Savage and badboy, a hero factory fanstory.

[BionicleBean]

just something i wrote in a few minutes. maybe i'll continue the story later...


Savage was always a strange hero. For a start, “savage” isn't a very heroic name.
Second, he wore a helmet shaped like a cat's head thirdly, he referred to 
criminals as “bullies”. There are far too many little quirks that savage had to
list in one story. So let's begin.

“Ha! Everybody's gonna know my name!” 
badboy laughed as he spraypainted a “B” onto the wall of a house.
Badboy was savage's arch nemesis. For years, 
he had been being a general nuisance, 
graffiti-ing  walls, kicking over sandcastles,
etc. so when savage heard that he was doing something bad, 
he couldn't wait to jump into action. 
“wizard! Some-thing to do!” he cried as he leapt out onto the
streets. “get ready badboy, I'm coming for you!” 
quick as a man who'd just eaten the
family fun bucket and was carrying a backpack full of lead, he went to search for badboy.

Badboy had nearly finished his “masterpiece”.
A gigantic letter “B” written on somebody's wall.
“it's beautiful!” he said, gazing at his painting.
“stop right there, badboy!” said savage.
“Ah darnit, the cops're here!” said badboy.
Suddenly, a gust of wind blew the spraypaint
into badboy's eyes. He howled in pain and,
temporarily blinded, he crashed into the wall
he had just defiled, and was knocked unconsious.

Later, the other heroes arrived.
“ah, I see you are here to arrest this youth.”, savage said,
pointing to badboy, who was actually 43 years old.
“er, no. we're not.” we're here to inform you that while
you were chasing this man, Meltdown was robbing a bank.,
you were the only hero in the area who could stop him at that time,
but you were chasing badboy. Meltdown has now escaped with
just short of 10,000$.  we're also here to tell you that you're fired.


The end.

[Master Inika]

There used to be a rule about all comedies being at least 300 words, and this is just barely over that line, but it also made me remember why we had that rule in the first place.

There's a funny concept in here. Ngl, I am curious what happens to Savage next, but the formatting and punctuation make it hard to read, which isn't a huge issue because of how short this is, but for longer works you should consider more thorough proofreading.

[confused piraka]

this is great