make. Quote Bionicle for 2015. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 7, 2012 Share Posted March 7, 2012 Actually, all the jokes aside from the battle were funny. (Even the guy on the bench)Nice work once again, and thanks for posting these as fast as I do! (Actually faster.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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