This is an alternate conclusion to the Bionicle G1 story. Although there are references to G2 - such as some of the Toa's weapons - it does not connect to G2 in any narrative sense.
This fic diverges after the 2008 story, although most of Bara Magna-focused story still occurs in it.
I hope to present readers who were disappointed with the original ending with a more appropriate finale that centers on the Toa Nuva.
If you notice any grammatical or continuity errors, please leave a review and I will fix them as soon as possible.
Gali lay beneath the silver waters that made up the protodermis sea. Once again, she was on patrol of the outer perimeter of the dome that housed her home, Metru Nui. This Southernmost point was the only point that Makuta could launch an attack on their home.
Makuta. She still shivered at the thought. Months ago, she and the rest of the Toa Nuva had finally completed their mission to awaken the Great Spirit, Mata Nui, after his thousand year slumber. However, their victory quickly turned to defeat when they discovered that Makuta had somehow swapped minds with him.
But since Makuta's voice had boomed through the city, there had been no sign of any resistance. Whatever Makuta was planning, it appeared he could not interfere with them directly.
Ever since then, she - and the Toa Mahri - had been cycling patrol duties. The most likely attackers wouldn't be able to easily target a guard watching them from beneath the ocean.
The sea was beautiful, relaxing, sparkling, and teeming with life. Fish of an array of different shapes, of fifty-one different colors, swam every direction in huge schools. They searched for food, they remained on the lookout for predators.
Just as they had done every day for the past month. Gali was so bored. The ocean was a part of her, and Gali, a part of it. Fish darted away in her wake, and she could feel the ripples they left behind. Every movement, every wave, every bubble, was an extension of herself. And yet, without someone to share it with her, patrol duty had become a dreaded part of her life. What was the point of swimming if you had no-one to swim with? But everyone else was either too busy rebuilding defenses for the city to simply keep a Toa of Water company on her daily patrols.
Gali's thoughts were shattered as she felt the silver waters begin to tremble. Down here, she could barely make out the high pitched whining of something hovering above the surface. Gali continued to stare overhead, waiting to see the beings causing this disruption. The waters rippled harder and harder. A shadow zoomed overhead. Then a second, a third - ten, twenty, fifty. And more still came. Time to find out just who these intruders are.
Gali focused her powers to send a waterspout flying up into the air. One of the intruders was caught in the trap. Gali focused her energy to bring the water back down into the sea, dragging her trapped for below the surface. The intruder kicked and screamed as it was dragged towards her. An armored shell protected it's hunched back, and it's head opened into three sections to reveal the worm-like kraata controlling it.
"Rahkshi," spat Gali. "We've stopped the likes of you before, and we'll do it again." Gali prepared to finish it off, but the beast swiftly pointed its staff towards her. It fired a burst of electricity at Gali. She screamed as the current surged through her, but forced herself to send a powerful current of water back to her attacker. Before the Rahkshi could recover, she powered toward it. With her free hand, Gali grabbed hold of its faceplate. The beast kicked at her ineffectively, and she pulled it in, wrapping her legs around its torso. Gali activated her Mask of Strength and pried the plates apart. The Rahkshi grabbed a hold of her wrists, desperately trying to stop her. It didn't have a chance. Its face was ripped open, and Gali rammed her trident inside, skewering the Kraata. The Rahkshi stopped moving.
One down, thought Gali. Looking overhead, she could see dozens of shadows passing over the water. Just five hundred more to go. She blasted another wave at more of the Rahkshi, ready to repeat the process.
Vakama walked atop the vast wall that circled the city of Metru Nui. Matoran workers shuffled past, building more powerful turrets at regular intervals along the perimeter. It had been a month since the Toa Nuva had awoken the Great Spirit - and a month since the Great Spirit had been taken over by Makuta. Fortunately, since he had announced his presence, he had not actually done anything. A few times, his booming voice had rung through the city, demanding that the Matoran workers kneel before him and do his bidding. But when it became apparent that the workers wouldn't obey; it seemed he had given up.
