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#1 Offline BioCry

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Posted Jan 05 2012 - 07:32 PM

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Authors:Biocryptid21Justax-KalLNUMakuta of ComedyGardaTavakaiZerothemasterWVUFan

Pre-Series:1. Rav (Biocryptid21)2. Zik (LNU)3. DarkKnight (Makuta of Comedy)4. DarkKnight 2 (Makuta of Comedy)5. Sicarious (WVUFan)Comics:1. Where are we? (Biocryptid21)Banners: (EDIT: The File size of these banners are too big to be in a signature. Currently working on smaller banners.)Original (Cannot be used in Signature)Posted ImageOriginal CroppedPosted ImageOriginal Scaled DownPosted ImageCredits:Rahi Zaku for RZMIKGoogle Images for... Images

What really is Reality?..


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Posted Jan 05 2012 - 08:58 PM

Wow. Reality isn't as real as I first thought. :PSo far so good, I like how you're using original characters instead of yourselves.I'm surprised, with all this extistencialism (sp plzthx), that you didn't include this guy:Posted ImageTrolol and credit to Nuzar Keep up the good work, I wait expectantly for more. :pirate

Edited by Darcsyde, Jan 05 2012 - 08:59 PM.

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#3 Offline Calvirick

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Posted Jan 05 2012 - 09:10 PM

I've got it. Everything, that's normal or the things we would categorize as reality is something opposite. So the guy waking up to a normal is actually an assassination. And that second guy has a strange case of scitzo, but with THREE voices instead of one. Correct?
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Posted Jan 05 2012 - 09:46 PM

We up! Hooray!Now to make this not spam.Bio: Nice. Quite surreal. The lack of talking but use of onomatopoeia, muted color in those sprites, and general nonchalantness of his telekinesis really clinches it. You really made the sprites fit well into the pictures, as well.Also, in panel 4, his toothbrush is facing away from his mouth. Want to be a pain about that. :PLNU: Dude, it's a scitzo. I like how you have the different voices play off each other in conversation. It's a nice contrast to Bio's general silence.Their (the voices in Zik's head) arguments really show how and why he's motivated. I hope we can keep that characterization up.J-K out.
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Posted Jan 05 2012 - 10:19 PM

Okay, I'm really interested to see what happened to Zik. What stunt did he pull, and what consequences is he suffering? I don't expect anyone to answer that until another comic comes out, and I also don't know if the consequences of his stunt created the voices in head, or if they were there to begin with. By his last line, I assume they were never there before; unless, he vows to get rid of them quite often.
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Posted Jan 05 2012 - 10:23 PM

Posted ImageTrolol and credit to Nuzar

DEAR MATA NUI WHAT IS THAT ABOMINATION D:

I've got it. Everything, that's normal or the things we would categorize as reality is something opposite. So the guy waking up to a normal is actually an assassination. And that second guy has a strange case of scitzo, but with THREE voices instead of one. Correct?

Everything will be revealed in due time, padawanAnywho, yeah its up, weee I'm pumped whoot

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Posted Jan 06 2012 - 12:06 AM

First of all I leik the line up of authors.Anyway, onto the comix. The normal-ness of Bio's comic was quite refreshing. It was realistic, in the sense that he was just acting ordinary. The uniformed person in a suit killing someone is sort of used a lot, but I'm okay with it. Now, LNU's comic was a good character "Whatjamacallit-reveal-maybe?". I think the fact he listens to the red voice is realistic. I mean, if I had voices like that in my head I'd do anything to get rid of them.

Everything will be revealed in due time, padawan

From now on, I shall refer to you as Jedi Master. Since you called me that. :P

I approve of this Star Warz Stuff.I declare my self a Jedi Knight.~Exon :hau:

Edited by Exon, Jan 06 2012 - 12:07 AM.

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I would post saying only, "You're awesome," but I would get reported for spam, and rightfully so. Then I would have to delete my own post or maybe leave an edit telling myself to read the rules, which I wrote. You get the picture.


As you can see, I support the "put a windrider quote in your sig" movement. I do hope it catches on.

