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#1 Offline The Tomorrow Girl

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 12:03 PM

So..... Yeah, I'm making some comics now.Yay! You don't have to imagine a banner now! :3 Thanks to Kodrak.

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Comics:001: The First002: Characters003: Remodeling004: New PeopleCredit goes to Dark709 for the Omega Chimoru Kit!I'm now excepting PGS and GS! PM me for details and instructions!List:KodrakTahu Nuva GoldenSoran______________________________What do you guys think? :g: :r: :a: :v: :i: :t: :y:

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 12:18 PM

What do you guys think?

Pff, whatever.*laserbeam'd*

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#3 Offline The Tomorrow Girl

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 12:31 PM

What do you guys think?

Pff, whatever.*laserbeam'd*

*smoke comes from hand*lol.Thanks! The start isn't all that good, but I'm getting there. Might post another comic today...

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 12:35 PM

I will be watching this. Not a bad start, a bit random, but fun nonetheless. Keep it going!
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#5 Offline Kodrak

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 01:06 PM

Indeed.I could make you a banner and a poster, if you want. All I need are your characters.
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#6 Offline The Tomorrow Girl

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 04:24 PM

New Comic! :3002: Characters
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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 05:23 PM

Nice introductions..?Is that all, or is it just those... I think 4?
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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 05:32 PM

5. Maybe more to come later. And if people want to become PGS.I'll PM you their sprites.
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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 07:18 PM

Well, I see their personalities copy Dark709, who, at the risk at enraging most of the comics forum by saying this, wasn't that funny. Also, if you insist on using chimoru, please use a higher quality. The old two-shade chimoru is an eyesore compared to six-shade and sigma.
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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 07:28 PM

Well, I see their personalities copy Dark709, who, at the risk at enraging most of the comics forum by saying this, wasn't that funny. Also, if you insist on using chimoru, please use a higher quality. The old two-shade chimoru is an eyesore compared to six-shade and sigma.

No plagiarism is present. The characters may resemble Dark's, but they are different enough to be dubbed original.You don't think he's funny. Just because you think something doesn't mean it's true/others agree as a whole. ;}Not every comic maker can start out just knowing how to shade those, or even knowing they exist. Cut him some slack as a starter, please.

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#11 Offline The Tomorrow Girl

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 07:40 PM

Yes the two shade isn't all that good, but I'm limited to my software and computing power, unfortunatly.I was inspired by Dark709 to make these comics, so I would actually take as a complement that they are like his.New comic coming soon!
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#12 Offline Vamprah9588- Omega of Fire

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 07:42 PM

Well, I see their personalities copy Dark709, who, at the risk at enraging most of the comics forum by saying this, wasn't that funny. Also, if you insist on using chimoru, please use a higher quality. The old two-shade chimoru is an eyesore compared to six-shade and sigma.

1a No plagiarism is present. The characters may resemble Dark's, but they are different enough to be dubbed original.2 You don't think he's funny. Just because you think something doesn't mean it's true/others agree as a whole. ;}1b Not every comic maker can start out just knowing how to shade those, or even knowing they exist. Cut him some slack as a starter, please.

1a- I completely understand that, I'm saying its not a good idea to simply modify them and call it. They need to be original.1b- I would, but have you seen nearly every starter? They always choose two-shade, and revere dark as the only comic inspiration, not even looking at anyone else.2- May I explain that I meant to say that in my own opinion? It's just not my humor.Also, note that most criticism has helped newbies drastically.

Yes the two shade isn't all that good, but I'm limited to my software and computing power, unfortunatly.I was inspired by Dark709 to make these comics, so I would actually take as a complement that they are like his.New comic coming soon!

Well, if you'd like an upgrade, I'd be happy to help.EDIT- I'm sorry, that might come off as rude, no offense to what you're doing now.

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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 07:46 PM

I second the criticism comment. Although not really a newbie, as I've been making other hand drawn comics for a while, this is my first digital series.None taken. Everything that people post (as long as its not flaming) is helpful for me.
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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 08:11 PM

I like the start. I mean, as a good stress reliever, crash dummies are completely necessary. Sometimes, I feel I need one of those. Keep up the good work.
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Posted Feb 09 2012 - 09:24 PM

I second the criticism comment. Although not really a newbie, as I've been making other hand drawn comics for a while, this is my first digital series. None taken. Everything that people post (as long as its not flaming) is helpful for me.

Well, I meant the newbie comment in general. How do you think Gavla started out?I relate to the drawn comics part. well, not comics, but drawing altogether.EDIT- Also, an idea is to refrain from pain and stupidity humor on their own, and try to mix thing up a bit. The thing that set me off on dark was that he had either A pain joke, or a stupidity joke. What I mean is if your character got into trouble by forgetting something, or not thinking it through, it could lead to funny situations.Also, read up on some dry humor. This'll hopefully get you a better audience.