But Vakama did not believe that his old foe of one thousand years had given up. There was an attack coming. And he had to do everything he could to prepare his home. Vakama looked to the South. He wasn't quite sure - but it almost looked like something was coming from the Great Barrier. Vakama waited - moment, minutes. It might be nothing.
It wasn't nothing. Multi-colored specks lined the distance. "Sound the alarm!" cried Vakama. Two Matoran workers left the turret they were banging on and scurried away. Soon, sirens blared throughout the city. Matoran leaped into turret seats. Those that didn't have turrets prepared disk launchers. Three Toa jumped off the great wall, and into the ocean. Three aerial vehicles rushed past overhead.
Vakama watched the blasts of water over the silver sea, and closed his eyes, wearily preparing to face another battle. Squinting at the huge, multi-colored squad coming in, getting closer and closer. They were finally close enough for him to see what they were. Only weeks ago had Metru Nui almost fallen to a Rahkshi attack. Then, he had found a way to reawaken the Bohrok to fight them. But this time the Rahkshi numbers were even greater, there were no Bohrok, and even Krakua had left the city. The only edge they had this time was the Toa Nuva. Minutes ticked by. The water erupted, again and again, swallowing the attackers, dozen by dozen. Kra-koom! Finally, the first turret fired a huge beam of energy, striking one of the attacking beasts. The beast crashed into the water, splashing everywhere as it struggled to pull itself out. Before Vakama knew it, the sea was ablaze, filled with energy blasts causing huge fountains of water to rise into the air. Many Rahkshi fell into the sea, never to rise again. It wasn't enough. There were simply too many. Shortly, Vakama knew he would join the fight. He didn't have the power of a Toa, or a powerful turret, or even the Mask of Time. But he had cunning - and his Mask of Concealment.
Pohatu kicked the Rockoh around, ready for another attack on the oncoming Rahkshi. Pohatu flew in, bracketing the first of many Rahkshi in his crosshairs. The Rahkshi was there one second. The next, the Rockoh's heavy cannon had blasted it to smithereens. Pohatu flew over the hovering forces, firing his heavy blaster again and again. He pulled up, having passed the vanguard, and flipped around for another pass. He looked back and confirmed that Lewa and Tahu were still behind him, piloting the Axalara and the Jetrax.
Bursts of light shone around Pohatu as Tahu and Lewa fired their Midak Skyblasters at the Rahkshi, frying their Kraata and turning them into empty, mindless husks that landed uncontrolled in the sea. Pohatu pulled back on the control bar, pulling his Rockoh up toward the sky, and prepared to make another pass.
Gali used her propellers to speed through the water, keeping up with the Rahkshi swarm. Around her, explosions of light peppered the surface. In the distance, Hahli, Jaller and Hewkii were using their powers to snipe the attackers from under the ocean's surface.
"Gali!" greeted Jaller. Hewkii ripped a stone from the island and flung it at an overhead Rahkshi. Jaller kicked over to join Gali.
"How are you faring?" asked Gali.
"Between the three of us, we've managed to stop a handful of them," Jaller said, proudly gesturing to mechanical parts floating nearby. "How about you?"
"My count is a little higher," said Gali. She didn't want to embarrass them by revealing the number.
"Hey!" shouted Hewkii. "I know Jaller isn't much good for much except hot air, but you could pretend to give us a hand here!"
"Let's get them," answered Gali. She held out her arms and worked her powers. Gali focused, gaining control of the water around her until she could build up an enormous wave above the surface. She used all her might to bring the huge wave crashing down on the enemy forces, forcing a handful of the Rahkshi beneath the surface and down into their domain.
Jaller fired his Cordak blaster at one, sending a rocket careening toward the Rahkshi before exploding. The Rahkshi was sent flying backward but recovered quickly. As the Toa Mahri stood off, trading attacks with the Rahkshi, Gali created a current to pull carry her towards one.
