TOAOFCOMEDY Posted February 8, 2012 Share Posted February 8, 2012 (edited) So I thought that since he's a cyclops and his weapon is a hammer I would name him hammerclops.XDAnyway, here's the link to Mocpages with all the pictures:http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/308327Comments and criticism are appreciated. Edited February 8, 2012 by TOAOFCOMEDY Quote http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4313 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumiki Posted February 8, 2012 Share Posted February 8, 2012 The main concern I have here is that of the head. Redo it as much as you can. Use the same mask, but flip it up 90 degrees to its original position, and try to use the middle of it as the singular eye. That could be a good jumping-off point.I think you should bulk up the torso. At first I thought it was an Inika torso, but then I realized you went with a custom one. The arms might be a little too broad-shouldered. Move them in by a stud or two if you can, either by modifying them or the chest somehow.I like the hammer. Make it bigger, though - usually beings who are named after their weapons have huge ones - think Axonn here.The upper leg armor seems funky, and I believe that could be easily fixed with some minor alterations. They just look a little slanted. Quote avatar by Lady Kopaka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOAOFCOMEDY Posted February 8, 2012 Author Share Posted February 8, 2012 (edited) The main concern I have here is that of the head. Redo it as much as you can. Use the same mask, but flip it up 90 degrees to its original position, and try to use the middle of it as the singular eye. That could be a good jumping-off point.I think you should bulk up the torso. At first I thought it was an Inika torso, but then I realized you went with a custom one. The arms might be a little too broad-shouldered. Move them in by a stud or two if you can, either by modifying them or the chest somehow.I like the hammer. Make it bigger, though - usually beings who are named after their weapons have huge ones - think Axonn here.The upper leg armor seems funky, and I believe that could be easily fixed with some minor alterations. They just look a little slanted.I appreciate the citicism (that's what I asked forXD), but I think you would be more impressed if you viewed the newly improved photo I have replaced the old one of the MoC in general with. Something about the old one just didn't seem to give me that much of an impression... Edited February 8, 2012 by TOAOFCOMEDY Quote http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4313 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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