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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 09:07 AM

There's something going on here!Fortunately, when I started out, I was inspired by a movie maker (don't ask). ^_^ But Dark has been a massive force in AIII, and I believe he was one of the best AIII has known. He inspired us all. He set the pace for comics. He was a part of the pioneers of AIII.IMO.I'll work on the banner shortly.
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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 01:39 PM

Yay for new comic! :3003: Remodeling
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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 02:02 PM

I like your use of applicating Oraku's gravity to the wall so he would bash through, but I would try not to do the screen-smash effect you did in the last panel.
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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 02:03 PM

Yeah, I thought I had taken out the screen smash thingy. I geuss not. :(*glares at computer's save command*
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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 03:05 PM

A better perspective would be showing Takei in the middle, Oraku on the left (smashed into the wall and dazed), and Gravity on the right looking through the newly made hole.A good comic, nonetheless.
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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 05:01 PM

It's a bit funny, but could be longer. I once wanted to make comics, but I don't know how to use these kits.
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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 06:37 PM

It's quite simple, I could show you if you like.So, I made a banner. ^_^
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Posted Feb 10 2012 - 10:31 PM

Sure, let's take it to PM.
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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 08:27 AM

Yay! You don't have to imagine a banner now! :3 Thanks to Kodrak.

So, know any good carpenters to fix that wall? ^_^

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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 08:47 AM

Hey, y'know; some guys here said that the pixel stuff looks a bit eye paining,(it does kinda) but I'm pretty good at drawing and I could handdraw you some sprites ^_^(Two positions for each mask, two positions for the bodies, legs arms etc is what you need I guess.In clean B&W for easy filling with MSPaint)What do you say?
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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 09:31 AM

Hey, y'know; some guys here said that the pixel stuff looks a bit eye paining,(it does kinda) but I'm pretty good at drawing and I could handdraw you some sprites ^_^(Two positions for each mask, two positions for the bodies, legs arms etc is what you need I guess.In clean B&W for easy filling with MSPaint)What do you say?

Gravity, whatever you do, do not turn this down..

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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 11:31 AM

Hey, y'know; some guys here said that the pixel stuff looks a bit eye paining,(it does kinda) but I'm pretty good at drawing and I could handdraw you some sprites ^_^(Two positions for each mask, two positions for the bodies, legs arms etc is what you need I guess.In clean B&W for easy filling with MSPaint)What do you say?

Gravity, whatever you do, do not turn this down..

It will be my pleasure!I just need the ok.

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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 11:45 AM

Sure that would be awesome! Thanks!Hm, I didn't expect anyone at all to reply to my comics, thanks guys!
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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 04:35 PM

I'll make you a new banner with those sprites ^_^
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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 08:56 PM

Thanks Kodrak!Sorry for the delay in posting the comic, I'm having some computer issues right now. :(
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Posted Feb 11 2012 - 09:55 PM

Thanks Kodrak!Sorry for the delay in posting the comic, I'm having some computer issues right now. :(

I -think- I know how you feel. I run on a dell laptop, which has a bad battery and a transformer so damaged so that together, I can't take it anywhere. Also, my computer shuts off randomly.

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Posted Feb 12 2012 - 02:13 AM

My MacBook Pro's battery isn't as nice as I want it to be, only 2-3 hours off charge.On topic, let me know if you need any help software wise. I can hook you up ^_^
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Posted Feb 14 2012 - 08:32 AM

Sure that would be awesome! Thanks!Hm, I didn't expect anyone at all to reply to my comics, thanks guys!

Kay, I think I'll have the sprites cleaned on wednesday (or maybe sooner ^^)EDIT: Heads up! I've finished with the body already:Body sprites.Next up: Masks ^^

Edited by Tattorack, Feb 14 2012 - 10:26 AM.

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Posted Feb 14 2012 - 10:43 AM

0.0Gravity, you are sooo lucky to have him spriting... You could pull off an MNOLG comic with those!
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Posted Feb 14 2012 - 11:34 AM

I'ma pass out now, OK?BTW Almost done with new comic, expect it tomarrow. (Or if you feel lucky, today)
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Posted Feb 14 2012 - 11:39 AM

"Top class service, it really is."I feel lucky! *maybe*
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Posted Feb 14 2012 - 11:54 AM

Awesome sprites. Any program you recomend that I use in order to color/make them?
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Posted Feb 14 2012 - 12:12 PM

I'ma pass out now, OK?

I'll take that as a compliment...

Awesome sprites. Any program you recomend that I use in order to color/make them?

Well... I used Gimp to color and esemble the headless body over there, but since you don't have an all too good workin pc...Any program that has the ability to make layers should work.As far as color goes; I just used the bucket filler of Gimp, wich is the same as the one of MSPaint.EDIT:What mask is Hokti? I've finished drawing all the original 2001 masks (of wich I've cleaned the ones that I can recoginise),but I can't seem to recognise Hokti's mask...http://fc00.devianta...ack-d4ptc8b.png

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Posted Feb 16 2012 - 09:04 AM

Awesome comics, I like the small number of characters. Their personalities bring a lot of unique hilarious situations. The simplicity of the comics make it even better. Can't wait to see more.~Soran
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Posted Feb 16 2012 - 09:08 AM

Hokti has the Huna, Vakama's mask. I just dual colored it.

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