The Toa Mahri proved an excellent distraction. Gali sped toward the first Rahkshi, trident readied. She split the worm in two with a might blow, cutting off its horrific scream with abrupt finality. A moment later, she cut into another Rahkshi, once, twice, thrice! In moments, it floated beneath the waves, now in two pieces. She then used the ocean currents to pull the third one towards her. She parried it's sluggish blow and thrust her trident into its head.
Hewkii and Jaller looked impressed. Gali had managed in seconds what they had struggled to do in minutes. But the fourth - and final - Rahkshi remained in one piece. It fired a blast of plasma at Gali. But Gali had already switched to her Mask of Shielding, and the blast was deflected harmlessly away
"There's an easier way, you know," said Hahli. She focused her own powers of water on the Rahkshi, increasing the pressure around it as it was trapped, kicking and hissing under the water. Hahli strained and groaned. Finally, the Rahkshi's shell buckled and collapsed in on itself.
Hahli panted, exhausted by the effort. "You should be able to easily manage that, right?"
"Now you are the one teaching me," said Gali, smiling. She looked overhead, toward the shadows still flying past. "Are you ready for more?"
"Let's get them," replied Hahli.
Turret fire vaporized oncoming attackers, and the Toa Nuva had helped to thin their numbers. But despite the Toa's minor victories, the horde kept coming. The first Rahkshi landed on the beach, organizing themselves into groups. Squads of Blue and Brown Rahkshi formed, firing their staffs. Blasts cut through the defensive wall, blowing chunks out of it. Yellow Rahkshi were firing their heat vision at the nearby turrets, melting them to slag and forcing the Matoran to leap off the wall to escape the molten metal.
Pohatu sent the Rockoh into a dive, targeting one of the Yellow Rahkshi threatening his Matoran friends. Just as he was about to fire, Pohatu caught sight of a Rahkshi aiming its staff at him. He rolled right - a fraction of a second too late. A searing pain spread throughout his left shoulder, forcing Pohatu to scream. Suddenly, Pohatu was spiraling out of control. He tried to grab the handle to steer himself left but missed the bar. He looked down, trying to figure out why he couldn't grab the handle. The problem was obvious. The handle was fine - but his shoulder had become an empty socket.
Too late to worry about that now - he was getting perilously close to the ocean. With only one arm on the control bar, he tried to get enough grip to steer the vehicle. That was easier said than done. Pohatu slowed the spiral. It would have to do. Desperately, he pulled up on the bar, trying to rise before he crashed. It wouldn't be enough, he was certain.
Suddenly, he felt an enormous updraft around him, giving him enough lift - and enough time - to right himself. Pohatu came to a hover, turning to find the only Toa who could have been behind that gust of wind.
Lewa sidled up beside him. "No time for swimming now-wait till after we drive off these Rahkshi!"
"Thanks for saving me. Ready to follow me in for another pass?" asked Pohatu.
But Lewa had noticed Pohatu's empty arm socket. "Pohatu, I think you are slowthinking. You are missing something very important."
"Right now, we have a city to save. We can worry about patching up injuries later."
"You are in no condition to battlefly, Pohatu! Get to safety. I will fight for both of us!"
"I am not about to let the Rahkshi take our home." Pohatu's eyes narrowed. "I'm armless, not harmless."
For once, Lewa didn't see the funny side. But Pohatu sped off to defend the city before Lewa could stop him.
Onua stood behind the wall that kept the city safe. It was his job, his duty, to make sure the wall kept standing. Continued blasts of light from the other side, where the battle took place, strained his eyes. I wish Pohatu were here, he thought. He's much better suited to this sort of thing. Onua looked up. Takanuva was perched behind a battlement, rapidly blasting light at the Rahkshi threatening to break through. Panicked Matoran fled the area, abandoning their ruined turrets.
Onua heard more stone cracking and crumbling, as another part of the wall threatened to collapse. He was exhausted from the continued effort of holding the wall together, but he turned and held out his hands anyway. He willed dirt and soil into existence within the cracks, compacting as much into the spaces as he could.
