BionicleBean Posted August 17, 2021 Share Posted August 17, 2021 just something i wrote in a few minutes. maybe i'll continue the story later... Savage was always a strange hero. For a start, “savage” isn't a very heroic name. Second, he wore a helmet shaped like a cat's head thirdly, he referred to criminals as “bullies”. There are far too many little quirks that savage had to list in one story. So let's begin. “Ha! Everybody's gonna know my name!” badboy laughed as he spraypainted a “B” onto the wall of a house. Badboy was savage's arch nemesis. For years, he had been being a general nuisance, graffiti-ing walls, kicking over sandcastles, etc. so when savage heard that he was doing something bad, he couldn't wait to jump into action. “wizard! Some-thing to do!” he cried as he leapt out onto the streets. “get ready badboy, I'm coming for you!” quick as a man who'd just eaten the family fun bucket and was carrying a backpack full of lead, he went to search for badboy. Badboy had nearly finished his “masterpiece”. A gigantic letter “B” written on somebody's wall. “it's beautiful!” he said, gazing at his painting. “stop right there, badboy!” said savage. “Ah darnit, the cops're here!” said badboy. Suddenly, a gust of wind blew the spraypaint into badboy's eyes. He howled in pain and, temporarily blinded, he crashed into the wall he had just defiled, and was knocked unconsious. Later, the other heroes arrived. “ah, I see you are here to arrest this youth.”, savage said, pointing to badboy, who was actually 43 years old. “er, no. we're not.” we're here to inform you that while you were chasing this man, Meltdown was robbing a bank., you were the only hero in the area who could stop him at that time, but you were chasing badboy. Meltdown has now escaped with just short of 10,000$. we're also here to tell you that you're fired. The end. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Inika Posted September 2, 2021 Share Posted September 2, 2021 There used to be a rule about all comedies being at least 300 words, and this is just barely over that line, but it also made me remember why we had that rule in the first place. There's a funny concept in here. Ngl, I am curious what happens to Savage next, but the formatting and punctuation make it hard to read, which isn't a huge issue because of how short this is, but for longer works you should consider more thorough proofreading. Quote "You are an absolute in these uncertain times. Your past is forgotten, and your future is an empty book. You must find your own destiny, my brave adventurer." -- Turaga Nokama Click here to visit my library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
confused piraka Posted December 9, 2022 Share Posted December 9, 2022 this is great Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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