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#8 Offline LNU n' Pinkie Pie

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Posted Jan 06 2012 - 10:26 AM

Ooh! Fun stuff. The topic is up!Thanks to everyone for the feedback on my comic. I've designed and come up with back stories and such for various characters in my day, but Zik has been the most fun to write for so far. I think you'll all be surprised by what his... "deal" is, I guess.Oh, and nice comic you have there Bio. You pulled off the photorealistic nonsense better than I did. Or will do. (Yeah, I'm not really good at it. Don't expect too much from me in the graphics department. :P)

Edited by Pinkamina Diane Pie, Jan 06 2012 - 10:29 AM.

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Posted Jan 06 2012 - 01:08 PM

You know what's funny. Back when I started making comics, which was about 5 years ago, everybody didn't use gimp. We all used MSpaint like it was photoshop. And think what happened a little later was that people saw a couple comic makers use photoshop. But of course nobody could afford Adobe, so then gimp came into the picture. Though I still can't remember if it was PK or NR that originated the idea of using google images. But anyway, I like what some of you guys have come up with.
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Posted Jan 07 2012 - 10:15 AM

DarkKnight Reality comicThe pre-comic is now up, enjoy peoplez.

Edited by Makuta of Comedy, Jan 08 2012 - 12:17 PM.

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Posted Jan 07 2012 - 12:24 PM

Yeah hobos!So, I have a question. Is the voice DarkNight is hearing just her inner monologue, or is it like a legitimate voice? (Not unlike Zik's. :P)Other than that a solid intro. Makes me want to chop things to bits.
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Posted Jan 07 2012 - 01:24 PM

Yeah hobos!So, I have a question. Is the voice DarkNight is hearing just her inner monologue, or is it like a legitimate voice? (Not unlike Zik's. :P)Other than that a solid intro. Makes me want to chop things to bits.

DarkNight is hearing her conscience, which is like an actual person living in her head.

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Posted Jan 07 2012 - 01:27 PM

Um ... I only see coding in the original post. It looks all messed up.
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Posted Jan 07 2012 - 01:42 PM

The RTE does that sometimes (not sure why). Until the first post is fixed, here are the comics posted so far, for easy access: Rav, Zik, DarkLight(Also I did a double take when I saw the second comic's name =P)

Edited by Ziko, Jan 07 2012 - 01:45 PM.

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Posted Jan 07 2012 - 01:48 PM

The RTE does that sometimes (not sure why). Until the first post is fixed, here are the comics posted so far, for easy access: Rav, Zik, DarkLight(Also I did a double take when I saw the second comic's name =P)

Thanks, Ziko, you da man. :PGreat Comic, MoC BTW. ^_^-:b::c::2::1:

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Posted Jan 08 2012 - 12:29 AM

So far each author has done a good job with the intros. I can't wait till I can actually make my part.Lets Go Mountaineers!
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Posted Jan 08 2012 - 12:39 AM

DarkKnight reminds me of a very calm Zik; obviously, we can see the similarities. However, Zik is plain insane whereas DarkKnight is calm but still has a touch of insanity enough to make her interesting. :PI almost think that's MoC's style: calm but insane characters.I did notice that the shadow could be a bit better, instead of being cast on seemingly a "wall." If you made the shadow just under her feet or cast behind her on a flat, horizontal surface parallel with her feet, it might look a bit more believable.

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Posted Jan 08 2012 - 12:19 PM

DarkKnight reminds me of a very calm Zik; obviously, we can see the similarities. However, Zik is plain insane whereas DarkKnight is calm but still has a touch of insanity enough to make her interesting. :PI almost think that's MoC's style: calm but insane characters.I did notice that the shadow could be a bit better, instead of being cast on seemingly a "wall." If you made the shadow just under her feet or cast behind her on a flat, horizontal surface parallel with her feet, it might look a bit more believable.

I'll attempt to put the shadow under her feet next time, but it just looked weird when I tried it like that before.