He absolutely would not let the Rahkshi into the city.
Kopaka was circling overhead, firing freezing blasts at the Rahkshi below. But the sound of Rahkshi screams and shattering stone never ceased. Suddenly, a dozen strikes hit a single point. The base of the wall was blasted open. Before Onua could do anything, the wall cracked and collapsed on itself. Dozens of Rahkshi climbed over the rubble.
An enormous voice echoed all around the city. "Citizens of Metru Nui. My forces have breached your city. Your defenses are nullified. Surrender to my rule, and your city will remain unharmed. Resist - and I cannot make any such promises."
As Onua suspected, Makuta was guiding the Rahkshi in this attack. The Matoran had already fled. By all means, the battle had already been lost. Now, only a dozen Toa stood in the way of Makuta's forces.
Kopaka corkscrewed in, dodging blasts from Rahkshi staff weapons, and landed beside Onua. "Looks like you could use a hand," he said, as he froze a Rahkshi leaping towards them.
"Always appreciate the help, Kopaka!" said Onua, slamming his hammer into the ground.
Rahkshi running towards the pair looked startled as the earth beneath their feet sunk ten feet down. Kopaka pointed his sword at the newly formed crater, freezing it over.
"There's more where that came from," said Kopaka. He readied his sword and shield and ran in to meet them.
Dozens more Rahkshi had already climbed through the shattered wall, rushing into the city. Onua caught a glimpse of Takanuva leaping down from the wall. He chased down the Rahkshi that were disappearing down the city streets, madly firing beams of light at them.
Quickly, Onua worked to rebuild the gaping hole. Earth and dirt rose up from below shattered columns. It would hold up against the Rahkshi - at least, for a short while.
He looked to Kopaka, who was now trading blows with two Rahkshi. Onua leaped in to lend a hand. Activating his Mask of Strength, he swung his heavy hammer at one of Kopaka's attackers. The Rahkshi tried to block with its staff, but Onua's swing was far too powerful. The Rahkshi's staff shattered, its body cracked, and its Kraata was crushed.
Onua didn't have time to celebrate. The sound of metal striking metal rang through the air, as Kopaka traded jabs with another of the invaders. Movement to Onua's right caught his eye. Another Rahkshi was lunging at him. Onua swung his hammer out to meet it. Just as he would have batted the Rahkshi out of the air, it disappeared. Onua's hammer pulled him around. Where could it be? The obvious place would be behind him.
Onua circled around, whirling his hammer to where he predicted it would be. The Rahkshi quickly ducked beneath the blow. Onua parried the Rahkshi's strike away and lunged at it. Once again, the Rahkshi disappeared. Just like I knew it would.
As soon as he saw the Rahkshi begin to teleport, Onua swung his hammer over his head and behind him. The beast regenerated a second before Onua's hammer crushed it.
He looked up to check on Kopaka.
Kopaka held up his shield to block his foe's jab and countered with his own blade. He was wearing the Mask of Strength, and his blade sliced cleanly through the Rahkshi's head.
"Good work, brother," said Onua.
The perimeter wall was coming under fire again, already on the verge of a second collapse. The rest of the Rahkshi had already disappeared, having already entered deeper into the city.
Once again, the booming voice of Makuta drowned out the sounds of fighting. "Surrender, Toa - you cannot hold my sons off forever."
Give up? Retreat? They had never done that before. Even when all was lost, when everything seemed helpless, the Toa Nuva always pulled through. They would never abandon the Matoran to their fate.
But what if, by staying, the Matoran would be made to suffer? They had, effectively, already lost this battle. If they resisted, the Matoran might be tortured - or even killed. All because we don't know when to give up. What would he do? What should he do?
"Come on, Kopaka," he said, using his powers to rebuild sections of earth that had fallen from the wall. "We've still got a city to save."
