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The Bz-Metru Story Review Topic

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#1 Offline Snoopy82

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Posted Oct 13 2011 - 08:10 PM

THE EPIC UP THROUGH CHAPTER 32 MAY BE FOUND HERE.Other than that, new chapters may be found HERE. Please leave comments, criticisms, etc.! :)
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Posted Oct 13 2011 - 09:08 PM

so, wait, do we have to wait an entire month for the whole story to be re uploaded... that doesn't seem right, especially for a story as awesome as this. Maybe Bzp should lift its rule for epics getting posted for just a week or to
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What are we searching for? Are we searching for anything or just randomly surfing the internet? I did that once. I found this bionicle fan site called bzpower. Whoever made it had no decorating sense what so ever.


#3 Offline Eeko

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Posted Oct 14 2011 - 02:37 PM

Yay! I'm glad this is back. :D
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#4 Offline Snoopy82

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Posted Oct 14 2011 - 02:40 PM

You won't have to wait a month, because I'm not resposting it all. :P I have it finished in its entirety and I will only be posting new chapters on the new forum. :) Speaking of which, new chapter!!
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#5 Offline Grantaire

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Posted Oct 14 2011 - 03:23 PM

YAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!Well, this is interesting. Ninjo is going ninja, B6 is losing his marbles, and now him and Toraga are embarking on the quest for keet- erm, Binkmiester. XDAnother great chapter, and now I'm waiting in suspense for the next chapter.It. Must. come. Soon. Or. I'll. Crack. As. Well.
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Posted Oct 15 2011 - 04:34 PM

New chapter :D
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Posted Oct 15 2011 - 04:51 PM

Oh man, this is good. Dume is scary, but I'm wondering what wrenches are going to jump in the admin's path... Again, I'm looking forwards to another great chapter. Your pressed for time POBZPC,Zarayna
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Posted Oct 17 2011 - 07:13 PM

:o New chapter is up!! The end is nearing people, the end is near!!!!
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Posted Oct 17 2011 - 08:18 PM

...Why do i have this bad feeling that the story is going to end with Dimensioneer winning? Hmm, so Ninjo is dead. Well, it shows that somehow Dimensioneer got teleportation powers. How, I wonder... nothing about Six and Bink this chapter, but it's interesting to see both sides trying to activate Dume... Looking forwards to the next chapter. :)
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Posted Oct 17 2011 - 08:34 PM

So glad this is continuing. :D The new chapters are great~
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Posted Oct 18 2011 - 10:35 AM

YES! It's back! I has missed this epic so much! Looking back, I can't believe that it's been around longer than I've been on this site, though. I love incredibly climactic the epic is getting. (Though you could say it was climactic from the start.) However, please tell me it isn't going to end with Dume mind-wiping everyone as a big reset button. That'd just be laaaaaaaame. D:
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Posted Oct 18 2011 - 09:25 PM

Thanks for your continued support guys, even after six months! Please, get the word out--the end is NEAR! :D New chapter, btw!!
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Posted Oct 18 2011 - 09:40 PM

Oh my... NINJO?? This is going to be epic... Daw, so Bink is gone, and B6 is no longer an admin. :( ...And I'm balancing on the extreme edge of my chair waiting for the next chapter. Man, this ended on a cliff hanger.EDIT:Also, spelling error.

Footsteps. Voices. The door unlocked and creaked open to reveal Black Six, Toaraga, and Dimensioneer.

I believe you mean Binkmiester...

Edited by The Assassin Archer, Oct 19 2011 - 04:26 PM.

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Posted Oct 19 2011 - 11:14 PM

Epic new chapter, cant wait for the next one!
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Posted Oct 22 2011 - 09:11 PM

Yes, it's over. I know, not the smash ending some of you may have been hoping for--but of the two possible storylines I could have pursued, this was easily the most do-able. It is quit the far cry from my original intentions for the ending, but that would have droned on would a long while. Even so, the one you got does contain many elements of the original, just condensed. Some details had to be compromised, but hey, use your imagination and write some fanfics about it. :P
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Posted Oct 22 2011 - 11:10 PM

A fitting end. *clap clap clap* :)
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Posted Nov 06 2011 - 09:31 PM

So were Toaraga and B6 affected by the memory reset, too? You say they alone bare the burdens of the war, but at the same time you say B6 "knew no more." Or does that mean something else entirely?A good end, though! Kudos on seeing this through to the finish line!
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Posted Nov 26 2011 - 09:45 PM

EW-- I generally use the phrase "knew no more" to convey the entrance into unconsciousness. They retained all memories. I can understand in hindsight that I probably should have chosen a better descriptive device, but hey, a habit's a habit. :P
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