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Posted Jan 19 2012 - 11:51 PM

I COMMAND THIS TOPIC TO COME BACK TO LIFEDarkKnight 2Thanks to MoC for making this comic!You are a topic-life-giver. :P-:b::c::2::1:
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Posted Jan 20 2012 - 07:03 AM

Considering I just saw that scene 2 weeks ago from Dirty Harry, I appreciate the reference."You know all the cool things you just said and did... You just ruined it all." I love this quote. Deadpan snarker all the way.J-K out.
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Posted Jan 20 2012 - 02:35 PM

Aww, poor DarkKnight. :PThat would have been an epic scene in her memory if the gun had another bullet in it.
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Posted Jan 20 2012 - 02:44 PM

I feel like things of that nature happen to me with at a depressing frequency. :PI like the "Other gun firing sounds" sound effect. Very classy. :DZik will be senselessly killing people as well soon. So don't lose interest in the topic.Please...For the children...
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Posted Jan 20 2012 - 02:59 PM

I feel like things of that nature happen to me with at a depressing frequency. :P I like the "Other gun firing sounds" sound effect. Very classy. :D Zik will be senselessly killing people as well soon. So don't lose interest in the topic. Please... For the children...

I thought the "Other gun firing sounds" was funny, too. :POoooh, Zik is getting more and more interesting ... I think he may be one of my favorite characters of yours so far.

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Posted Mar 16 2012 - 03:12 PM

Ohey, what's this?*reaches in pocket*It's a new comic!Where are we?Enjoy! ^_^-:b::c::2::1:
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Posted Mar 16 2012 - 10:13 PM

Awesomeness :D

The suspense, it is killing me.

But I do love a good mystery.

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Posted Mar 16 2012 - 11:01 PM

I suppose my characters haven't appeared yetOh wait I haven't made my comic yetthat would be the reason hurrrrrAlso I like everyone already :P
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Posted Mar 18 2012 - 02:58 PM

If this were an asylum, we would be in seperate rooms and strait jackets. No, this has got to be worse.Now who's the silhouette guy... You know, besides a "doctor".J-K out.
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Posted Mar 18 2012 - 03:44 PM

Nice comic, I laughed at the part where he said "It's an asylum".
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Posted Mar 25 2012 - 09:23 PM

Well then, to bring life to this topic I have two character Bios for DarkKnight and her conscience:Link
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#30 Offline Dragonfly the Luminescent

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Posted Mar 25 2012 - 09:39 PM

Are all the characters going to have a bio or some kind of character sheet?Speaking of, have all the characters been introduced, or are there more to come?
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Posted Mar 25 2012 - 11:48 PM

Well then, to bring life to this topic I have two character Bios for DarkKnight and her conscience:Link

I guess I could do one of those. :/

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Posted Mar 26 2012 - 04:17 AM

Are all the characters going to have a bio or some kind of character sheet?Speaking of, have all the characters been introduced, or are there more to come?

Some people still need to make their pre-comics, but all of those in the series were pictured and had lines in Biocryptid's 1'st main comic.

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Posted Mar 26 2012 - 10:39 AM

Here is Comic #2, by me.Lets Go Mountaineers!
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Posted Mar 26 2012 - 03:53 PM

"Probably because of all the things I've done that I don't feel sorry for."That was a good line. :lol: Perfectly sums up his insanity.So either he can teleport, become invisible, or he has a combination of both. I'm guessing he just has invisibility. What's his name, by the way? Super secret assassin? :P
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Posted Apr 02 2012 - 01:56 PM

Great comic, the effects, backgrounds and everything was great.I don't know what he's thinking with that tiny mask that doesn't completely cover his face, using it as a disguise...
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Posted Jun 22 2012 - 12:08 PM

THAT'S RIGHT PEOPLE, IF YOU THOUGHT THIS COMIC WAS DEAD, YOU'RE DEAD WRONG!?!?!?!I'M USING CAPS, SO WHAT!? I'M POSTING BRAND NEW COMIC IS WHAT!!Link'dBringing the topic back to life!
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Posted Jun 22 2012 - 02:20 PM

I can't wait to see where this story is going. "Reality" reminds me of Marvel comics, except these heroes aren't exactly welcomed. :P
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Posted Jun 22 2012 - 03:20 PM

DarkKnight isn't on the banner D:Banner looks great, nice job.
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Posted Jun 23 2012 - 11:02 AM

reminds me of Heroes. DarkKnight has shadow control powers? Sweet.
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