Tahu hovered, high above the city, taking in the layout of the Rahkshi below. A small group on the bank were using Sonic blasts to breach another hole in the wall. None of them were paying attention to anything else going on around them. A rookie mistake. Tahu dived in on his Jetrax, taking aim at the intruders. The wall crumbled under the combined might of the sonic blasts, and chunks of stone and protosteel flew everywhere. Tahu squeezed the trigger.
Bursts of light consumed the Rahkshi, and moments later, they were all vaporized.
Tahu pulled up, looking for his next target. As he moved into position, he caught sight of Lewa and Pohatu making their own attack runs. As Rahkshi swarmed around weak sections of wall, the ground beneath them exploded into stone spikes, sending Rahkshi flying. Pohatu's doing, of course. Lewa swooped by, creating an incredible gale. The Rahkshi were sent flying out into the ocean. Tahu took advantage of the chaos to take a pass at the downed Rahkshi, destroying four with his Skyblasters.
Lewa spotted a group of Rahkshi taking aim at them on the beach. "Pohatu, highrise! Highrise!"
Lewa flipped his craft out of the way before the attack could come. Pohatu pulled back on the handle as hard as he could with only one arm. The next thing Pohatu knew, his craft was being rocked and swayed. His joints burned and ached as lightning coursed through the Rockoh - and him. His muscles ached, but Pohatu forced himself to roll right and dive, trying to evade the attacks.
Lewa saw Pohatu was in trouble. Quickly, he bracketed the Silver Rahkshi that was blasting Pohatu with lightning. Lewa fired. The silver Rahkshi was engulfed by light - and then, was gone.
Lewa turned back to check on Pohatu. Smoke was billowing out of the Rockoh.
"Pohatu!" Lewa shouted. "It's time to quickleave!" he pointed away from the battle, toward the open sea. "You cannot quickdodge with one arm. You are going to get yourself killed!"
Pohatu looked back at the Rahkshi pouring into the city, desperate to protect his home. But it was obvious he couldn't keep going like this. Pohatu sighed. "You're right. I'll find a safe place to land."
He flipped his vehicle around and looked back to Lewa. "You'd better fry enough Rahkshi for both of us." He revved the engine, and was gone.
Lewa snap-rolled, and prepared to make another pass on the Rahkshi.
Onua continued to hold up a defensive, earthy wall as best he could. Kopaka froze the wall, solidifying it further. But blast after blast struck against it, and Onua was tiring. Kopaka coated the wall with another blast of ice when he heard the sounds of heavy footsteps approaching. He turned to see a squad of oncoming Rahkshi charging at them from behind."Great," he said. "Looks like they've found another way in."
Onua created one last layer of earth to hold up the wall as he turned around. "They aren't going to quit, Kopaka!"
Once again, he ripped apart the ground. Rahkshi fell in, and he pulled the ground back together. The walls of the hole crumbled and cracked as they crushed the Rahkshi within. Kopaka fired a beam of ice at the ground, freezing more of the group to the ground. But for every Rahkshi that they stopped, two more seemed to appear. Rahkshi blasts filled the air, beams of heat and destruction. Kopaka summoned a wall of ice, and the two Toa took cover behind it. Onua peered over the cover and fired a ball of earth at them. He quickly ducked. Moments later an energy blast passed through where his head had just been.
"We have got to get out of here," said Kopaka. "This isn't a fight we can win. Onua, dig us a hole!"
Onua didn't say a word. He simply willed the earth to move out of the way, forming a tunnel below them.
Kopaka used his Mask of Vision to see take note of where the Rahkshi were without having to peer over the cover he had created. He focused, and froze the ground under the largest group, forcing the temperature lower and lower until the Rahkshi were frozen solid.
"Are you ready?" Onua asked. He had already begun climbing into the tunnel.
"I'm always ready," replied Kopaka. He climbed in after Onua.
Once they were both safely below ground, Onua pushed the earth back into place behind them and continued digging in the darkness.
Edited by ArchAngelleofJustice, Jun 13 2018 - 06:22 PM.